FF ' THE START OF US' chapter 3 updated on pg 71 || 26th dec - Page 40

Originally posted by: 1357raksha

superb update deekshu... thank you di🤗
loved it this boy was so cute nd his actions was so sweet...
he maid jodha jalal meet...

aww sachi😆
there meeting was good... even though it started with jalal scolding jodha... but so lovely jadha cleared it... she is smart na 😎
nd I loved jalal self talk tooo...

thank you
thanks for d pm dear...

Welcome
update next part soon...

Of course di 😃

Originally posted by: erning_w

Unres 😳

Cheli.. 🤗. akka!!! 😛

It's superb update ⭐️ thank you

Love their first meet 😆really? Then I am glad you liked it

And I think for next chapter it's Jalal turn to found his family but with helping by Jo 😆 that's be cool Cheli 😆. U want this to be done hehehe

Continue soon sweety

And thanks a lot for the pm 🤗

Welcome welcome

Aur haan. If you already got your eggs and tomatoes then you can give it to me. And i'll make omelets for you 😆😆

Originally posted by: swetiii

awsum deeksha... thank you sweetie
😳
hehe
funny meeting

itne time k baad update kia tu ne
aur woh b itna short chappi

arre it was so big 😲


main gussa hu
*pout*

Sorry na if you think it's small then I will update big next time don't be angry😕

ab jaldi se update karna
aur long chappi
hehe

Originally posted by: deepa_chauhan

Nice update!! Thank you deepzz di

Jalal n rohan part was awesum.bechara jalal fas gya nd become baby sitter 😆 Ha na bichara
Nd then jo ja meet 😳
Nd that to b like boom 🤣 . Like me😉
Ja bina kuch sune aur jane jo p blast ho gya vo to accha h jo keep calm herself nd understnd him nhi to world war ho jati to dono me 😆 . Ha fhir Kya hota vo God hi jaane 😃
Bt ja is totally lattu over jo 😉 . Vo tho hamesha rahta h
Now m eager to read it further.so deekshu update it soon...

Originally posted by: Monucute

Fantastic update deekshu
thanks for the pm
update soon

Originally posted by: zuytre

Their first meet was mind blowing

Lovely update

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: ..Prii1994..

Itna chotu saa update 😔

You should have made it a bigger one no...

Originally posted by: garg_sahil

It was just a awsm update deeku

really bore nahi laga ?😲
oh bichara jalal khud kho gaya aur uss rohan ki mom ko dhund raha h. Yup poor him Sab log najane Kya Kya karvate h story se hehehe😆
and that rohan 🤣 is so clever yr. Vo tho hoga hi character kisne add kiya hehehe😎
mujhe laga tha ki aaj toh jalal jarur pittega jo se
par khushkismat tha jo Bach gaya

Ha socha tho Kuch asa Mene bhi tha
now he is full on lattu on jo

Originally posted by: aswin2134ja

Very nice chapter jalal and little boy talking is very cute finding little boy mom is very interesting part then jalal misunderstanding jodha as a mom of little boy and his lecture is super after know his mistake his thinking and jodha lecture is very nice update nest chapter soon pm me thanks for pm don't be late

Originally posted by: AkankshaJA

Congo for ur first story deeksha... 🤗