FF:Breathless: Tryst with Fate (Chap 4 updated page 1 (23.03.16))

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Aww Deeps... So finally somebody met nobody just before everybody?? 🤣 OMG! Abdul and his antics ! 😆 Had a wonderful read dear. A grant update with full of festivals.⭐️

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divyadaya13

@divyadaya13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Wow! What an amazing chapter. What an impeccable english you have. Its a beautiful, Amazing story👏

Edited by divyadaya13 - 9 years ago

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maniwood

@maniwood

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Beautiful update!!!!

I really love the stories where I can image story playing out infront of my eyes and yours is in the list 😆... I love your writing style and use of vocabulary!!

So jalal is restless to meet jodha... And Abdul is so funny, the way he is always finding a way to tease jalal and somewhere jalal also enjoys it 🤣

I loved the way jalal was digesting the information about jodha and undergoing different emotions and that time

Jalal is so adorable in your story ❤️

Enjoyed reading all festivities and the descriptions were really good and detailed!

Now I am excited to see Jodha's reaction to news of her marriage 😆

It was a smart idea by Abdul for akdha meet... Meet was awesome

Jalal wanted hold jodha longer and help her trying kamarbandh... So impatient he is 😆

I thought jodha will also identify him but alas!

Poem was superb!

Now it's a request please update sooner!!! 😃

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maheshi

@amitaprasad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

just awesome.please update regularly and pm me.

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swetiii

@swetiii

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#105

awsum
jalal pisses off ruku
hehe
abdul is so funny
jalal set off in disguise
uff this suryabhan
wow
jalal made jo wear the bangles
& wanted to make her wear waistband
🤣
so naughty
update asap dr

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swetiii

@swetiii

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#106

awsum
jalal pisses off ruku
hehe
abdul is so funny
jalal set off in disguise
uff this suryabhan
wow
jalal made jo wear the bangles
& wanted to make her wear waistband
🤣
so naughty
update asap dr..

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melovesja

@melovesja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: Deepasub
Happy Holi all! 😉

Happy holi 😊

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harshal

@harshu27

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#108

beautiful update deeps... 😃 wow so jallu in dreamland of jo... 😉 I loved rather njoyed jalal and abdul's convo... 😆 it was funny...Abdul was njoying teasing jalal... 😆 and wow I could imagine jalal in dat jeweler's get up... 😳 so he finally got a chance to touch and meet his dream nymph... 😉 update soon... 😛