Akdha ff **//Ek Vivaah Aisa Bhi//** TH 5 (uptd chap 22 part 1,2)pg113 - Page 71

Originally posted by: Mavaddat

hi avi di
sorry for late comment for the rest 2 chapters
I was hell busy, and some problem were their . But now here m commenting .
both chapters are awesome, JALAL was tensed and finally he was able to figured out his feeling for his gabbar that is love 😳
JALAL changed behaviour and his gaze making JODHA uncomfortable, but they both understand each other so much . She understood y JALAL was angry on her because she cared for her and JALAL apologized too .
both the chapters were awesome, u penned down each word so beautifully and clearly. Loved each and every word . and update soon waiting for next chapter and yes thanks for the pm me 😊

Originally posted by: mickeymini

Akka wen ur giving d update ????
Confession part Ke liye itna waqt lagana nahi chahiye
Yahan par bohot sare fans hurt hojayenge 😆
Plz update soon

Originally posted by: RSlovesJA

Wow super duper. ..loved it. ...continue soon nd do pm

Originally posted by: avika444

hi bangaram
sorry ra update is not yet ready
adapaduchu vacchindi
thats why i was busy
i need some time for next update ra

Originally posted by: mamtasingla

wen will u update the next?

Originally posted by: mickeymini

OK Akka take ur time
Was just asking

Originally posted by: GERUA

wonderful update

Originally posted by: erning_w

Mein bhi Res :p