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Vtui

@Vtui

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik
Love the update rajni 😃
Jalal was JOs first crush When jo first saw him out side the hospital u expressed jo s feelings beautifully.. Why she was feeling dull andhera inside her heart .. is some thing bad gonna happen
Hoping every thing would be fine with them 😊
thanks for pm dear😊

Thanx for wonderful feed-backShruti.🤗 .. rest ... all I can say...wait and see ...

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: Vtui

Thanx for wonderful feed-backShruti.🤗 .. rest ... all I can say...wait and see ...

Oh ok will wait really love this story rajni😳

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harshal

@harshu27

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#183

hiii srry replying late...bt luved ur new stry congrats fr d same 😃 I luved d concept chalo u gav a new field 2 jalal dat 2 a scientist 😉 amazing... and he is v kind and nt arrogant 😆 m eagerly waiting fr jallu's opertn so dat he cn see his dream gurl... 😉 😆

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Vtui

@Vtui

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: harshu27
hiii srry replying late...bt luved ur new stry congrats fr d same 😃 I luved d concept chalo u gav a new field 2 jalal dat 2 a scientist 😉 amazing... and he is v kind and nt arrogant 😆 m eagerly waiting fr jallu's opertn so dat he cn see his dream gurl... 😉 😆

never Mind harshu... Its never late to be too late... Yah u know laga ki scientists banaya toh shayad story easy ho jaye likhne ko, nut yeh to aur bhi tough ho gayi😭, BTW I myself saved two accidents just by narrow gap😆---one during stdy , one during work😆, so imagination upto that worked well but later---- 😭... But thats OK , I am finding obsession with story, so story-line is making its own way...and thanks for feed-back dear😳

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harshal

@harshu27

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: Vtui

never Mind harshu... Its never late to be too late... Yah u know laga ki scientists banaya toh shayad story easy ho jaye likhne ko, nut yeh to aur bhi tough ho gayi😭, BTW I myself saved two accidents just by narrow gap😆---one during stdy , one during work😆, so imagination upto that worked well but later----😭... But thats OK , I am finding obsession with story, so story-line is making its own way...and thanks for feed-back dear😳

u r grt dear... m actuly luving ur stry...chalo iss bahane scientist ki luv stry bhi padne milegi 😉 😃 do accidents 😲 grt u r... 😆 do continue its goin on grt... 😉

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Namita

@155pari

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: Vtui

Thanks dear namita, next update may be 2moro, not sure

Waiting fr d update rajni dii...

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Vtui

@Vtui

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: 155pari

Waiting fr d update rajni dii...

Sorry Namita, my holidays just started, and I cud not do this one on Sunday , I m so sorry dear , it's night time here about 12pm so will try to do one definitely by this Friday . My apologies for the delay

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Vtui

@Vtui

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: Acchu02
superb

Thanks for liking dear

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Deeksha Rao

@paridhiloveu

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#189

Awesome wrote di

read all the chapters in one go

Jodha's first crush was jallu so sweet and jallu's dream girl is Jodha awww ee.

who is donating eyes to jallu?( big Q)

loved your story di please update soonish

btw next chapter kab?

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Vtui

@Vtui

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: paridhiloveu
Awesome wrote di
read all the chapters in one go
Jodha's first crush was jallu so sweet and jallu's dream girl is Jodha awww ee.
who is donating eyes to jallu?( big Q)
loved your story di please update soonish
btw next chapter kab?

Hopefully Friday , thanx for liking my story