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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Beautiful chapter n thnxx for pm di n update nxt asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
congrats for new thread laksh di...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
another amusing update...😛
wowww jajo finally planned their honeymoon . am so so loving this , jalal is hell nervous & jo so bold...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
anyways , am waiting for your next chappy...😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Thank u for the lovely comments..
Actually I am hell nervous because u all are waiting for this update from long time...
I hope I am giving good update.. sorry if I am not up to ur expectation...
Love u all..
Waiting for ur comments..

Plz read 18+
Mature content..


CHAPTER 50:

Jalal: jodha jodha..

Jodha: yeah.. jalal..tell me..

Jalal: what u are thinking Sonu.. sleep..

Jodha: hmmm.. nothing... yeah we will sleep..but I wanted to do something.. don't stop me ok.. plz..

Jalal: what?? I didn't get u..

Jodha: hmmm... wait... close ur eyes...

Jalal: y??

Jodha: jalal plz..

Jalal closes his eyes..

Jodha prays for god & places her lips on his..

Jalal opens his eyes with sudden kiss..

Jalal wants to break it.. but jodha didn't allow him to do that..

Soon Jalal started kissing back..

But after 3 minutes jalal jerks from her gets up from his place..

Jalal: jodha plz.. stop this..I don't want to

Jodha stops him further saying closes his mouth with her fingers..

Jodha: jalal today I want to give myself to u.. make me urs.. I want to feel u.. I want to become real wife to u..

Jalal: removes her hand & says..no Sonu plz.. I don't want all this.. u are my wife.. It's not all required.. plz.. sleep..

Jodha: jalal give me happiness.. i want it.. U don't want to give.. I will take it.. but plz just keep quite .. ok.. & don't say no..

Jalal: but Sonu pl

Jodha sealed his lips with her lips..pushes him on the bed.. sits on his thighs..
Takes his hands keeps inside of her t-shirt..

Jalal didn't stopped her but didn't proceed further.. he feels erected but he is still in control.. he don't want to lose it..

Jodha can feel his erection.. thinks he is not like as before.. oh god.. I really wanted to move.. this good boy is really torturing me..

Jodha slowly removes his T-shirt & starts kissing on his chest & abs shoulders...

Jalal can't able to take it.. he slowly drawing patterns on her back..try to control himself..

Jodha don't know what to do..
Slowly she came down kiss him on his belly.. & moves down..

She removes his pants slowly..

Jalal in a dream land.. he wants to stop her & but he can't able to do that.. ( after all he is a man)

Jalal is in boxers only..

Jodha lifts a little from him & slowly removes her shorts.. little down her pa**s also..

Jalal closed his eyes... he tries again to stop her..

But jodha sealed his lips again with her..
In the process of kissing she slowly little downed his boxers..

Her womanhood is touching his erected manhood..
Jalal is no where to control he started biting her lips.. holding her waist tightly..

Jodha slowly breaks the kiss & holds his manhood..

Jalal was in heaven.. first time she is holding his man that to willingly..
Jodha slowly tried put his manhood in her vagina..
Finally after a try she successfully placed his man in her va***a..

Tears came out from both of them eyes..
She can't able to bear the pain.. & hisses his name loudly..

Jalal panics hearing her cry he takes out his man from her & gets up hugs her tightly..

Jodha hugs him back.. & says now will u proceed?? I don't know much Chinnu.. plz.. I want u..

Jalal breaks the hug cups her face...Tears are coming continuously from his eyes.. he didn't expect jodha will take a such step to satisfy him..

Jodha: I love u jalal.. I love u soo much..

Jalal: Sonu I love u too.. I am so sorry..

Jodha: ufff.. don't start.. plz.. don't u want me???

Jalal: very badly..

Rolls on her..
Now jodha is under him..

Jodha lows her eyes.. she is feeling shy..

Jalal: look at me Sonu.. plz don't hide them...I will make it as a beautiful night for u today... it's my promise..

Jodha: I love u Chinnu...

Jalal kisses her forehead, eyes , cheeks stopped at her lips looks at her.. she nods silently..
Jalal placed his lips on her.. slowly smooched her lips & he bites sometimes but again nibbled to give lessen the pain..
Jodha equally participated in the kiss... she hold his hair push him more into her..

Jalal Slowly came down & reached her neck & started kissing & leaving love bites on her neck..

Jodha holds his back tightly..drawing patterns on it..

Jalal sneaked his hands in her t-shirt & holds her left breast.. started massaging it..

Jodha irritated with his slow processing..

Turns on him.. now jodha on top him..
Jalal smiles at her impatience..

Jodha lifts her hands indicating to remove her dress..

Jalal happily remove her shirt throws away...
Now she is in her b*a only..

She bends to give better access to him & starts kissing him on his ear..

Jalal unclips her b*a hook..

Jodha stops kissing holds her b*a with her hands..

Jalal kisses on her hands & removes them with his hands
B*a loosen but it is hang on her shoulder..

Jalal push her some more into him with his hands & with his lips he removed hanging b*a on her shoulder..

Jodha closed her eyes.. jalal looks at her br***s hungrily..her erected nipples.. she already given feeding to salim so they already big in size..

Jalal looks at them..

Jodha: I gave feeding to salim.. they are not like young ones have. I think I am sorry..

Jalal angrily turns her & jodha beneath him..

Jalal: y u are saying sorry.. don't u dare.. U given feeding to my son.. they more beautiful than my imagine.. kisses her hardly.. moves down slowly started sucking her right nipple.

Jodha screams his name jalal jalal...

Jalal sucks more & more & elongates her nipple with his teeth..
Jodha can't handle more she holds him tightly started scratching his back..

He starts squeezing her left br***t with his hand.. places her pinkish nipple between his fingers & elongate it..

Their legs entwined.. both their womanhood & manhood touching each other..

Jalal gave same treatment to her right br_***t..

Jalal came down & kissed her belly button...
He carresed her scratches which are occurred after salim birth ( every woman get scratches after kids born , minimum scratch will be there) kissed on them..

He pushes his tongue inside her belly button & sucks it..

He slowly went down.. kisses her thighs.. slowly removed her pa***s..
Looks at her womanhood.. jodha feels shy because of his constant gaze..

She hides her face in her hands..

Jalal slowly started kissing her thighs & reached to her womanhood.. give a peck on her v****a lips..
Jodha screams his name jalal...

Jalal looks at her face places his middle finger on her entrance.. slowly he entered her..slowly he in & out his finger.. he increases his speed little... & little more... jodha moans his name loudly...
Aha jalalll..
Jodha in a passionate mood he removes his fingers & kept his lips on her entrance..

Jodha opens her eyes with his lips touching her sensitive spot..

Jalal slowly kissed her va***a lips..
With his tongue he entered little into her va***a.. he moves more into her.. he keeps on sucking her va****a.. jodha can't take anymore she bites her lips to control it..
Jalal placed his hand on her br_***s. Starts squeezing them harshly..
Jodha moans loudly.. hmmm jalal jalalll...

Finally she got her first orgasm...
Her energy dropped..
But jalal left her va***a & come up starts kissing again on her lips..

His hard chest is touching her feminine br****t...
Their girl & man things are touching each other..

Jalal kissed her like there is no tomorrow..

Jodha can't take this torture anymore.. but jalal is no where to stop it..

Jodha: jalal plz..

Jalal stops kissing looks into her eyes like seeking permission..

Jodha understood him kiss him back on his lips & whispers in his ears.. I can't wait.. make me urs...

Jalal: it will be painful Sonu...

Jodha: shuts his mouth by her fingers & says.. I know u won't hurt me.. I love u jalal.. give my rights...

Jalal: I love u too Sonu.. looks into her eyes..
Slowly places his man in her va***a.. Starts kissing her to soothe her. A lone tear escape from his eyes..

Jodha feels terrible pain.. a lone tear escape from her eyes.. scratch his back..

Jalal smooches Her tears.. holds her tightly to himself.. jodha too hugs him..

Slowly jalal moves in & out..
Jodha slowly adjusted with his pace.. pain replaced with pleasure...

Jodha moans his name jalalll jalalll.. oh god..

Jalal kisses her neck... holds her breast & starts sucking gently...

Jodha feels she is in heaven..

Jalal increases his speed..

Jodha enjoy to the core..

In out in out in out..

Jalal increased his speed..jodha scratches him badly.. she can't able to hold the pleasure..

Jalal keep on kissing her.. sucking her lips.. pushing his man in her to reach her c***..it reached her peak point..

Soon he released his seed in her making her as his.. but this time with her permission...completed their marriage... Two hearts one soul..

He kissed her forehead & rest his head on her br***t.. his eyes started shedding tears..

Precap:
Some more romance...






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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
oh my my what a lovely and scorching update
It was not only hot but beautiful too. The way you have written this part,I felt their Passionate love for each other.
Usually I don't like any chapter or os of mature content much in this forum but seriously you have written beautifully. I really loved it so much laksh.❤️
and I am proud of you JO.😆 I was so amazed while reading that she herself put his manhood inside her😲😛
Greatt job🤣

It was an awesomely beautiful chapter my love.👏👏👏

Finally they become one but this time with her consent. Loved it dear❤️
This update has everything-love,passion,lust,emotions and u described everything so perfectly⭐️⭐️⭐️

Thanks for the pm😊 and love you so much dear🤗
Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Wow super duper update laksh. ...jo took bold step to seduce ja ...loved ja care. .he shed tears with her. .finall they become two bodies one soul...LoveLy precap update soon nd do pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
totally hot but still romantic nd emotional update 😳

No words to say lakshmi, just I'm coping with da outer hotness nd urs update's hotness😉

thank u for da pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Laksh.. Have u read my commnet on previous chapter??😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Laksh.. Have u read my commnet on previous chapter??😕

Yes baby... I read...
Thank u soo much payu..
I was hell nervous with this Sr update..
I was literally shivering how all will react..
U know the reason..
Jodha really bold... hahaha...
Thank god u ressed it soon.. I am just waiting for response..
Thank u thank u..
Muahhh...
🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
OMG..!! Lakshmi..
It's the hottest ☺️ and the most awaited Chapter
You did it well darling 👍🏼 Keep it up
The Bold Jo vs the controlled Jalal 😃 even though at the end he can't control anymore 😆
Waiting for precap and thanks for the pm

Btw Happy Holi Lakshmi 🤗

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