NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ THREAD 2 - CHAPTERS 3 & 4 - Page 7

I don't think so Lashy di is planning something like that😆😉😆

to humara hero mil gaya😆😉

Hey Bhagwan! 😆

fantastic , fantabulous and what not😊 blending of many emotion at a time. there is many reason I love your writing . Here is the one with the use of some words you create the atmosphere and capture reader's mind .

With the first line you saw Durga a determined and confident .Ready to go on her mission. Who talk to her parents as every child at any age want their blessing and their faith on her. Poem was so meaningful. she aware of danger to her life she wants to take a glance of her sweet home and went to sweet and proud memory land.😛 Where we got picture of their peaceful life and harka,s ability and her thinking at the same time their father's wish, different personality of siblings and as she lost in her thought unawares of prince's fast and unexpected step to attack at haveli before she left for Agra. When she got little doubt of something wrong she lost all her loyal people and fear caught hold on her but very soon her clever mind work towards the use of small opportunity to save herself and got help from others and worrier prepare herself to fight if needed . Unfortunately she faces the worst. I hate Khalil, I understand his character as he is supporting prince against his father but his did with durga is a monster's act.😡 I feel the pain of a girl to lose her modesty, her helplessness, vulnerableness be it a worrier or common girl( like najpa's jo) who is unable to save herself in front of that monster. You successfully create the accurate scan of fear in that situation to lose everything which they try to keep safe till today. Its make me numb.

Last meeting of two sisters was heart wrenching.😭(in her drame)salute to Durga ⭐️not only for her bravery but after what she going through she motivated Harka with her ability. When she becomes emotional she reminds about danger and guide her how to get out of situation fulfill her responsibility.Durga'word feel like real. Like dedication and guidance of rattan kaka and mohan bana. Excellently describe stats of harka's mind , her readiness to

Stand by her people and maturity and calmness to understand the need of time. Entry of dominating stranger was marvelous.👏 Connecting to the reality as a needed help against attack and very effective.

Waiting for their interaction. 😊

Di farman gya to the prince...and when will that Durga bai's fiance will return usko msg mila ki nhi Wat happened to his love😭...I thought more sis bonding dikahoge😭...but Mr. Stranger and harka leads h na ...it gonna be revenge revenge r revenge lovestory 😆...

Di for all the three chappy👏

Atleast fb pe I was the first one to like and comment 😆

Di,a big 🤗for frequent updates😃