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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 168

There are lots of police and reporters at hospital, what happen to mah chucak gain soo much attention and people in horror watching when reporters tell in detail how she killed arjun and they can't believe such cruel woman exist, jack waiting the opportunity to killed her, the security in front of her patient room because police afraid if she loose and creat havoc in hospital, jack observe his surrounding to try to find a way to get inside her room, and when he observe doctor and nurses he got an idea, jack walking around pretending looking for patient's room then when he passed the nurse station he see there is only one nurse who is talking with a doctor, then he see there is a white coat with medical bag, jack look look around make sure no one see him then he snatch the white coat and medical bad then leave in hurry, there is a sadistic in jack eyes when he wear that white coat, now he will avenge the death of his uncle.

That day jalal decide to stay at home becaue jodha and his family still in shock for what just happened and he want to be with his family, he watching hassan hussain playing with rahim in living room while jodha prepare table to dinner, when his phone ring and he answer it, jodha can hear his conversation with someone name ali sheikh, she see that jalal looks very happy so when she finish arrange everything she come to him and sit beside him.

" there is must be a good news that can make you very happy " said jodha, jalal look at her face and smile.

" well just another amazing business opportunity . . remember when aziz go to dubai to inspect landscape that will build a exclusive hotel there ? " ask jalal

" yes I remember there and I guess aziz and shehnaz have early honeymoon there " reply jodha and she wink to jalal.

Jalal laugh " that is not weird seeing how the hot tension between them " he said

" yes well they love each other and I don't why but I think they will decie to get marry soon " reply jodha

Jalal look curious " how you know ? six sense ? " he tease her, jodha hit his shoulder

" no . . but I see their relationship now is more stronger and I see in shehnaz eyes when ammijan asking her bout marriage, I see a hope and wish there so I guess soon she and aziz will talk serious about this " said jodha

" I hope soo . . she is a nice and kind . . she deserve her happiness, aziz really love her and I can see that he can taking care and protect here and that is what the most important for me, she is been through a lot so she need someone she can rely on and I'm glad she find that in aziz " jodha nod and agree with jalal mind.

" and tell me how the business opportunity ? " ask jodha

" well . . ali decide want to joint with me to build exclusive hotel in dubai and he will come to india next week to talk bout that . . . but I'm too busy to handle this project so I will need someone I can trust to handle it . . . . " reply jalal

" yes jalal you are too busy with work and demanding five kids and wife " said jodha with amusement

Jalal looking at her and grin " damn hell I am . . I'm the super busy man on earth " he said with proud

" so who you will choose to handle that project ? " ask jodha

" I have someone in my mind . . and I will ask him to come to my office tomorrow and ask his opinion about this and I hope he wont reject this opportunity because this is a giant step for him " reply jalal, hassan hussain and rahim watching their abbujan and ammijan talking with serious.

" bujan " call hassan, jodha and jalal looking at him.

" yes hassan " said jalal

" play . . . . assan play " hassan then stand up and walk toward him " play wid assan . . . . " he said again

" ok ok . . . abbujan will play with you " said jalal, hussain stand up too and he run to jodha, he throw himself to jodha.

" annna " said hussain

" haha ooh boy . . this is all because mirza and bobby " blame jodha

" hussain and hassan sometimes keep calling everybody anna . . . but it's soo funny ammijan " reply rahim

" yes funny . . this young boy always try to say whatever they heard " jodha tickle hussain chin and he giggle

" sain anna " declare hussain with proud

" ooohh no no no . . . you are not anna . . . you are superman " correct jalal very quick, he don't want hussain and hassan calling themselves anna, jodha laugh watching jalal corrected hussain in fast.

" cu . . .cu . . . . . . " hussain try to said what jalal's said

" suuu peerrr mannn " jalal repeat with slow

Hussain with serious concentration listening and watching jalal's mouth " cuuu . . berrr . . . nam " he said hardly

" no no hussain . . . look at bhaijan " said rahim and hussain looking at rahim " it's . . . su . . .per . . . . man " rahim slowly told hussain

Hussain smile " cu . . ber . . man " he said then he jump in happy because he think he think say the right words, jodha can't help but hug her naughty son and kiss his cheek.

" oooh you are very cute my hussain . . . " said jodha and rahim watching the mother and son, then jodha see him and open her arm for him and rahim run to jodha and hug her " and you are my handsome and cute rahim " said jodha, jalal and hassan chuckled watching them, then hassan look up to jalal.

" bujan . .sain cu .. ber . . man . . . asan . . cu . . ber . . maaann ? " he ask with his begging face.

" hahaha no you are not superman but you are spiderman . . . cute little spiderman " said jalal and hassan look confuse

" asan derman " said hassan with happy

Jodha laugh and hassan smile looking at his ammijan laugh " oooh jalal that is more hard to say to them . . . but you are my cute derman " said jodha and hassan jump in happy and exciting

" asann derman . . . . " hassan keep jumping like energetic little bunny, looking his twins so happy hussain join him and they jumping together.

" sain cuberman . . . . grrr " hussain give a scary face

Jalal, jodha and rahim laugh " hussain are you superman or dinousaur ? " ask jalal

" sain cuberman tyex " screams hussain with happy then he give everyone scary face again

" asan . . asan derman tyex . . arrhhh auk auk " hassan make a dog bark

" ammijan abbujan may be they think t-rex is a dog " said rahim and jodha along with jalal laugh soo hard, they watch hassan hussain cute and gunny act and they can't imagine when salim and aram joint the club it will be very fantastic and jodha with jala can't wait to see them play together.

Meanwhile in hospital jack with carefull try to enter patient room where mah chucak treat, two policemam who guard the doors watching jack with suspicious.

" who are you ? " ask one policeman

" I'm dr rakesh and I want to check her before I leave . . today really busy day and I'm very tired but still must check her for the last time " said jack

One police smile " yes I can imagine this hospital really busy . . . you go there and check her but be carefull ok, even she is being tied up but she still look very dangerous " warn one police

" I hear the man she killed in bad condition ? " ask jack

" very bad doctor . . . may that soul rest in peace " reply policeman and jack try to control his anger and he smile to them.

" yes . . may his soul rest in peace . . . " said jack, then they open the door for him and close it behind, jack open the medical bad and find sedative, he fill a injection with sedative, slowly he open the hospital curtain and mah chucak looking at him with happy, she still in feel pain on her back.

" arjun . . you finally come " asi mah chucak, she think that jack is arjun, jack come closer to her.

" I'm here mah chucak . . . I want to said something " reply jack whispering

" what ? you killed humayun ? " ask mah chucak with low voice too, she look happy and excited, jack come closer to her ears.

" I want to say . . see you in hell " he said then with fast he inject the sedative through her neck.

" what the . . . . . " jack cover mah chucak mouth with his hands to prevend her to make a sound, mah chucak looking at jack in horror when jack take out a knife from his pocket, he take it from medical bad that he stole.

" you give my uncle a very pain death so I will do the same for you . . no one will hear your screaming " said jack with cold and cruel, mah chucak only can watch in horror and fear when she see jack move the knife to her neck " you will feel death come to you very slowly and I will enjoying remembering this moment, my uncle give his life to your family but you killed him with cruel, I don't care if you are insane when you did that but you know the rule for me an eye for an eye . . . " he add and he look at mah chucak eyes, she feel her body start to give up because the sedative but she still can feel the pain when jack cut her neck from left to right, the blood spurt to jack face and clothes, mah chucak feel she start to grasp for an air and she try to fight but her body very weak, she feel her last breath leaving her body, her eyes open in scary and when jack open his hands he see her mouth open wide like she try to grasp and air, then jack stab her heart and let the knife on her body like that, jack know that if he come out like that he will get caugh, so he go to bathroom slowly and he see a window there, then he open it very careful enough to not make a sound, he look down and see that the ground not too high, and there is no one down there because it above parking lot, jack take off the while coat and wipe out the blood from his face and neck then tossed it away on the floor, then he climb the window and without thinking twice he jump, he land with hard and he feel may be he just break his leg but he don't have much time to feel the pain, he go to his cat and get in, he wear his jacket so it covering his bloody t-shirt then he leave from hospital without everyone noticing, he now that he must leave this city probably leave this country immediately because police will hunt him for the murder of mah chucak, jack drive his car as far as he can to airport, he always prepare everything that is what his uncle taught him, he got passport and money and go bag so he will one way ticket and never return to india, he have soo many friends in soo many country so he can go whenever he want.

While in hospital the policeman who guard mah chucak in front of patient room feel suspicious because that doctor take a lot time to check mah chucak, then they see a middle age man with nurses looks like searching for something, one police come to them to see what's wrong.

" something wrong ? " ask policeman

" ooh yes my name is dr rakesh and I'm looking for my white coat and medical bad, I swear I put in on nurse station but when I finish talk to nurse it's gone " said dr rakesh

Policeman look surprise and confuse " you are dr rakesh ? but .. but there is a man said he is dr rakesh and he is checking that special patient " said policeman

Dr rakesh and nurses look confuse " what you mean ? I'm dr rakesh and I'm just about to check her when my white coat and medical bag missing " reply dr rakesh, then policeman realize what just happen and he run following by dr rakesh and nurses, the other policeman looking confuse too when he see his parter run.

" open the door . . quick " yell one one policeman make everyone watching them with curious, his partner open the door and they burst in together with guns in their hands to find the shocking view, dr rakesh and nurse close their mouth and looking at mah chucak dead body in horror, policeman make emergenty call to their headquarters and report what hust happening, everyone curious what is happening because they know that that is room where mah chucak stay to get treated, mah chucak face the pain death just like arjun but now her soul can be free from mentally torture and may her soul rest in peace too while jack looking at his country for the last time before the plane take off, he swear to himself wont ever comeback to india, a place where his uncle face cruel and pain death, he look at his uncle picture and he hold him to his hear and tears fall on his cheeks.

" it's done uncle . . . rest in peace " he whispers then he look out the window and he can see his uncle smile over him and then disappears, jack feel relieve he success to avenge the death of his uncle, now he will leave all of this behind and never look back.

Happy Reading 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for pm and update...Ndi.
SomeoneloveJA thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow baby talk and play so cutie...so much fun...
final Mah chucak dead...
awesome update...dear...
waiting next...don't stop...excellent story..

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Posted: 9 years ago
awsm story...cute little hassan nd hussain...mahachuchak dead
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow amazing update..
hassan hussain is soo cute..
that part was soo sweet nd beautiful..
jack killed mahachuchak..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow di u update three together n thnxx for pm di
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow ja enjoying his family time nd c got business deal. ..who is this suspense guy. ..is it bhairam or Aziz ...chuchak died. ..continue soon nd do pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely chapter buddy!
hassan and hussain too cute..
maha chuchak dead...
update soon!
thanx for the pm..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome chappy di
twins r so cute
so psycho is dead
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...,finally maha chuchak story finished & the twins are total cutie pies

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