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nikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#191

Lovely chapter di n thnxx for pm

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divya joshi

@divyaJA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#192

soo beautiful nice chppy dii..
jo purchase scooty..md want to do job also..
she work in same company where jalal did..
joja now friends..both understand each other..grt progress in one month dii..really happy..
byt what happen after one month..i m scared..hope acchi news ho dii..

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Titus

@Akdhalover6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#193

Hey laxmi...it was a owesome chapter...i can say it as a posiive chapter...jodha and jalal slowly slowly becoe comfortable with each other or i can say "jodha is become comfortable with jalal"...i like as always jalal's carring and protective nature towards jodha and salim...
But yaar what after one month?
Please update soon...till afternoon...please

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#194

wow jo got the job..jha is protective & caring husband & father as well. both started to talk & sharing things salim is happy now...wat is this after month????????????? update soon dear..

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eshalli

@eshalli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#195

Hi dis is eshalli I read ur story its really
Super I like it very much do you know
TeluguTelugu 😊 😊

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#196

Thanks for the lovely comments dears...

Love u all...

CHAPTER 34:

Maina called to jodha..& starts crying..when she was in the office..

Maina: Jodha jodha..

Jodha:Amma.. plz tell me.. what happened..y are u crying??

Maina: dad is in the hospital.. he fainted in this morning.. he is not feeling well from past one week..I & uncle bring him to Hyderabad today.. plz come jodha..

Jodha: oh god.. mom..I am coming. Takes the hospital address..

Thinks to whether tell jalal or not. But after thinking she wants to inform him..

Jodha calls to jalal..

Jalal was happy seeing jodha call.. he daily msgs her to eat on time. To take care. But she never replied..

Suddenly jodha call made him happy..

He lifts happily..

Jalal: Hai jodha.. tell me..

Jodha can feel his happiness..& says... dad was in the hospital.. I want to go..can u plz take me to the hospital..

Jalal: ok.. where is the hospital.. where r u??

Jodha: I am in office.. can u come to my office plz...

Jalal: ok.. I am coming.. come to parking lot..tells the address

where his car is located..

Both Hungsup..

Jodha Runs to near his car..

Waits for him..

She thinks this is my office building..how come jalal car is here???

Is this jalal car only?? He has

Audi q3... I saw in the parking lot.. is it his friend car?? but wait look at it.. I saw this car somewhere.. where I saw?? The same Verna car.. where I saw?? She didn't get any idea..

Soon jalal arrived..

Both start journey...

Jalal: dont worry jodha.. uncle will be Fine...

Jodha: just nods..

Soon they reach hospital..

Maina cries very badly hugging jodha.. jodha console her..

Jalal has a family friend cum doctor working in the in the hospital.. he talked with them.. comes back to jodha & maina..

Jalal hugs maina..& says.. aunty. Ok don't cry.. uncle is fine.. his sugar levels are increased.. is he not eating well??

Maina: no jalal.. after jodha went.. he was guilty.. he didn't talk with me properly.. always skipping meals.. he didn't took proper medicine for the sugar.. always thinking something..

Jalal: it's ok.. aunty.. just one day uncle has to stay here.. then after we can go.. he is fine..nothing will happen..Believe me.. now chalo let's go home. I will drop u both in home...uncle is sleeping now..

Jodha: but dad will be alone na??

Jalal: jodha.. I will drop u & come back.. I will stay with him night. Ok.. aunty needs rest.. plz..chalo..

Jodha: ok.. Amma chalo..

Maina: no..I will stay here..

Jalal: aunty.. I will take care of uncle..plz..u can't stay here in the night.. listen to me. Plz.. I will be there with him..

Maina:.ok..

Jalal drops maina & jodha home & comes back.. to stay with bharmal in hospital..

Precap:

Bhar: I hate u jalal..

Because of u only all this happened.. I hate u..

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mamtasingla

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Posted: 9 years ago

#197

awesome update

bharmal in hospital

jodha see jalal's car

precap...bharmal talking with jalal

continue soon

thnks for pm

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Shinchan_20

@Shinchan_20

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Posted: 9 years ago

#198

Ohh god!!! I m commenting really late this time..sorry dii
Chapter-33.1, 33.2, 33.3, 34
Fantastic updates dii 👏
jo n jalal have adjusted with each other..they got to know about each other's likes n dislikes..
But jo is still not opening up to him...jalal will have to do a really tuff job for winning her trust fully..
She purchased new scooty and joineda new job as she doesn't wanna be dependent on jalal by any means..
Jalal is totally lattoo on her and is having a hard time in controlling himself after seeing her in shorts 😉
life was going smooth but suddenly bharmal's condition unstabled..
Jalal came to hospital with jo..
Maina is totally broken after seeing her husband in such unfatefull condition..jo consoles her..
Jalal drops them home n is staying on hospital to take care of bharmal ..
Precap
Thnku for pm
continue soon
luv u :*
take care..

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#199

oh no bharmal hospitalized, ja supporting jo & maina in their odd time...sad precap..hope at-least jo will support ja now & bharmal will realise ja is far beter than his sister & her family...continue soon & do pm

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Titus

@Akdhalover6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#200

Hi dear...it was a nice chapter...jodha saw jalal's car and she couldn't recognise that it was that car when they first met with each other...precape was interesting i hope bharmal will patch up with jodha and jalal...love you dear...update soon