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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

@IshqHaiWoEhsaas

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Lashy di, I had replied to every word in your comment, but it got deleted. 😭 Will reply to you and all tomorrow.

Also, I don't know how many of you noticed this, but while saying, "Kyunki woh sab Shehensha ki Begum hi thin aur rahengi Jodha Begum...Apne shauhar ki biwi kabhi nahi ban sakengi...", Jalal speaks in Urdu and not in Marwari. This symbolizes that this line is no pretense, no fun, it is something Jalal is saying to Jodha and not the Seth Ji to Sethani Sa.

Edited by -AkDha.Lover- - 9 years ago

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-
Lashy di, I had replied to every word in your comment, but it got deleted. 😭 Will reply to you and all tomorrow.

Also, I don't know how many of you noticed this, but while saying, "Kyunki woh sab Shehensha ki Begum hi thin aur rahengi Jodha Begum...Apne shauhar ki biwi kabhi nahi ban sakengi...", Jalal speaks in Urdu and not in Marwari. This symbolizes that this line is no pretense, no fun, it is something Jalal is saying to Jodha and not the Seth Ji to Sethani Sa.

I did

Btw, even before I read your description of his emotions, I'd imagined how RT would have said it 😉 and our imaginations synced to a T!

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TANYA

@tanyaraglak

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Wow shagu

It was awesome os

Super duper hit

You always bring smile on my face through your stories

The way uhh expressed their feelings was beyond words

The conversation in marwadi was super

I think uhh know marwari

That line was my fav

They all r king 's wives but they could never become their husband's wives

The last lone was like icing on the cake

That night, neither of them could sleep. But then, an unusual and revealing night like this one deserves some pondering over

I just loved it

Your writing style is marvelous

I wish uhh were the scrip writer of ja

Overall it was superb

Edited by tanyaraglak - 9 years ago

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Superb OS dear
loved it
beautifully wriitten ... loved all conversation b/w jajo specially in marwari style ...

thnks for pm

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Shinchan_20

@Shinchan_20

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Awww that was really lovely shagu 😊
i loved akdha's conversation in marwari accent..
Thanku for pm

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Hemaxi

@Rajat_loverr

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

SORRY FOR LATE REPLY DEAR
It id really a lovely os love it 👏
SPECIALY LOVE THE CONVERERSATION BETWEEN AKDHA 😳

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Hemaxi

@Rajat_loverr

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Rajat_loverr
SORRY FOR LATE REPLY DEAR
It id really a lovely os love it 👏
SPECIALY LOVE THE CONVERERSATION BETWEEN AKDHA 😳

THANKU SO MUCH FOR PM

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Lovely os, shagun..❤️

Like the way you wrote about jalal's expression when he caught jo drooling over him..

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ketaki1

@ketaki1

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Beautiful...
you are an excellent writer...
you really have your hands fixed on historical writing and I love it...
os is really beautiful, you took a scene from the story and gave it a twist...
and end confession was unpredictable...I like surprises ...
loved it dear!!!!!!!!!!
love you🤗❤️

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harshal

@harshu27

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

lovely os shagun... 😛 it was a cute one...actually while reading I recalled sikri track... 😛 jo in simple blue attire and jallu in typical marwadi get up speaking marwadi lang... 😆 😉 looks like u were thinking about sikri track while writing this os... 😆 😉 njoyed reading... 😃