Season1:Game Of Desire Chapter3 Updated on pg1 (10/8/2016)

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sunitha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#381

superb update payal nd very interesting beginning to da story 👏 God never imagined r read jodha in this kind of personality, such arrogance nd attitude 😆 but in contrary jalal seems very kind nd humble, but still have to wait for some more chapters to see their real characters. So plz update soon, cannot wait for long😉
da more intriguing part is da girl whose hands jalal was holding. don't tell me its ruk. If so, then also I'm eager to know her nd how things 'll be unfold 😳

Thank u for da pm dear nd update soon😊

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#382

Originally posted by: sonnet87
superb update payal nd very interesting beginning to da story 👏
>>> Sunitha 🤗 Thankyou so much dear😃

God never imagined r read jodha in this kind of personality, such arrogance nd attitude 😆 but in contrary jalal seems very kind nd humble, but still have to wait for some more chapters to see their real characters. So plz update soon, cannot wait for long😉
>>> I already wrote next chapter in diary. Will try to update soon dear!!😉

da more intriguing part is da girl whose hands jalal was holding. don't tell me its ruk. If so, then also I'm eager to know her nd how things 'll be unfold 😳
>>> In next chapter, you will get to know everything. It's a Simple story😛

Thank u for da pm dear nd update soon😊
>>> You're welcome dear😊

❤️

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Dani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#383

Awesome chappy Catty

wow. Jo rejected Jalal at the first and now she want him no matter what... hmmm bold yet stubborn young lady..

And Jalal.. I think he is be a nice guy in here 😆

Continue soon dear

And thanks a lot for the pm 😊

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#384

Originally posted by: erning_w
Awesome chappy Catty
>> Thanks dani😃

wow. Jo rejected Jalal at the first and now she want him no matter what... hmmm bold yet stubborn young lady..
>>> Indeed, a very Bold and stubborn Girl😉

And Jalal.. I think he is be a nice guy in here 😆
>>> For a change, he's very sensible and nice guy in this story of mine😆

Continue soon dear
And thanks a lot for the pm 😊
>>> You're welcome dear😊

❤️

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#385

Originally posted by: shahbhavini
waiting for update😳

U are asking for update 😲

I"ll try to update asap di!!😛

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#386

Chapter 2-Teaser Updated on page 1

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#387

Wait.. so Jalal WAS mesmerized by Jo? 😕

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priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#388

Nyc tzr dr
When u updatee

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shahbhavini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#389

Originally posted by: sharmacatty
Chapter 2-Teaser

Hands tucked in pockets, the charming man was standing near a bar. An arresting smile was playing on his lips rooting an unknown emotion inside her as fascinated, she gazed at him-her lips curled into a lopsided smile.
Enchanting writing... Her fixation begins

His face still holding a faint smile as he advanced towards her and she picked up a glass. Placing himself beside her,he looked at her whilst she sat straight before sipping her drink.
"what would you like to have?", fixing her eyes at the front she asked huskily.
Seems like he can read in her stance and expression that Jodha is fascinated by him.

As he was about to answer, she turned her face to him and his lips parted.

"Let me guess..", her eyes twinkled with mischief "..orange juice", raising a brow she asked. A beguiling smile erupted on her lips, illuminating her face.

Curly dark brown tresses falling on bare shoulders, milky white skin glinting in the dazzling light of the moon, captivating hazel eyes,tempting lips curved in an alluring smile!!

For a moment, the bewitched man was lost in her beauty as enthralled he scrutinized at her, beholding her beauty.
Jalal is also mesmerized by her beauty ... Interesting... hopes that Jodha

"One chivas regal", jalal heard one guest,standing behind him,resulting,he broke out of his mesmerizing stupor as stupefied,he blinked.
One Guest... he or she??? definitely... She...for Jalal... The way announced feels like is claiming him.

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