Akdha ff **//Ek Vivaah Aisa Bhi//** TH 5 (uptd chap 22 part 1,2)pg113

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mamtasingla

@mamtasingla

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Posted: 9 years ago

#671

suprb update

both very happy to hear baby's heartbeats😃

waiting for confession now😉

update soon

thnks fr pm

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priyanka

@Priyankaakdha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#672

Hii avikka diii..

Lovely update .. Jodha is deeply love in jalal ... Rat ko bhi nhi so pati bechari 😆

Jalal too joined her . now he got used to sleep having jodha in her arms ...😆😉

Joja remembered their childhood ...

Jalal took jodha with him to office ... Ab toh dur nhi rh pate ...

Hospital part was emotional .. I didnt think once that jodha had no attachment with her child ...

Joja shared emotional hug ..

Usually jalal take jodha in his arms while sleeping .. Now jodha herself lay in his arms ... Wow

Update soon .. Waiting for theor confession

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Dorperle

@Dorperle

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Posted: 9 years ago

#673

Beautiful and romantic update avika... 😳👏

A night under the stars, cute ,cute nd cozy moments 😳

Finally confession moment ...Jalal is fulfilling that wish of hers..inner wish😳 Party moments and confession awww...and the excitement seeing the child is priceless.

Interesting and awaited Precap.

must say
This update has covered many things in my eyes...the progression if feelings, intimacy, acknowledgement and love is coming openly in front of them and they can't deny that.

wonderful 👏

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#674

Hello dearie 🤗

Chapter 10

Lovely chapter avika❤️

I am glad that maham's out😆 and u wrote singh family's restlessness and excitement very well and how much they missed jo😊

so girl was excited to go at her home whilst her husband was restless😆 Liked it😉

Their eyes talk

I really loved it❤️❤️

Yep the pain was different. That time friends were parting but now a couple was parting for.. ummm.. 5-6 hrs??😆

Liked maina's enquiry mode😆 It's very natural. we all did the same and u penned it really well dear⭐️

Abdul's character was nice and and and here comes hoshiyar.

I was laughing at 1 avika.. I just loved that office scene. I was amazed to read that because I didn't expect comic content in this story🤣

well done girl👏👏

So jo was angry on jalal.. Something something was going on😛😛

Haina??😆

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#675

Chapter 11

I just loved this rasam avi❤️

It was an interesting read😉

He understood that she's angry and knew that she had added something in his food still he had it😛

Aww ur jalal is so sweet. I can't take this much sweetness😆

Anyways finally both patched up and they cleared everything about baby too that jalal was happy with her and their child😃

Lovely chapter it was⭐️⭐️

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#676

Chapter 12

Nice chapter😊

Car scene was nice and office scene where jalal was scared of hoshiyar was so hilarious😆😆

aww that canteen part,bf-gf thing. It's so amusing and lovely avika❤️❤️

Salima glared at his son that he's addressing her as his gf🤣

our Jo-ja too used to address each other like that😆

Finally that hospital part😛😛

Couple was embarassed to hear physical relationship word from doctor😆

Now I am asking u avi. is it possible btw them??

If No then I won't read next chapters 😆

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#677

Amazing update avika akka I enjoyed reading it...

I was in other world reading this update. ...

Jodha jalal have amazing moment between them...

Nd there self talk was so cute. ...

Jalal learnt to make only jodha's favourite food... so sweet...

They had a lovely night nd beautiful moment between them...

Jalal finally though he will confess to jodha... all d best for that jalal...

Nd d office nd hospital part was wow jalal care so much for jodha...

Nw jodha also accept his baby with ful heart... nd started with d fight for baby...

Waiting for next update akka...

Update soon. ...

Nd thanks for pm. ...

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Namita

@155pari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#678

Amazing update avika dii!!!

jo so much in love with ja..

their fights are way too cute!

ja always admiring jo...😃

jo again at ja's office...

their baby's heartbeats...

jo got emotional...

lovely!!

update soon!

thanx for the pm...😃

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#679

Chapter 13-part 1 and part 2

Nice chapters.

Loved their kiss❤️😆

and the song too😊

I was thinking from a long time to use this song but it will take time so never mind u used it before me😆😆

So we came to know the reason of maham's hatred for hindus😒

I liked mirza taking side of jo and shouting on maham😆

Ohk so one more love story is on the way. Loved jalal's dialogue maham will get a minor attack when she came to know that her son is falling for a hindu girl🤣

I am enjoying this story😊

Well done avi⭐️⭐️