FF ' THE START OF US' chapter 3 updated on pg 71 || 26th dec

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divya joshi

@divyaJA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#371

wow sooo mindblowing update..
soo funny...
plzz update nxt part soon..plzz zyada wait mat karana...
its sooo amazing

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divya joshi

@divyaJA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#372

wow sooo mindblowing update...its too amazing..
plzz update nxt asap...zyada wait mat karana...

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Avika444

@avika444

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#373

Hey deekshu 🤗superb update bangaram

Poor jalal he was himself lost in the mall and now he had to care of rohan too.

Aww jajo first meeting and he shouted on her for no reason

But jo is sweet .she didnt say anything much

Hayyee he was blowed by her beauty

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

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Shinchan_20

@Shinchan_20

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#374

Ohh my it was hilarious dear 🤣
Rohan is soo smart and clever...he demanded both superman amd batman from poor jalal..
So joja met for the first time...i've read many joja stories till now but believe me dear this was the best encounter of them till today...
Thodi der baad hi sahi but jalal ko realise ho hi gaya ki itni beautiful ladki kisi ki mom nahi ho sakti :-D ;-)
thnku for such an amazing and wonderful update deekshu...
Continue soon n thnku for pm

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#375

superb update deekshu...
loved it this boy was so cute nd his actions was so sweet...
he maid jodha jalal meet...
there meeting was good... even though it started with jalal scolding jodha... but so lovely jadha cleared it...
nd I loved jalal self talk tooo...
thanks for d pm dear...
update next part soon...

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Dani

@erning_w

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#376

Originally posted by: paridhiloveu
waiting

Unres 😳

Cheli.. 🤗

It's superb update ⭐️

Love their first meet 😆

And I think for next chapter it's Jalal turn to found his family but with helping by Jo 😆 that's be cool Cheli 😆

Continue soon sweety

And thanks a lot for the pm 🤗

Aur haan. If you already got your eggs and tomatoes then you can give it to me. And i'll make omelets for you 😆😆

Edited by erning_w - 9 years ago

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swetiii

@swetiii

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#377

awsum deeksha...

hehe
funny meeting

itne time k baad update kia tu ne
aur woh b itna short chappi

main gussa hu
*pout*

ab jaldi se update karna
aur long chappi
hehe

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deepa111

@deepa111

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#378

Nice update!!

Jalal n rohan part was awesum.bechara jalal fas gya nd become baby sitter 😆
Nd then jo ja meet 😳
Nd that to b like boom 🤣 .
Ja bina kuch sune aur jane jo p blast ho gya vo to accha h jo keep calm herself nd understnd him nhi to world war ho jati to dono me 😆 .
Bt ja is totally lattu over jo 😉 .
Now m eager to read it further.so deekshu update it soon...

Edited by deepa_chauhan - 9 years ago