Season1:Game Of Desire Chapter3 Updated on pg1 (10/8/2016)

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#371

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399
Jalal k saath dusri ldki kon thi ?
Please don't tell tht she was ruks ! But i know u... Aap hmaari sunte hi kahaa ho...
Orr ye kya ... Itnu sa chptr ?

😆😆

Har baat me bas complain 😆

Love you ashu🤗

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#372

Originally posted by: mickeymini
Wonderful update yar
>>> Thankyou Monica😃

Why the duo father n son were smiling looking at each other when they Jo's name ???
>> They were just happy so exchanged glances😆

Jo seems to be a bit arrogant girl in your story
>>> She is Arrogant!!😛

And who the hell is holding jalal ???
Ur story is quite confusing yar
>>> I'll clear ur confusion in next chapter dear!!😊

Update soon
Who is that girl on bed with jalal in ur prolouge ??
Update soon
Don't delay
But b4 this update ur SS first yar
>>> Ohk boss!!😉

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#373

Originally posted by: Geetbaala
Wonderful update Payu..
Woah..Jo was bit jealous seeing the handsome holding other girl's hand.
Last lines were simply superb..
Tu mere ho..
Bas mere ho.
Overall enjoyed reading dear.

Thankyou so much Geet🤗

Glad u liked this chapter dear😃

Me too love that lines😛

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#374

Originally posted by: eshalli
awesome chappy dear I loved it
plzzz pm me

Thanks dear!!😊

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#375

Originally posted by: AkankshaENRIQUE
Ok di... Jyada shock hone ki jarurat nhi h... But maine chapter padh liya 😳 😆
>>> I was shocked akku😆

Awesome chapter di 👏
>>> Thankyou so much dear 🤗

Loved their first meeting 😳
Rashid loves his daughter so much 😃
>>> yeah.. he loves her alot. that's why she's so arrogant😆

But so small chapter di *pout*
>>> Aage se itna he update karunge taki tum padh k comment kardo😆

Update soon 😉
>>> Will Update soon😃

ND thanks for the pm 😊
>>> You're Welcome dear!!😊

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Sweetshruthi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#376

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Love you dear❤️

Lub u more payaliya🤗

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#377

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Lub u more payaliya🤗

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#378

Originally posted by: sorathsheikh
😃

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Shraddha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#379

Originally posted by: sharmacatty
Lashy😲😲😲
You read this chapter. I am amazed to see you here.😲😃 I really didn't expect you to read this story. Thankyou so so much 🤗🤗
It really means a lot😃

The thing is I am a very slow reader ... and I need a lot of time/concentration to read... plus, house and kids take up most of my time... which is why I never started reading FFs till I'd written about half of NJAPA...

Hence, its easier for me to read a new FF from start than it is for me to catch up with many chapters that I've missed out on ... now that you started it... I jumped at the opportunity...

I also have to apologize to the many who read my story (and simultaneously write their FFs) that I feel guilty for not being able to reciprocate in the same way... I'm slowly starting now.. will do one by one...

Such a dangerous (and arrogant) Jodha I have never seen nor heard of...😲.
>>> She is actually dangerous, For jalal😆
I can see that!😆

for a second, you totally made me forget the only kinda Jodha I know...😲 but such a delight to read something so different... 😉
>>> Because you haven't read "Beyond Innocence". Many had problem with jo's character in that story but I so love her and this jo too.😛😆 I am bored of her that "seedhi sadhi" character in serial and every other story here on if.😆
Hi-five... 😛

and I'm certain you must love typing it too...
>>> I was smirking writing last part.😆

Btw, Loved loved the way she calls her mom 'jazz'
>>> Really, glad to know that but.. jaya is her foster mother. I know all are thinking that she's her mom. This Chapter was short na.. In next chapter, all get to know that she's not her mother.😳
Don't reveal it... 😡

And please don't take more than a week to update this story... waiting to know what happens next... and how!
>>> I will try dear!!😊
You do realise a week is over, right?🤔

Thanks a ton for reading and commenting!!🤗🤗🤗
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