akdha short story ~will he ever forgive me ~updated pt02*pg09(01/11)

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Naazrt

@Naazrt

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

wooow savi diii its SUPERB mindboggling finally you updated hehe ok but plzzz tell na who's that person with jalal plzzz iam going mad oh my poor Jo she is helped jallu ...and plzzz di continue soon don't be late na plzzz dii.. sorry for late dii and big wala thanks for pm me..

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nikki

@natashathakur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Fantastic update di n thnxx for pm

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Titus

@Akdhalover6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Mommy thank God u updated...
But that's not fair it's to short plus with lots of suspension
I loved the chappy it's amazing
Fill pity on Jo... poor girl besides having the power and money she is enables to find love by this u shows a reality of life that money and power not matter in case of love... which is heart touching
Who is the girl whom Jo is avoiding and what's her connection with jalal
Please reveal soon
And please try to update next part soon
Thank you so much for pm
Love u mommy ❤️

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Geetanjali

@Geetanjali1993

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Sorry for late reply

Awesome update

Jo is badly broken from inside

Though she has given him everything he wanted but he is badly hurt

Continue soon and thanks for pm

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Wen will ja forgive jo... feeling sad for both... continue soon nd do pm

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dellaakdha

@dellaakdha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

nice update..emotional..but short..feeling bad for jo..who's tat person..?unite the lovebirds..continue soon and thanks for pm..

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Avika444

@avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Wow ...im literally rubbing my eyes ...like seriously i lost all the hopes of getting updates from u ...but miraculously u showed some mercy upon us and posted the next chap .

When u updated the prologue of this story ... i was like wow ,what a unique concept ...and wanted to read more ...but then u little devil decided not to update any of ur stories and i was really angry ...anyways now since u updated chapter ..let me tell u this was such an emotional update . jodha is in so much pain...she is quilty and is living with Jalal ,fulfilling her duties side by side . Her love and care is bringing jalal back to normal state . Though jalal is hurt badly now ...but im sure u will heal tgeir pains soon .

i felt the update short ..want to read more

Continue soon plss

Thanks for pm