akdha short story ~will he ever forgive me ~updated pt02*pg09(01/11)

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eshalli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Awesome chapter
Love it
Continue soon
Thxc 4r pm dear

Edited by eshalli - 9 years ago

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melovesja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Savi🤗 welcome back

It's touchy. Well describe😃 her nature and her changed life, her pain and his anger. You wrote she don't know reality and her jelousy.😕 update soon.

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hala

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

beautifully descriped and very well written ..i can actually feel every one emotions through your words although it was more about jodha condition but i could feel jalal anger and hatred

i wanted to read so much more

i loved when you said" if the punishment is too hard too bear then why doing the sins was so easy "👏

i was like my savi is back 👏 mindblowing master piece😃 ...want more very sooon please😳 your stories are really unique ..i love them ..u know that😳

ok the chappy

jodha in so much pain ..she already feel guilt and love towards her jalal ..but he is for sure angry and dont accept her to his heart

i loved the idea of them living together and she trying to fullfillhis dreams ..that is my girl👏

our sweet angel going to respectable school and our king leg is recovering😳 and not that also he is going to complete his education🤗 jodha made him suffer too much ..i am so sorry for him😭 power and ego can make the person lose his sense

i wonder how jodha was able to convince him to come with her???

you absolutely right about the "ego" its one of the worst sins

who is the caller ? i wonder if its ruk??? i have a feeling it will be an awful person i hope jodha can manage it

i loved that jodha put guards with him for protection and also for not let him escape😉 ya jo do every thing for too keep ur man👍🏼

cant wait for next

update soon please

love it❤️

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hala

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

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hala

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

thanks for pm savi and for updating this one 😊 although i love your every story but this one touch my heart 😭 i love it😳 its was definatly worth waiting⭐️

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Shinchan_20

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Fabulous update

Thanku for pm

Continue soon

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Kavya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Kavya_P
RES DI

UNRES DI

AMAZING CHAPPY DI

POOR JO

UPDATE SOON DI

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Kavya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

UNRES DI
AMAZING CHAPPY DI
POOR JO
UPDATE SOON DI

THANKS FOR PM DI

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Kavya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

THANKS FOR PM DI

SORRY FOR THE LATE REPLY DI

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misty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

U my teasing momma. . . Yeah u updated bt soo short. . Noo i was lk it is done. . U want to torture me? ? Givin such an awsm update nd dn sayin its done. . Noo. . Bt kk since u update . . Ur pardoned bt nt nxt time. .

U know diii. . . I was sooo involved dat i cd really feel her pain. . . She possesses power bt not love,possess d heat of money bt lacks d warmth of love. . . I know dat dey both are in soo much pain. . Only dere hearts cn soothe dm. . . Only love cn tk dm out of dat trauma.

Sooo bfull nd overwhelming chappy. . It was sooo heart touching . . M really happy to read it. . Amazin awsm. .

Thnku fr pm nd update asap . . Nd i mean it! ! 😳