NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ THREAD 2 - CHAPTERS 3 & 4

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Nancy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: lashy

Farmaan is safe?😕

Shit ! is it not? I thought the hiding place and the poem has to do something with Farmaan ! And that .. Durga tricked that sonofabitch !! If its really gone... 🥺 🥺

Edited by NJAPA_Addict - 9 years ago

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
Naaa... I don't want to say anything!!

(Thanks Manu for this emo)

This is is me as well! 😭😭😭

Okay, so Manu di is the official emo wala here! ⭐️😆😆

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Kalgi22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: NJAPA_Addict

Shit ! is it not? I thought the hiding place and the poem has to do something with Farmaan ! If it's really gone .. 🥺 🥺

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cutecc753

@cutecc753

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

congrats for your new thread. after returning home, I read your story first. Very emotional update. I become sad reading 1st portion . 😭😭😭 I can not wait long for next update. So update fast pleaseee. nd thanx for pm

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Barnali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

wow lashy di 😊
Superb chapter! Loved every bit of it 😊
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon...
Will be waiting for your PM :)

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Barnali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Nd I forgot! Congratulations on the 2nd thread :)))

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.AkDhian.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Lashy di,

I've read all the three chapters in one go🥳

Hats off to the writer in you for this different and intriguing tale👏👏.

I was lil surprised initially,since I expected this to be a love story of Akbar and Jodha.But my curiosity levels increased with the progress in story.

Durga and Harkha,both the characters are extremely inspiring.I relished every bit of all the three chapters.

The love of two sisters for each other,for their land and people is overwhelming and the amount of courage,determination and presence of mind exhibited by these teenagers is mind blowing.A big round of 👏👏 for shaping up their characters so well.

Its heart-wrenching to read how the fate played an ugly game and shattered the lives of the people of Parnagarh and its heiresses😭😭

I just want to kill the so called Shehzaada and the monster Khaleel😡😡

How could someone be so inhumane😡😭.I had to pause for a while after reading what happened to Durga,didn't expect this.I thought she would kill herself before his filthy hands are laid on the pure soul.I couldn't restrain my tears,di😭😭.

I've no words to express how proud I felt,reading the brave girl putting up a tough fight till the end.But can't even imagine her begging and pleading the devil.

Waiting for the revenge you've promised.

Your description of her thoughts,quick plans and actions..everything was flawless and her fearless nature reminded me of Rani Durgavati,about whom I read on Abhay's blog.

Harka has broken down emotionally with her beloved sister's demise😭.Glad that she still has those few loyal companions with her.

So,the HERO has made his entry,at the right time..whistle podu moment it is🥳😆.

Waiting eagerly for the next part.Thanks for the PM😊

Love you WRITER-E-KHAAS🤗

Edited by .AkDhian. - 9 years ago