Chapter 40 Is It Hate OR Love - Page 18

No offense...Your narration when it comes to romance is always superb. The writing style is something peculiar that I rarely found in eminent writers of nowadays. No wonder your story holds my loved titles amongst all our's.It is classic, imaginative,seductive and hot..Keep your great work Bhaviniji..We're waiting for next chapter impatiently

Congratulations for your new thread by the way

Originally posted by: Swissgerman

No offense...Your narration when it comes to romance is always superb. The writing style is something peculiar that I rarely found in eminent writers of nowadays. No wonder your story holds my loved titles amongst all our's.It is classic, imaginative,seductive and hot..Keep your great work Bhaviniji..We're waiting for next chapter impatiently

Omg... MY fav writer comment... I am speechless... Thanks... This comment holds so much value i can't express in words. 😃

im fan of ur wrtng..

Sorry! I'm writing isn't reading other replies.
It was wonderful!!! My weekend time is less than on weekdays, unfortunately.
I will write later, but for now only in telegraphic style.
Frankly, I wanted a "lot" of Jalal and Jodha, but the line of Mirza and Shivani was very interesting and very psychologically right. Shivani totally inexperienced in the physiological relationship between a man and a woman and that's why she provokes of Mirza.. How old is Mirza? What a sad reality - he is so young and have a harem of 100 concubines?

And your "political" line is very interesting! Your Jalal completely confirms his name as Akbar not only his the reforms, but also as a visionary strategist and political. Principle: "divide et impera (divide and rule)" he makes in practice.
It was and it will be interesting to read for me, but don't keep your updates, please!!!😊

Already in the 39th chapter, you have written an absolutely new character of Jalal. And in this chapter, it is very interesting, Jalal has grown not only as a politician, but as a man. Went away unstable hysteria, Jodha's happiness for him in the first place, his desire - later. His love for Jodha became "matured, grown up". For Jalal it doesn't matter how she is dressed, undressed (no, he would like to do both 😛), but his love - is constant value (vital importance).
But feelings of Jodha, in spite of her love for Jalal, a very immature. I think, she still doesn't trust him on the present. That's right, when woman want tries to please loved one, but Jodha thinks she needs it "seduce"? Or is it her "confusing" Moti and Maynavati? Well, in the words about Rukaya she heard only that Rukaya "tried seduce" for Jalal, but she didn't heard that Jalal said that he wanted for her to be happy.

Fabulous chapter di n thnxx for pm n pls continue ur story di

hahahhaaam..Amazing update...but yaar. ye kya hua...shit...mirza and shivani...oh no...jalal jodha is gonna kill u...

Thank you for an amazing update. Pls dont make us wait long for the next beautiful update.😳

Originally posted by: Mavaddat

bhavi di ...
u r really a great, love u a loads di
I have read akdha part that was sensual will read whole chappy after 4 July after the exams, wish me good luck di, n I hope till then you will update next chapter too...
thanks for updating di love you again and Congo for new thread

Good Luck my dear... My best wishes and hopes that U achieve the goal you intend for.😃

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