AkDha OS : That Moment! - Page 2

Omg... Shagun... Love U🤗... My fav track😳... U have reminded me of those beautiful days. When this track was coming to end I was inclined and crazy I put my story aside and began to write on prediction shots of this story. Best track.

My dear cutie pie😛... U seriously bloomed same feeling once again through your writing and Marwari touch is like sone pe suhaga'.

Does he really care for me? Do I really mean something to him? Or...was it only out of guilt?

If he really ever cared for her, would he insult her the way he had been doing all last month? No!

Interesting view on Jodha's side...

An unusually long silence prevailed between the two of them. But the silence was only limited to the tongue, the eyes never failed to express how delighted they were to feel each other's presence after so long!

Superbly written Shagun. You know what make that scene best... Silence... there was no need to talk... both of them are skilled actors... their eyes perfectly displayed what viewers wanted to see. Shagun... My dear cutie pie... U seriously bloomed same feeling once again through your writing and Marwari touch is like sone pe suhagg'.

"Haan...bohot shaanti milti hai chandrama ko dekh kar..." ( Yes, it gives me immense peace to look at it!) Jodha began in a low voice.

"Tab toh lagta hai aapko kaafi shaanti mil chuki hai, chaliye baithkar baat karte hain ab!" ( It seems you've already got a lot of peace, let's sit and talk! )Jalal replied in his usual fun way, his eyes never leaving hers.

I felt watching moon... felt symbolic... finally after a horrendous storm finally peace is on his way to gratify the couple...

Grasping what exactly was going on in her mind, he continued, " Itna toh hum aapko jaan hi gaye hain Jodha Begum! Aur fir woh Baaghin hi kya, jo zidd na kare, hai na?!" ( I know you this much at least, Jodha Begum. And then again, what's a tigress who isn't stubborn?) He waited for a response, that innocent look perfectly placed on his face.

I can't put not finger why I loved this simple line may be the way Jalal teased her. He was just jesting but the sentiments of love overwhelmed my emotions.

But the response never came. In place of an answer, a slight smile slowly spread across Jodha's face, turning into a giggle as he joined in.

As he paused for a while to have an intent look at her, Jalal realized how much he had missed this carefree chuckle of Jodha. And now when this smiling girl was back, he would make sure she never vanishes again!

"To iss baar aapke kehne se pehle hi humne aapki zidd maan li hai, par iska matlab ye nahi ki aap apna dhyaan na rakhein aur humein apni bahaduri dikhayein. Hum apne saath aapki saari dawayein lekar jayenge, samajh gayi aap?" ( So this time I have agreed to your demand even before you asked for it, but that doesn't mean you don't care for yourself and act brave. We'll take all your medicines along with us, okay?) To this, Jodha agreed like an obedient student.

Jalal smiled a little at her, and said, " Humein kal hi nikalna hai, toh ab aap aaraam farmaiye. Shabba Khair, Jodha Begum!" ( We have to leave tomorrow, you take rest. Good Night, Jodha Begum!)

At the exit, he turned back again, perhaps to collect the smile which she hadn't returned. (Dreamy) And as if involuntarily, she smiled as soon as her eyes met his, making Jalal smile wider!

As he left the room, feeling more elated than he had expected to, she sunk in the couch...thinking of what magic this man does to her.

This couple is really adorable😳... NO one can beat... Oh God.. U perfectly captured me in this OS... Shangun... I am reliving the moments... Love U😊...

Adjusting the veil of the simple commoner's dress that Jalal had sent for her, Jodha looked at herself in the mirror. The dark blue of the dress was a wonderful contrast to her milky white skin.

Being a royal by birth, she wasn't used to the sight in front of her. Almost all the time, she had those heavy neckpieces and other jewels all over her. It was on those rare occasions like this one that she realized the fact that beauty lies in simplicity.

And it wasn't entirely about beauty alone, it was about the inner calmness that came along with simplicity. She felt lighter today, for the burden of royalty was now off her shoulders, even though for a short while.

Her ears registered the announcement of his arrival, and she stood up to see him.

There he was, sure enough, looking even more charming as a typical, chubby Marwari. She couldn't help but smile at her man.

Rajat did looked like golguppa🤣 in this dress... Blue dress... hehehe

Catching her looking at him, Jalal instantly looked down for a moment. It was'nt less than a treat for him to see his very own Jodha Begum drooling over him! A slight blush and a tiny smile...any onlooker would describe his face this way!

Loved the way U pick every emotions of Rajat🤗 ... so perfect ... this how exactly our Rajat acted and smiled.

"Aaj toh mhaare bhartaar bhi kuchh kam saje dhaje na laag re...Kahin ghoomne ja rahe ho ke?" (Today even my husband looks quite good, you are going somewhere or what?) A grin spread across her face as said.

Awww. So cute...😛

This statement of Jodha made Jalal stop walking. He paused where he was and turned to look at her. Looking straight into those honey-colored eyes, he said, " Kyunki woh sab humesha Shehenshah ki Begum hi thin aur rahengi Jodha Begum...kabhi apne shauhar ki biwi nahi ban saktin..." ( Because they are all the King's queens Jodha Begum...they would never be their husband's wife...)

This line evolved around entire serial... other than Jodha no one else were able to become his wife...

"Pehle aap let jao Sethani Sa...itni yaatra karke aayi ho...thaak gi hogi..." ( First you take rest, Jodha Begum...you have been through such a long trip, must be tired...) Jalal said with concern reflecting in his eyes.

How caring... Awww.. I am in love with this Jalal.

"Arrey na na Seth Ji...itna bhi na chaali se main...pehla aap vishraam kar lo, aap bhi toh thaak ge hoge na..." ( No Shehenshah...I haven't walked that much...you come rest first, you must be tired too...) She replied calmly, with no sign of the long walk's effect on her face.

I am glad... At least you have shown both loves equally...😃

Realizing that the lady was still waiting for an answer, Jalal slowly looked up to her smiling face, and replied, " Ji Bilkul Sa...Main aur mhaari Gharaali ek duje se Ghana prem karein hain, kyun Sethani sa?" ( Yes...We do love each other a lot, right Jodha Begum?)

Jodha instantly looked up at Jalal, not able to believe what he had just so casually said!

Did he just say...?!!

Confession wow Shagun...

Jalal's voice brought her back again. " Ke huvo Sethani Sa, Manne kuchh galat bol diyo ke?" ( What happened Jodha Begum, did I say something wrong?)

Hehehe... sounds so cute...

She just kept on staring at him, while words escaped on their own. " Na Na Seth Ji, Aapne bilkul chokhi baat kahi se..." ( No, Shehenshah...you said it perfectly right...) Now looking him straight in his eyes, she said, " Hun Bhi Apne Bhartaar se Ghana prem karun chhoon..." ( I too love my husband a lot...)

A long pause again, perhaps longer than ever before, with both of them lost somewhere in each other's glimmering eyes.

So sweet ... Jodha also confess... seriously.. am I dreaming... heheheh

Shagun...👏👏👏 Master piece👏