NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ THREAD 2 - CHAPTERS 3 & 4

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: lashy
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And it's also my inherent fear of Chellam 🤔 because I know what she's gonna say!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Kavya_P
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harshal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

m awed with ur write up as usual lashy ⭐️ really d 3rd chap was just marvelous... ⭐️ while reading it really gave me goose bumps... 😳 specially d durga fighting bravely with d Khalil... ⭐️ m totally left speechless as usual with ur writing...⭐️

she is truly a brave and true warrior who fought till d end...but I really felt sad for her I tght she would kill herself even before he touched her but no she dint do any such thing... 😭 but hats off fr her spirit d warrior spirit never dies is true... ⭐️ but then I think its d harsh truth for a woman belonging to any era caste creed royal or not she has always been exploited and used in all d walks of d society...even b it in d modern times...

and my confusion has increased more so it means dat khalil is not d lead coz d lead cant b such a terrible person... 😡 d lead will b d savior of all sply of heera... 😉 wish durga could have taken d noise from d kitchen as d indication of danger lingering around her...and d barking of dogs too was another warning

but I have another doubt 😆 what about d farman... I hope its in d safe hands...

and what to say about heera...she is truly a a diamond in d mine...after all ek jouhari hi heere ko pehchan sakta hai... 😳 and so whatever her guru had said for her was apt

'Anything she touches, blossoms... and anyone she treats, heals!' 👏 v true no doubt... 😃

Jiji ran around the Haveli, with her eyes opened wide

Every trick uncanny, she may have tried

Every nook and cranny, she may have spied

But never did she find me, because I know how to hide!
👏 wat a mesmerizing poem I was again awed by ur poetic skills too... ⭐️ 😳 and it showed durga's emotional bonding with her lil sis... as she recalled it just before her death

His reply was curt and his tone rang deeper than any voice she'd heard. In fact, she thought, if his personality was as dominant as his voice, there was little doubt that this man was the only reason, everyone had fled!

I was reading this part again and again which made me wonder kahi ye toh nahi...real hero of heera... 😉 hume intezaar rahega iss ke identity revelation ka if he is d lead... 😳 😆

overall hear touching update...will b waiting for ur next update... 😉

Edited by harshu27 - 9 years ago