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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update.
Wow hussu hassu scenes r so cute n lovely.Really all mugals r giving tough competition to ja in loving n adoring aram from now itself she has so many fans [LOL. Fells like ja n her bhaijaans r going to have n tough time in future ] 😉 .
Nice. Scene all mugal ladies together is always wonderful to read.
Oh this chaucak is really psycho but hope she 2ill to admitted to mental asylum soon n causes no harm to anyone.Hope so
Update soon dear waiting for nex tupdate eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
U dint pm me dear :-( n update soon both stories :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 167

Jalal and abdul come to entry gate, they a woman screaming with hysterical, and they see their bodyguards gather near the gate and he hears they talk about crazy old woman, then when they see jalal they give him a way, and then what jalal and abdul see next make them shock too, jalal see mah chucak screaming in front of gate, she cover by dry blood and hold knife.

" where is that son of bitch humayun . . . . . " screams mah chucak, then he see jalal " you . . you . . humayun . . I will kill you and your wife , you kill my entire family so I will kill all your family " said mah chucak in rage, jalal can see her eyes show soo much rage and insanity, she think jalal is humayun.

" my abbujan did not killed your family . . someone else caused that deadly accident . . . you blamed the wrong people and I'm not humayun . . I'm his son jalal " reply jalal, he come closer to the gate " humayun did not killed your family . . " jalal try to make her understand.

Mah chucak looking at him with anger then he run towards gate and try to stab jalal, jalal move back fast mah chucak slide her hands between gate and keep try to stab him " you liar . . . . you coward can't face your own sin, I swear to God humayun I will kill youuu . . open this gatee " she demand in anger.

" God jalal look at her . . . she is completely insane . . and I wonder whose blood on her . . I feel sorry for whoever that she kill " said abdul

" opeennn this dooorrr . . . . humayunnn open this door you coward " yell mah chucak, she kick the gate in rage.

" mah chucak " suddenly hamid appears and everyone looking at her in surprise.

" ammijan I told you to stay inside " said jalal

Hamida come to jalal and touch his cheeks " I know jalal but I wont let you face this alone . . . " reply hamida

" hamida . . . you . . you and humayun will pay for what happened to my family " mah chucal walking here and there in frustration.

Hamida too feel shock looking at mah chucak condition and she feel sorry for whoever got hurt by her, then hamida come closer to gate follow by jalal and abdul, some bodyguards escort her too " we didn't kill your family . . did you forget there is a drunk driver who caused the accident . . humayun and me are innocent " said hamida, mah chucak try to remember but all she got is more rage.

" no . . no . . no . . . you and him killed my family " mah chucak pointed to jalal

" he is not humayun . . he is my our son jalal " correct hamida

Mah chucak look confuse but then angry again " you think I'm stupid ? he is humayun . . . I swear on my family grave I will kill you and humayun "

" mah chucak I'm jalal . . we met on charity party remember ? " ask jalal

Mah chucal shake her heads when some blast memory try to surface " no no no I don't believe you . . you you are humayun " she insist, then they hear police sirine and jalal look behind mah chucak there is police car and one car he don't recognize and the other one is mughal secutiry car and jalal can guess that is ahmed and zahir, cars stop not far from mah chucak, ahmed and zahir come out from their car and in shock looking at mah chucak, dr kelly close her mouth, she never imagine mah chucak will become like this, but she is her patient and so she have responsibility.

" mah chucak " call dr kelly, everyone looking at her with curious

" who are you ? " ask mah chucak in angry

" I'm your psychiatrist . . . you don't remember me ? " reply dr kelly

" I don't have psychiatrist " said mah chucak with angry

" yes you have . . . since you wake up from coma you have been this delusional thought that humayun and hamida who responsible for your family death but that is not real, the one who cause that accident was died . . you stop taking this meds so you start to delusional again . . this all is not real and only happen in your head . . . . " dr kelly try to make mah chucak open her eyes.

Mah chucak listen to dr kelly with angry " you are lie . . you must be humayun people too . . . I've killed one who try to pretend to be arjun " said mah chucak with proud

Dr kelly truly sad must say the truth to her " mah chucak you killed arjun . . he is not humayun people . . he is arjun "

Mah chucak not believe what dr kelly say to her " you are lie . . that is not arjun . . . . "

" yes he is " cut dr kelly

" nooo " deny mah chucak

" yes mah chucak . . he is abdul and he is died . . you've killed him " said dr kelly

" you . . you . . . you . . you are humayun people . . I will kill you " mah chucak come to dr kelly and rise her knife ready to stab her, jalal ask guards to open the gate and order his bodyguards to stop mah chucak, two of his bodyguards hold on mah chucak when she try to attack dr kelly.

" oooh boy this is really crazy " said ahmed then he and zahir run to jalal side to protect him and hamida, mah chucak try to escape from jalal's bodyguards, two policeman come and help jalal bodyguard to hold mah chucak while one poliman secure dr kelly.

" you better stay away from her mam . . . she is completely loose her mind and very dangerous " said policeman

" we must take her to hospital . . . " reply dr kelly and in that moment mah chucak bite one policeman and take opportunity by everyone shock she loose her, she look at hamida and she run towards her, jalal and abdul come in front if hamida to protect her while ahmed, zahir and others protect jalal and abdul, they already hold gun on their hands but before anyone can shoot one police shoot mah chucak on her heack and she fall on the ground, hamida close her mouth in shock, she can't understand how mah chucak become like this, dr kelly run towards mah chucak to check on her, jalal, abdul and hamida check too and see what they can help, dr kelly check mah chucak pulse on her neck " she is alive but her pulse very weak . . we must take her to hospital fast " she add

" you can use my chopper it will take you to hospital faster then car " suggest jalal

Dr kelly looking at him with surprise " after what she trying to do to you and your family you are willing to help her ? " ask dr kelly

Jalal nod " of course . . why not . . there is nothing wrong to help her " reply jalal

" jalal is right and beside humayun helping her too in the past . . come we must hurry take her to hospital " said hamida

" I will arrange my people to take your car to hospital and they can come back with my pilot " suggest jalal and dr kelly nod, then jalal give order to his people and he too ask the policeman who got biten by mah chucak to go to hospital too so there are two policeman who will go with dr kelly, jalal's bodyguards helping policeman to take mah chucak on chopper and in few minutes pilot fly them to hospital.

Jack and mary smith in shock watching the news about mah chucak killed one his trusted man and now she is on her way to mughal residence to revenge the death of her family which is very wrong since the late humayun and hamida were not responsible for the accident, and the reporter said bout the possibility mah chucak behind the killing attempt to jalal and his wife and they just got news that mah chucak shot by police and been taken to hospital, jack now understand why mah chucak want to revenge on mughal but it seems wrong accusiation, but jack must find out who is got killed by mah chucak untill the reporter said arjun name and jack really shock especially when it said arjun is brutally murder and his dead body not in very bad condition and hope his family can be strong.

" she kill uncle arjun ? " ask jack to himself, he can't believe this is happening, how can she kill uncle arjun, he is been with her family for soo long, jack feel angry because after what he and uncle do for her family how can she kill him like that, in rage jack take his gun and he go to hospital where mah chucak taken, he will avenge the death of his uncle, arjun more than uncle to him but like a father and that crazy old woman kill him in cruel, jack enter the car and leave in high speed.

Meanwhile jalal, abdul and hamida on their way back to home when jalal's phone ringing, he check who is calling him then he answer " hello mary . . " greet jalal

" oohhh my God . . . thank God you are ok . . . jalal I just watch the news and I really worry, are you ok ? hamida and all you family ok ? " ask mary in panic

" I'm ok mary . . mah chucak come here but she is on the way to hospital " reply jalal

" thank God jalal . . ooh I'm so sorry . . I don't know she is sick and I introduce you to her " said mary with regret

" it's not your fault mary don't worry about that . . . . you didn't notice something off or weird about her ? " ask jalal

" well . . I notice that sometimes she looks odd but I though because what she is been through . . I never imagine she became like this " reply mary.

" it's ok mary . . . do you know what happen after she wake up from coma ? " ask jalal

" no . . I never asked about that because I think that will bring her the bad and sad memory " said mary

" yes I can understand that .. listen I will goin to hospital later and see how is she doin you want to meet me there ? " ask jalal

" ooh that would be great jalal . . . you and your family are a very nice people, you and humayun great human being, you two keep helping her . . God bless you child " reply mary

" thak you mary . . I will tell when when I will go to hospital " said jalal

" ok jalal . . just let me know when " said mary then jalal end the call, he enter house and she look jodha worry expression, she run to him when he smile and hug him.

" oooh jalal . . I'm so worry that something bad happened might happened to you . . we all watch the news then we hear gunshot . . and . . . . "

Jalal hug her close " sssttt . . it's ok sweety . . I'm ok . . ." jalal try to make her relax

" what happen there jalal ? " ask selima

" mah chucak try to attack her doctor then try to attack me and ammijan too " reply jalal

" oooh my God . . . thank God no one is getting hurt ? where is she now ? " ask moti

" a police shoot her and she is been take to hospital " everyone really shock to hear that

" what's wrong with her jalal ? in the news they said she is want to get revenge but at the wrong people " said shehnaz

" yes well she think abbujan who caused the accident that taken all of her family but in reality that is not the truth . . she suffer from psychotic break and delusional, she can't make differences between reality and her imagination " explain jalal, he caress jodha's back then jodha look up to him and he smile to her convice her that he is ok.

" bujaaannn " hussain running like a storm and hug jalal's foot, he look up to him and smile " bujan . . sain w . . want . . .ppplay " he said with his cute baby talk then they hear hassan laughing and then he show up, he is holding into banana, he see jalal and smile with mouth full with banana.

" bujan . . . asan eat . . banyanya " said hassan with proud

Jalal and jodha chuckled " yes I can see that hassan . . is it delicious ? " ask jalal and hassan think for a while then he nod.

" oooh they are my cute grandsons " praise hamida then she kneel in front of hassan and hassan give her banana.

" eat " said hassan and hamida obey and eat banana hassan smile with happy.

" ok come let's go to living room I will tell you all about mah chucak " said jalal then they all following jalal to living room, while jack already arrive at st. mary hospital and he prepare everything, he check again the gun and hide it behind her back, he promise to avenge the death of his death uncle, he will give mah chucak the pain death just like she gave his uncle very pain and slowly death, jack lookt at a photo of his uncle and him together and then she come out from car, he don't care if he will go prison because all he care that mch chucak must pay for what she did to his uncle.

Happy Reading😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for pm and update ..dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
jalal is safe😃
Edited by mamtasingla - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Gawd.. 167 chapters😲
Can u tell me how many chapters are left to complete this story??😆
Btw U really amazed me by giving daily updates😛😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Everythings are fine now...
baby talk so cute...love them
Mah Chucak too crazy...
will Jack kill her...?
nice update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous chappy
Relavations r more for mughals with her
Wat jack gonna do
Twins are so cute
Update soon
Even me too have same question how u gonna end this ff becoz it is near to 170 chappy
Edited by Kavya_P - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...,hassan-hussain are so cute
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Posted: 9 years ago
Scary update.
Thanks God all family is safe
Maha chuchak very mad woman.
Jack will kill maha chuchak.
Thanks for pm

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