NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ Thread 3- CHAPTERS 5 & 6 - Page 6

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Hi Lashy di, Manu di, Kal di and Namu...🤗

Originally posted by: lashy

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Hi Lashy di, Manu di, Kal di and Namu...🤗

Originally posted by: 155pari

shagun!🤗

@ manasi dii i'm superb, like always...😉

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

hello

Originally posted by: lashy

@ Stuti

As usual, super-duper mind-blowing update!⭐️⭐️⭐️ And the new mysterious character is undoubtedly the most fascinating one till date!😃 Most fascinating? REALLY?

Yoo!😆😳

Well from where should I start from! 😆 Okay, first the whole description of the journey... it was just perfectly captured through the lens of your vast imagination, and your amazing style of writing makes us to relish the slide-show of those pictures in front of our eyes... and we get completely lost in that era. The most intriguing part is the shifting of the heiress with her maid for safety reason! I had read in a novel (That too was of the same time-period, when the Mughal Empire has just started to be worn out) about the interchanging the queen and the just-born heir with her maid and another little baby to protect them from the grab of Mughal's. Don't know why I recalled the same here.

Yes its true... esp in the case of a person whose life is in danger... and whose life decides the fate of an entire town! Thank you so much Stuti

Yes, this type of ideas were very common those days... and sad tale is none even knows about the lakhs of poor common peoples who were ready to sacrifice their life for the safety of their lords!

Yours most welcome.😳

I like Bindiya 😛 She is so funny!😆😆😆

I thought she wouldn't be liked, actually... but glad to know you do... Shagun said something similar...

She is a comic-relief...I also liked the way she was conscious with the dress of Heera 😆

Why they chose Bindiya, the short-tempered one, instead of sensitive Gauri or Dhani? 😕

The first meeting with the stranger is quite a unique one. From first to last he was consistent in his distinct attitude- which is actually the killer one☺️ Wow!! He is firm, determined and extremely unique... like he has a x-factor in his whole presence which attracts like magnet. ⭐️

X-Factor... I like that... I guess he has the mystery element going for him... that coupled with the fact that for a change, he is not the one falling latoo head over heels love at first sight with the girl... somehow that quality is a luring factor (at least, for me!)

For me the most attracting part is his mysterious part... Can't wait to know who actually he is!😲 Abandoned prince or something like that kya?😕😆😆

Reveal him ASAP!!😡😆

The water-part has been crafted greatly, and it shows a contrast between the mentality of Heera and the stranger... Where Heera is full of natural motherhood, she is so kind and caring to each and every soul, and is ready anytime to give away the water of her part (just a very very very minor example from her act of kindness!), the stranger is not even ready to give a drop of water without taking his rightful payment; and he is decently firm throughout till he is given the price... it shows that he is never compromising when it comes to own right; and both of their natures are opposite and strong in their point- when they will blend with each other they will make a volcano!

I never realised this part could be studied/compared thus... but, you've made a good example! Enjoyed reading it... thoroughly...

Glad to know that you liked it.😃

I would like to quote the line I loved most in the conversation...

"'I hope you realise that even Amrit would have cost us less, Sahib!' the heiress stated, using sarcasm to express her disapproval

'Of course, it would Sahiba! Because water is more precious than nectar...'

My favourite too!☺️

And I just loved the way you differentiated Heera's regal gesture from the common girl in front of the stranger... The stranger briefly observed the wooden palanquin from where the fresh voice was echoing - aware that this voice sounded far more fluent and polished than the one that'd echoed from the regal carriage! 😳

Thank you... it must have strange for him that a lady in a regal palanquin spoke not-so-regally...

Yeah! She is too much quarreling! Ohhh who selected her to act Heera?😡

The exit of the stranger was ufff! He is so mysterious! Who is he? What does he do? What is his name?[Jalal here at least I hope😆] I want to know him...☺️

AWww

Bolo na...😳😳😳

Heera is such a gem! A Heera indeed as her jiji had said once... Her kind and compassionate nature makes her great. The way she was treating the peoples around her with so much affection! Beautiful! She may not be a gallant warrior like her Jiji, but she is a savior! She knows to protect all under her shelter!😳

Yes!😃

But the best part of this update is undoubtedly the last portion- the canal bank!

I was fully spellbound with the description of the ambiance. It was like a sad song... a poetry... as if the nature was shedding tears with the dejected lone young girl...😭😭😭 Love you diii!!🤗

How beautiful!😊 Loved the allegory...

My pleasure Dii

The stranger came as a rescuer and the protector! Just awesome!😎 This one was sheer romantic❤️ ☺️

It was a question he was meant to ask a few moments ago, but for some strange reason 'Hazel' were the first words that came to his mind. Hazel - the colour of her eyes. Blacks, he'd seen. Blues and greens he'd seen. Even browns he'd seen. But such an exquisite tint of hazel, he had not.

So beautiful!!

THAT was your favourite? Not the one before that?😉

That one was too much splendid... needless to mention.😆😆😆 Actually the whole part was fantabulous!!!!! I was confused about what to quote and what not.😳

Can't wait for the next update!And dying to read how they will fall in love...😳

Thanks Stuti.. you made my day... 🤗

So happy to make you happy! 🤗