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This is my first attempt to write something
Suggestions accepted
Plz ignore grammar and spelling mistakes I m very poor in English
Plz give suggestion if I did any mistakes

Thank you😊



Marriage hall,

Groom and bride is sitting in mandap. Padit ji chanting mantras. Family members r happy and enjoying every ritual of marriage. And other ppl like frnds and relatives r chatting.

Not so far in one chair one lady around 23-24 year old is sitting alone. Looking beautiful in yellow color anarkali dress. Looking like angel came on earth from heaven. Everymen in hall steeling glance and enjoying her beauty in fantasy. But no one has guts to go near her and talk bcz everyone know if they do anything wrong with her then they r in big trouble.

Lady look around the hall and see everyone glancing at her. And automatically small smirk come on her lip. She come here in her friend wedding.

After some min one handsome man around 24-25 years old enter in hall. He is wearing directly go towards mandap and congratulate bride and groom. And start talking with brides father. Suddenly his eyes catch view of that beautiful lady in yellow. Like other man he also fall for her beauty. He excuse himself and start walking towards that lady.

But lady stand up and walk towards water jugs. Man also start to fallow her and come near water jugs and pretend to drink water. Lady notice that and smirk. She goes from their come near her friend( bride ) and start to talking with her man also come near groom and just stand there. Again that lady notice this and this time beautiful smile come on her face. Seeing this man again fall for her.
Lady excuse herself and go towards chair and sit. Man also come and sit near her after leaving space of 1 chair. After sometime man stand up and come near her and sit exactly beside her. Seeing this lady smirk and say, " their is two types of man in this world 1. Who see beautiful woman and directly come to her and say about his feelings. 2. Who follow that beautiful woman or stalk with her but do not have guts to say something to that wonan and I like 1st type man."

After hear this man just smirk little and say, " so u like that kind of man. But I m 3rd type of man. "

W, " third type? "

M, " third type who like silent treatment of love. "

W, " love ? "

M, " yes love. Their is also 2 types of woman in world 1 who directly says yes or no 2 who like that man run behind her for her ans and I like 1st type of woman ".

Their is silent between them for sometime both r staring at eachother.
Some man- woman see this scene and fill jealous.

After staring season,
Man ask ," so yes or no ? "

W, " for what ? "

M , " see beautiful lady outsaid its time for sunset and also its raining slowly slowly it's great weather for romantic long drive
So say yes or no ? "

Lady chukle slowly hearing that and say yes.

Man stand up proudly and offer hand. Lady shyly give her hand in his hand. As their skin come in contact with each other shiver run threw their spine.

They both slowly go towards dor and soon disappear from eyesight of ppl in marriage hall.

After some time,

Near a beautiful fall man stop car and come out of car . lady also get down from car and stand near fall. Enjoying veiw and remembering their beautiful yet silent long drive and staring season.

Slowly slowly rain get faster. Man slide his hand in her waits and pull her towards him. Lady just put her head on his shoulder and enjoy beautiful view of fall.

After sometime man turns lady towards him and see in her kohl balck eyes for sometime. Then he just come near her and stops just each away from her soft beautiful pink lips. And see in her eyes for approval. Lady part her lips and give him approval. Man just touch her soft delicate lip with his lips. And suck her lower lip after some time lady slid her hands in his thik hair. And start to respond him. Slowly slowly their sweet kiss turn into passionate lip lock.

Bcz of lack of air they stop their lip lock and stare in each other eyes. Lady just smile shyly looking in his eyes. And start to giggle loudly and play in rain. Man just watch this beautiful scene. Bcz of rain her dress stick with her skin and expos her beautiful curved body. Passion created in man's body and hold lady from back. And hug her tightly from back. Lady turn towards him and says that let go to nearest hotel. Man nods and sit in car.

Next morning,

Its beautiful morning in masoori sun light come in room and disturb man's sleep in his lady love arms. Man slowly open his eyes and see that her beautiful wife peacefully sleeping in his arms hiding her face in his chest.

Slowly slowly lady open her eyes and show that her handsom hubby is staring at her nacked body.

And she recall all yesterday memory and finally their passionate love making.

W, " good mrng , Mr . mahhomad ."
M, " good mrng , Lawyer sahiba ."
W, " so how is this new experience of dat."
M, " amazing hmm my wife is smart."

Lady giggle loudly and says,
" I LOVE U JALAL"

Jalal,
" LOVE U TOO JODHA"

THEY AGAIN LOST IN THEIR SEC PASSIONATE LOVE MAKING.

Jodha and jalal married 6 month ago
Jodha is famous lawyer
And jalal is famous business man in world.
Since they both r busy in their work they can't find time to spend with each other .
So whenever they find time they spend time like this.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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unress
congrats fr yr 1st os dear
wow
superb os
everyone spell to see jodha
JJ married
both behaving like strangers n enjoying it to fullest. . .

write more os like this in future
eagerly waiting fr new one.
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yipeee me 1st after a long time
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yaaay second
congrs for ur first ff
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Beautiful os dear...
I thought same dear that jodha jalal ki wife hogi...
Congrats dear for first os dear... 👏 and u wrote very well dear...
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beautiful os dear
the story is so differnt
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lovely os dear
please write in future also
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Originally posted by: harsh_kaur

unress
congrats fr yr 1st os dear
wow
superb os
everyone spell to see jodha
JJ married
both behaving like strangers n enjoying it to fullest. . .

write more os like this in future
eagerly waiting fr new one.


THANK YOU SOOO MUCH

I will suerly write more os
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Originally posted by: binduprasad41

lovely os dear
please write in future also


Thank uuu so much for reply

I will surely write
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Originally posted by: sho123

yaaay second
congrs for ur first ff



Thnkuuu so much
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