Akdha ff **//Ek Vivaah Aisa Bhi//** TH 5 (uptd chap 22 part 1,2)pg113

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ajuswa19pm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#681

di it was so

beautiful

loving it 😳

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Sushma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#682

Eagerly waiting for next chapter akka... I have no words to describe this amazing chapter... very enjoyable chapter...😊

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#683

Chapter 14

awesome chappy avi👏👏

I loved jalal's gesture, "Ok now I can sleep peacefully after knowing that you are ok"😊

How sweet ur jalal is❤️

I am afraid of diabetes😆😆

Enjoyed mirza and sukany's nok-jok😉

But The best part was hosh scenes at a venue🤣

very well written ⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#684

Chapter 15( part 1 and part2 )

Loved their journey and mirza's antics too😆

Jalal can't take his eyes off jo

So hosh can't live without mirza now so he took the entire team at hotel😆😆

I am loving his scenes avi😆😆

Rahim scene was nice and I so loved the flashback. She realized he fulfilled his promise❤️

That caught u sir was 🤣🤣

Sukanya knows how to take revenge😆😆

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#685

Chapter 16(Part1)

My heart skipped a beat but thank god jo was fine but after that jalal's outburst.

I love this angry jalal❤️

The part where jalal realized his actual feelings for jo was very well written avi👏👏👏

I loved each dialogue and the way u made him realise his love for her⭐️⭐️⭐️

Flashback Part was lovely and when jalal came back and saw tears in her eyes aww❤️❤️

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Last scene was so so cute. He confessed in front of her Princess. I was thinking may be jo was listening to his talks too but didn't pretend😆

I enjoyed this chapter avi😃

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#686

Chapter 16 (Part 2)

I loved the title avika😆

So half mission is accompalished and finally with the help of ice cream jalal was succeeded in manofying his angry wife😉

umm.. again saree but this tym I loved their embarassing moment😆😆

Rahim dancing with jo and jalal was feeling jealous.. aww Poor husband😆❤️

Finally he got the chance to dance with her. Loved their dance and song avi but but but...

Again this is my fav song and I planned to use this in coming chapters but u used it before😆

Btw I am loving this story😉❤️

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meera

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Posted: 9 years ago

#687

Akka such an amazing lovely update

vry cutely expressed jo's feelings

their cute gestures lil fights were fun to read

jus loved it akka

thnks fr the pm

I'm eagerly waiting for the confession part

plz update soon akka

love u

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#688

Originally posted by: PARIDHISRAJAT
badi intelligent ho yr tum tumne mirza aur suku ka love confession kara diya
zyada intezaar mat karaaoo
tlking abt d update it ws a wonderfulll 1 yr
awww ja kissed on jo nose how cute
thnks fr d long update n pm 2
plz dnt take much tym 2 update yr aw i cnt wait anymore😆😆

Thanks for the lovely comment shelly 😳