Chapter 40 Is It Hate OR Love - Page 23

Originally posted by: alffim

Sorry! I'm writing isn't reading other replies.

Love U Zhanna... What an amazing review... I read few times😃


It was wonderful!!! My weekend time is less than on weekdays, unfortunately.

I understand but still you spare time and commented. Such a sweetheart😳

I will write later, but for now only in telegraphic style.

I am waiting for more... but even this brought lots of smile on my face😛

Frankly, I wanted a "lot" of Jalal and Jodha,

(Everyone felt the same😆 but last chapter was entirely Jodha and Jalal so to balanced it I cut down their scene.)

but the line of Mirza and Shivani was very interesting and very psychologically right. Shivani totally inexperienced in the physiological relationship between a man and a woman and that's why she provokes of Mirza.

You understand so well human psychology. She is too young... Just a teen and fall in love... Not understanding the depth of the love. Slowly she will realize when she will face the problem.

How old is Mirza?

I have not thought about that😆 about 20. two years younger than Jalal.

What a sad reality - he is so young and have a harem of 100 concubines?

I agree... It was sad time... I can't even imagine poor women... how painful was for them. I don't blame them if they betray and go to another man to fulfill their physical needs.

And your "political" line is very interesting! Your Jalal completely confirms his name as Akbar not only his the reforms, but also as a visionary strategist and political. Principle: "divide et impera (divide and rule)" he makes in practice.

Well said😃 Divide and Rule... I didn't realize while writing Jalal was using this policy😆 but so glad to read... Thank U so much😳


It was and it will be interesting to read for me, but don't keep your updates, please!!!😊

I will try to update fast

Already in the 39th chapter, you have written an absolutely new character of Jalal. And in this chapter, it is very interesting, Jalal has grown not only as a politician, but as a man.

Actually, in last two chapters, I had thought a lot before writing... I prepared a plot and wrote chapters. I am glad u notice my hard work and seeing the change in my writing and even in Jalal😆

Went away unstable hysteria, Jodha's happiness for him in the first place, his desire - later. His love for Jodha became "matured, grown up". For Jalal it doesn't matter how she is dressed, undressed (no, he would like to do both 😛), but his love - is constant value (vital importance).

His for her is unfathomable... growing deeper and deeper. Lucky Jodha😆

But feelings of Jodha, in spite of her love for Jalal, a very immature. I think, she still doesn't trust him on the present.

See in Jodha situation... Jalal has so many begums and she herself thinks that she has failed to please him in the bed. She kept distant from him, just because she feels shy to love him openly. When Jalal mentioned in (last chapter) he feels even after they physically apart. He is also sensed her hitch... Some women are shy in bed, and Jodha is one of them... from their first night I have shown her hesitant when it comes to sensual, she even tries while sword fight to seduce him but when she was unable to reveal her dress in front of him and her shyness make him crazy for her...

That's right, when woman want tries to please loved one, but Jodha thinks she needs it "seduce"? Or is it her "confusing" Moti and Maynavati? Well, in the words about Rukaya she heard only that Rukaya "tried seduce" for Jalal, but she didn't heard that Jalal said that he wanted for her to be happy.

Here... Jodha wants to please him and make him happy sensually like his other queens but she failed to understand that Jalal loves her the way she is... Just to please himself in the bed he has many women but his one confession... When love mingles with sensual passion becomes pleasurable... And no one can please her other than her.

She is not immature but little bit unsecured because she also felt somewhat she was wrong without discussing she came back to Amer.. to remarry and kept a physical distance from him.

Thank U for such lovely comment😃