FIRST DATE ???? - Page 4

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

If lawyer is like Jodha who will go near her

Who is that much daring to do except our Jalal

Only he can tame her

N only she can tame him

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#003300">Hey, Madhu... Congratulations... and best wishes on your new journey of writing... Hope U enjoy writing and get lots of success😃Keep writing and giving us amazing OS like this.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#003300">Thank you for the pm. Loved the first date...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#003300">I enjoyed throughout... how interestinglyyou portrait the couple playing hide and seek and taking the advantage of small of time they have for each other. From beginning to end I felt you have thought through entire os... At first, you made us think he was flirting with her... even though u have given hint no one mess around with her. at that point, I doubted Jalal either the man either boyfriend or husband. Loved the romantic getaway. very well written👏</font>