THE LAST MISTAKE...THREAD 2.. New link on pg155 - Page 22

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natashathakur thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic update di n thnxx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry for late reply bangaram
was gayab from forum for few days 😆
Anyways read 33.1, 33.2 , 33.3 and 34
Amazing chaps as usual ra
so jodha is slowly settling with jalal thogh ahe didnt accept him now but the day will come soon (kada bangaram)
I loved the way jalal is taking care of jodha ,he is indeed the best husband
Im really happy for salim too as he got the best father in the whole world
omg bharmal is in hospital
so sad
waiting for next part
update soon ra
thanks for pms
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks for the lovely comments dears...
Really u people touched me heart with ur comments..
Love u dears..
Who are writing exams
ALL THE BEST DEARS.. FROM MY JALAL & JODHA...
From me also..
Study well.. do well.. don't stress..
After exams read stories..now don't take stress sisters..



CHAPTER 34.1:

Jalal Waits in the room..
Bhar is sleeping.

Jalal sleeps on the chair...
Bhar wakes up in the midnight to have some water..
He tried to call maina.. looks for her.. saw jalal..

He gets angry looking jalal..

Bhar: shouts.. y are u here?? Where is maina?? Maina Maina..

Jalal wakes up with his shouting..
Brings water & gives to Bhar..

Jalal: first have some water sir..

Bhar drinks..
Jalal helps bhar to sit...adjusts the bed to comfort...Bhar didn't want to take his help but he is not in a condition to argue with him..

Bhar: y u are here?? I hate u.. because of u I am in this situation now.. I lost my daughter.. I hate u.. go from here...

Jalal just smiles..

Bhar: y r u smiling.. go away..

Jalal: sir.. can I ask u something.. just a small question.. shall I??

Bhar: what??

Jalal: what is the difference between us sir?? I mean regarding jodha. What is the difference between us..

Bhar: I am her father.. u r bas***d ra**d her.. we have a lot of difference.. ok now go.

Jalal: oh really.. what u Said about me is true.. I did mistake.. but u also did mistake.. sir did u ever asked what jodha wants?? Did u ever asked her opinion for marriage with abhi.? Did she loving him or not? Did u ever asked what she wants to do?? What she wants to study?? U love her endlessly but did u ever show ur love on her?? Did u ever took her in ur embrace & gave her confidence that u are there for her?? Did she ever talked with u without hesitating?? U always thinks about ur sister promise but did u asked what jodha is thinking?? At that time u think about ur sister. Because that lady breaks up relation with u.. But did u Care about my WIFE?? how much she struggled for 3 years?? How she raised my son?? I am the sinner but she is the one struggled.. do u know how much she cried for u & ur sister???
Tell me.. give me answers sir..

Bhar was numb.. he don't have answers to jalal questions...
He just kept silent...

Jalal : so sir.. no difference between us. In fact I am better than u..I loved her & I expressed my love.. she loved me back but scared to accept it. Because the reason is u. She don't want her happiness but need urs.. ok..accepted I did mistake but at least I am trying to rectify it... she is not happy.. she thinks she is the reason for ur breakup with it sister.. but u blamed her.. u doubted on ur raising.. I told u already u will got to know person value when we miss them only.. I understood her value from starting onwards.. but now u have to realize her value... she is so precious.. u left her & now feeling sad. I am there with her still trying to make her happy.. thing is that we both love jodha endlessly..but we both choose wrong path.. we both are sailing in same boat sir..
I am trying to get her back.. but its not easy for her to accept me..but plz sir plz I am begging u give her father love at least.. if u accept her again as her daughter she will be happy..more than happy..
Plz..


Bhar cries.. today he wants to cry.. his heart out.. he missed his daughter.. whom he loved more than himself...

Jalal holds Bhar hands to give support to him..

Bhar hugged jalal.. thank u.. thank u sooo much jalal... for loving my daughter.. I am sorry.. plz call ur wife. I want my daughter back..plz...

Jalal smiles.. first time Bhar called him jalal & Said jodha as his wife..
He was happy..

Bhar talked whole heartily with jalal..

In the morning..


Precap:

he is my husband. Give some respect.. he stayed with u whole night to take care.. & u are talking bad about my husband.. If u don't like us we will go but I don't like if u said any bad words about my husband..


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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice chapter dear😊
This chapter belonged to jalal and bharmal and finally they sort out their misunderstandings.😛
I was surprised with jalal's dialogues😆
But this reflects that he actually started understanding jo😊 What she couldn't tell her father in her entire life, he conveyed her emotions so easily to her father.
Bharmal too realize his mistake. Obviously he loved her as she's his only daughter but still his ego couldn't let him to take a first step and here jalal helped him to take that step😃

Precap was damn interesting 👏😆
Bhartiya Naari jaag gai🤣
Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
I am very happy when ever I saw ur comment payu...
U always gives best comment...
Love u dear...
🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome chappy akka
Words got hit on correct nerve
Precap is interesting
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful each and every word of jalal is outstanding . amazing chap.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

I am very happy when ever I saw ur comment payu...
U always gives best comment...
Love u dear...
🤗


he he I am glad my comment makes u happy😆
Love you too dearie🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome chappy Di...
Bharmal is crying on ja shoulder...
Smarter ja...
Bharmal want his daughter back..

Precap is really interesting one..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow laxmi...love you so much yaar...i knew it you make pach-up jalal and bharmal...love the way jalal make understand bharmal(his dialouges...muaahhh)...i am very very excited about the pecape...jodha finaly says HER HuSBAND to jalal...eagerly waiting for next update please update ASAP

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