Chapter 40 Is It Hate OR Love - Page 22

Originally posted by: thermo

I'm so happy. Thank you loads Di! Amazing Update!

Thank U Cathrine for the commenting so quickly and first... UR comment release my worries🤗

I'm actually out of words to describe how wonderfully written it was! I'm so happy that you gave Shivani-Mirza track a space in this chapter.

I wasn't sure how readers will react to giving so much space to Shivani and Mirza in the chapter but glad everyone seemed to like it.😃

It was awesome. Don't know how Mirza and Shivani will react to the marriage proposal. I hope it's not too sad track.

It will be tough for Shivani and Mirza for sure...😕

The political parts and discussions have been described so smoothly and naturally.

This was another piece I wasn't sure how readers will react to...but after reading so many historical stories I decided to show Akbar's political side as well. Glad U didn't complain😆

Bechara Jalal, he has no time of his own. AkDha romance part was speechless. Especially Jalal's dialogues... hayyee!;-) Hope they get a happy-happy track after so much of separation and problems.

Let's hope for happiness... 😳

Rukaiya is getting a problem unknowingly though. Hope it gets sorted out easily and quickly. Also I hope these political matters get solved smoothly without any unwilling compromises or wars.

U want no problems then how will i continue😆

Sukanya has become so dreamy and happy, I wish near future doesn't bring problems to her.

Poor Girl has suffered entire life... Let's see where her fate takes her to.

Overall, chapter was beyond mindblowing.

😳😳😳 Thanks feels my hard work has paid off

Please don't stop writing Di! I have two requests by the way... hehe! One, give some happy chapters abhi, thoda time do AkDha ko toh face problems again.

Sure UR request granted... but thoda tadpana toh banta hai😆 since they have met again... i have given romance hi romance... hehehe

And Two, Please Please Please give regular updates! Small update, for example one part is also okay!

Sure my dear... UR request granted😳

It's at least better than waiting impatiently to read the next update! Thank you and love you Di! You've got a flair for writing! Selection of words, emotions is just marvellous! *Hats off* 😛 👏

Wow... Thank U 🤗

Originally posted by: ..Prii1994..

It was truly a marvelous update di... 👏

Thank U so much Prii😃

Since so long we gave been waiting to hear from you about this fiction again... 😊

And I tell you, it was no less than a Jhatka to see a long long update once again after so long... 😆

I am glad U enjoyed this Jhatka😉

I was like OMG!!!! Itna bada update... [:O]

My jaw hangout scrolling the whole page...

See after waiting for long If I give small update reader will complain instead commenting on chapter😆

Ok, now enough hgh of my banters...

Coming to the update, it was fantabulous... 🥳

Thank U 😳

I loved each and every part, but what attracted me the most was Shivani amd Mirza track... 😉

Their start was so cute and adorable...

I was all lala seeing their hot and passionate moment... 😳

But then the way they faught again was so funny!!!!

We have heard about Chat Mangani, Pat Bhyaah... But this Chat Confession and Pat Break up was a Bang On... 😆

Heheheh... U know... I didn't wanted to drag on Shivani and Mirza too long... and what I wanted to show is Shivani act like teenage... No doubt she loves him but still in fairyland... she doesn't understand the reality of the life. She just want him nearby all the time ... somewhat childish.

Political Track was indeed a Master Piece... 🤗

Jalal's long foreseen ability and his political tactics were Mind blowing... You wonderfully proved how Brilliant he was in his role of Shahenshah of Hindustan!!!! 😊

I am so glad U enjoyed this scene as well. Through out the story my focus was on how Jalal and Jodha's relation grew but never showed true political side of him. No doubt i showed how he changed from cruel to humble but never showed his political sense... for that Akbar was popular.

And last but not the least, JoJa's hot, passionate moment...

My God!!! It was a Killer one...

I was like, God!!! This one should never end... 😉

Jodha and seduction, it's gonnu be a killer combination... 🤣

I want you to give us some really hot and sizzling chemistry btw the all three couples soon...

All Three😆 SR

LOVE YOU DI... ❤️

You are such a DARLING!!!!

LOVE U MY SWEET HEART🤗