superb chapter di
after long wait you finally update
you comeback with so long update, I really really appreciate your hard work di
my god in this chapter you write so many things,
how will you manage??
love the talk between sukanya and jodha
sukanya is so happy, finally after many wait she feels good
and shivani I really don't understand her state of mind
in one movement she behave like mature and in next movement she behave like child,
I agree she is teenage girl ,
Mirza I really like him in this chapter, and I respect him for not crossing his line with shivani, how he control his desire i appreciate for that,
he really love shivani but he hurt at last with shivani words,
poor jalal in his wedding day he have to control all situation
as a king he did tremendous job, he has to take care all the problem,
uff this pratap why he want to attack in that time,
but love the way jalal handle all political issue along with to take care family issues also,
but I really afraid how Mirza react after know that jalal fixed his marriage with other rajkumari , jodha and shivani also.
I hope jodha understand jalal situation,
moti is indeed very good friend of jodha , love the way she guide jodha to seduce jalal,
uff mainavati also want jodha to seduce jalal,
as a mother she is also right in her place,
Di you write so beautifully jodha and jalal scene,
poor jodha she is so shock to see jalal there,
jodha felling insecure but as a queen she is also right to feel insecure ,
and I appreciate jalal also to control his desire ,
how much he desire jodha but he control himself to respect jodha decision,
bhavini di I am saying once more that I really appreciate your hard work you put in this story. such a long chapter di
di this is my first comment in this so I am saying that I am not good in words and grammar so please don't mind me if I went wrong.
why you say you stop this story in next two chapter. this is such a beautiful historical story and because of this story many friends join forum and Facebook so please don't stop this story I really like this story so please
and thank you so much for PM Di
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