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Posted: 10 years ago
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~ Don't Leave ~


"Jo... I know you love me damn it... Then why are you doing this..." he yelled with red puffy eyes to the lady who seemed unaffected with him...



"Look!! Firstly its Jodha... Secondly what I have for you is nothing but infatuation..." she said it in a no nonsense tone...



The regret, sadness, fear of losing, lingering around him changed into rage... Blind rage... He immediately decreased the distance between them... His ascending steps were complementing the sound of her descending steps... The intensity of his darkened orbs are making her deepest core shudder in fear...



"Angry Jalal is the most worst thing a person would have faced in the world."



But she got succeeded in hiding the traces of fear that are residing on her persona with his each nearing step...



"Ja.. Jalal... Aap..." she shuddered as her back touched the car... Jodha came here to destroy their unwanted relationship... Is it really unwanted??



Of course not!! But she has to!!



"So I didn't effect you in any slightest way.??" he asked...



"No.." she voiced firmly...



He wiped off his tears with her hand...



"You didn't feel my pain..."



"N..no" she said, bit of nervous...



"When I do this..." and he hugged her tight... Hiding her from the evil facade of outside world...



"No.." came a teary reply... She clutched her kurta tightly... She don't want to give up...



"No!! When I do this..." he breathed... While trailing his lips down her neck and nape...



"No..." she shut her eyes as much as she can and clutched his well built muscled shoulders...



He lifted his face up and smiled sadly at her soaked face with tears... He didn't left her from his dead grip...



"Not even when I do this..." with this he softly claimed her petals... Jodha being stubborn didn't let him invade... Salty water kept flowing from her closed orbs... She didn't have courage to look into those hopeful yet hurtful eyes...



" Then say it looking into my eyes..." he whispered...



Opening her reddish eyes she sstared into his eyes...



"I. Don't. Love. You." she shouted with her pitched teary voice... While taking few steps back... Tears kept flowing from her eyes...



Jalal heart stopped beating for the moment... His hopes got shattered into infinite pieces... Slicing his every emotion painfully... His shoulders dropped down in defeat...



"Hara diya jo... Sorry Jodha... You made me lose... You snatched my tag of M the winner" the pain inflicted voice pierced right in her heart... He laughed sadly at his fate...



The Jalal who never got lost in any aspect whether its his business, sports... Today got lost of life...



And stood there watching HIS... Now no more His lady, with the look of betrayal and regret...



Jodha immediately reached near her car tried to run away from Him... Her everything...




As soon as she opened the gate of the car... She heard a thud behind her... Turning around she watched the most unwanted scene of her life... HE on his knees... His hands joined together...



"Mat jao please.. Phir akela ho jaunga... Tut jaunga jo... Kya chati ho Mar jaun, tumhare liye... I will do that too... Please don't leave me alone again... Again life will leave me... The life you gave me... Kyo kar rahi ho esa... Jab jaana hi tha to kyu aayi mere paas kyu di mujhe esi life which is incomplete without you!! "



He pressed his hands more tightly, his face has became full red due to profusely sobbing...



For second time Jalal has begged before someone... First time he begged to someone...Actually not someone but almighty... Because he has snatched his Ammi from him...



After that day... Abbu can't be with him coz to set his future he has to struggle...
But abbu to left him and he lost him in some rivalry...



Jodha can't take it anymore... Reached to him running literally... And took him in her embrace... Jalal got his life back and without wasting any moment reprocriated...



"Jalal... Please forgive your jo!!" she cried holding him tight... She can't loose him because of enmity between him and her father due to business...



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Just a random shot... Pta nhi kya socha or likh diya... Wanna dedicate it to My Piyu di and Ashu...



Ok now m running to save myself from di and ashu because of such bakwaas dedication...



Sorry if it's not worth reading!! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
ress
unress

😭 😭 😭 😭
jaan!!
tu j mu j rulaa konsaa sukh praapt hota h😭 😭
mu j se type b ni kiya jaa ra😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
aaww!! my jalal...how much he hd to suffr...
n my jo...really too much😭 😭 😭 😭
tu ne bhr bhr k rulaaya h mu j aaj jaan😭 😭 😭 😭
n this not at all good...naa bilkul b ni😭 😭 😭 😭
but it ws writtn beautifully jaan
awesome!!
their pain...
their love...
everything!!
i ws flowing with their pain...

Edited by Ashvneet2399 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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haaww!! mere liye???
sachiii??
aaww!!! love u my jaaannn🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Unresss
Yayy I m third 🥳
Ohh my myy neetu 😲 it was damn emotional yr 😭😭😭
Poor jalal begging in front of jo that too for the first time in his life 😲 lekin kehte h na ki pyaar mein sab karna padta h 😉😆
I loved it neetu 👏👏 u wrote it very beautifully...kamaal kar diya yr 👏
Thanks for pm 😊
Edited by kajalparijat - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😳aww...how much he loves her ,
& she is also ready to sacrifice for his sake , for her unconditional love for him...
fantastic monu...👏 & thanx for the pm .
also , update ur stories dear am waiting...😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice shot
thank god jodha came back
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Beautyful monu...
n very emotional n heart touching...loved it dear.
aww..poor ja was so broken n scatterd aftr jo rejection n soo helpless...u rite his emotion of fear to lose hr his life n all his feeling pain helplessness last hope to get hr bck..all very well monu..loved reading every bit of it.
n jo was all the way trying hard to hide her Love n fear of losing him but it says naa "pyaar chupata nahii " atlast she hv to cm bck to him..
a line "she heard a sound of thud " oh god while reading this line i gt scared myb he done sumthing to him but thank god thr was nthing lik
tht infct aftr seeing him tht positin she cnt hold hersrlf n come bck to the place wher she belong to...aww beautyful sweetipie..loved it
n i dnt understnd y u always said ur beautyful stories "bakwass" tumharii naa pitaai hogi aab smjhii agr aab se phir apni stories ko bakwass bola toh..
thank u fr pm 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome os neetu...
And dare call it bakwaas
Can you turn it into a ss..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
Aww.. 😊
Lovely.Lovely OS! ❤️
It is just amazing!
And emotional 😭
But absolutely Awesome! 😃
Thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
Hey thnx 4 d pm..nice concept..diffrnt thinking..i love d way u express jalal's plight..commendable job dr..

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