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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Beautyful monu..but itta rulana zaroori tha kya😭

Mar Padegi ab , if u say it is bakwas😡

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very emotional heart paining...loved it though👏

poor Jalal was so helpless and shattered after rejection.Why Jodha ...why?

But Monu, you wrote those feelings and his fer losing her so so well👏 Like his life is taken away from him.But she felt his pull too and couldn't take it no longer and came backto him.Seriously I loved it.Very balanced , full of displaying emotions of fear, pain, loss, love, despair...everythis is so well portrayed⭐️

thank u fr pm 🤗

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Sreshtha

@SreshthaBiswas

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Neetu kitna emotional story tha yrr😭😭😭

Ro rhi hu abhi v😭

Poor Jalal 😭

Poor Jodha 😭

But thank God Jo didn't leave him😭 She came back😃

Update soon... Wanna cry again😉😆 n thanks for d pm😊

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Geetbaala

@Geetbaala

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Hey Neetu dear...

Awesome OS.

I loved it.

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Dani

@erning_w

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Wow.. so emotional Neetu

Beautiful OS

Thanks for the pm dear :)

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Priyanka

@..Prii1994..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Thank you so so much for this dedication my sweet li'l baby... 😊

I cannot thank you enough for all this love and care you keep showering on me since the time you landed in my life... 😃

I am so so happy to have such a sweet baby of mine... My FIRST BABY!!!! 😊

Coming to the OS, it is truly one of a kind... 👏

Simply wow... Full of emotions- Love, Pain, Separation and Longing...

You have portrayed each and every emotion fabulously... ⭐️

I actually could feel them while reading your master piece... 😭

Thank yo so so much for this amazing creation... 😊

I loved it to the core... ❤️

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Neetu,rula diya mujhe 😭
Awesome OS dearie 👏
Thnx for the pm 😊
Update ur stories soon 😡

A suggestion dear,write "AkDha OS" prior to the title always so that it appears when we search for stories on AkDha.