**** A PaiR of eYes ****{{Akdha S Last CHAPTER 8 aug 8 pg 49}}

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My apologizes in advance for all mistakes, errors, or being illogical. This ss is just fictional, nothing near to reality.


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"Sir, my name is Jodha. I am appointed as your nurse until your operation day. Please sit on wheel chair sir, I will take u to ur room" A very humble and polite voice welcomed Jalal at the hospital gate.

Jalal's car has just reached out-side- CHAKSHU-Hospital in Manali.he shivered a bit with cold wave of Manali. He has visited Manali before a number of items, has been to this hospital a number of times to say hi to his friend, the owner doctor of this hospital Mr J Ambani, another millionare like him . This hospital boasts of best facilities in eye-care world-wide. Jalal never thought , there cud be a day in his life, when he wud need the help of wheels in this hospital. The helplessness was well written on his face. But then that's life, you can only play ur part, the rest is in Kanha's hand. He always remember Geeta verse " Kurm kar phal ki itcha mat rakh". His only satisfaction was that he did not do anything wrong, so if this tragedy is part of his life,then he has to accept it. He was unsure of how he is going to live his future life. There was no ray of hope in his life now. He wud probably be merely dependent on others from now on-wards.

That cud only be designated a fateful day when Jalal met this accident as otherwise he was an expert scientist in his field. He was developing a new method to find out the Chemical Oxyzen Demand, for which he was mixing concn H2SO4 in water. Not that, he was doing this first time, it was just accidental that flask full of acid slipped from his hand, and landed in big beaker full of water
sitting below on work-bench top. Next minute, he did not realise anything except that,there was total darkness. He cud hear the running voices, chaos around him, he was driven to some -where probably to a hospital, what he cud make out from smells...A flash-back passed in his mind of the day when concentrated acid has flown directly deep down in his eyes after getting mixed with water.

After making him sit on his bed, nurse pulled down the window curtains of his room. Sir, I will bring you coffe, aap aram kijiye. What's the time" Jalal ne pucha, though he thought the time does not hold any value to him now, still "6 O'clock sir, doctor sahib be aate honge
aapse milne." Jalal was feeling a bit cold, Realising this Jodha pulled a blanket to cover his legs.Jodha
switched on the lights before going out to make coffee.

"Hi Jalal, Kaise ho yaar, the familiar sound struck his ear.Jalal akele aaye ho,, u have not yet informed Aunty about ur eyes-accident, that's not gud. There in Dubai, she must have been thinking, u r hale and hearty. She will also scold me, why I did not inform her. Any-way abh to sab theek ho hi jayega, hopefully now u don't have to tell her any-thing, otherwise she will never allow you again
to do the research experiments yourself." "have patience Dr sahib, muje bhi to kuch kahne do, are vision gayi hai, jubaan nahi" Jalal ne hasne ki nakam koshish ki . Dr cud very well understand the khokhli hasi. "Dont worry,yaar God willing everything will be fine, he patted jalal's shoulder. So, how is Aunti, or woh tumahri Dream Girl, how is she? Does she still come to see u in ur dreams, or have ditched u to come in someone else's dream. Dr. tried to change the topic, taking it to lighter side. Dream Girl, smile ki ek thin line uske hothon per aa gayi."Haan abh to dream girl totally dreamy ho gayi hai.Now even if I get her in reality, I will be seeing her in dreams only, now vision hi nahi hai to." Jalal though sad always tried to show his happy face in front of evey-one.

The two friends chatted for nearly two hrs. Jodha served them coffee and snacks."Please call me if u need any type of help" before going out, she reminded Jalal by pressing this Remote control" She handed remote to Jalal, Jalal kept it near his pillow, within his reach.


I cud not understand one thing, Jalal started talking to Dr again "when according to American Hospital, my eyes can not be transplanted with the eyes of a dead prson, only a living person can donate it. then how cud u do this. U know na, I am not in favour of buying another's vision with money" Jalalu don't worry about anything. At the moment I have to perform an urgent surgery, I will C U later.


Dream girl, thats what was the name given to girl, who he claimed is a part of almost his all dreams. Of course it's more frequent these days. This dream girl whom he has never met except in his dreams. He can see her so clearly in his dreams that he knows, she is beautiful, have grace, very polite...But he cud not understand one thing, why she luks so sad?, but then who knows wether she exists or not. After all she visits him only in his dreams.</font>


His search for her in real life had shown zero results in past two years . He searched almost all
web-pages of Shaadi.com in hope to catch her. He recognise her face so well that he draw a family size picture of hers in his PHP as Gif, chalti firti dream girl, he named it and saved it as screen saver on his ipad . All his friends have GFs, but he never tried to go with any one though a lot of girls were crazy for him. I have started living more in past rather in present.May be thats how a blind person live their life""Jalal smiled to himself.


Jalal had inherted wealth and Intelligence, He completed science owners at young age of twenty. Thoroughly interested in Science and research, he set up world class level
research Institute at Banglore by his own choice. He employed a larze number of
scientists, but experimenting and researching
new things was his hobby and profession both.[/NOCOPY]


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congrats for new story dear😊
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di congo 4 the new story 😊
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Awesome start di Jalal lost his vision so sad
I think his dream girl is Jodha
di i just can't wait to read more
plz update soon and thnks 4 the pm di😛
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Originally posted by: meeramiss18

Awesome start di Jalal lost his vision so sad

I think his dream girl is Jodha
di i just can't wait to read more
plz update soon and thnks 4 the pm di😛


🤗 meera, u most welcome, and I will try to give another and probably the firs and last update soon
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Congo for new story dii
Aur ye kya aapne jalal ko blind bana diya
Nishu padegi toh kya hoga dii
Uska dil toot jayega 😆
Jokes apart hehehe
Interesting concept dii
Poor jalal lost his eyes during some experiment
Hope he finds a suitable eye donor for him
Aur donor Jo ko mat banana
Warna mera dil toot jayega .:-( :-(
Who is jalal's dream girl ??
I'm sure it's jodha
Kya hoga jalal ka when he will get his eyes and see his dream girl jodha
Waiting for khulaasa
Update soon pls
Thanks for pm:-) :-)
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Congo di for new story!!👍🏼
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Wow di!! Nice start!!!😊
Jalal is blind...😭
I think his dream girl is surely Jodha!!!😳
Di please don't make Jodha eye donor...😒
Continue soon!!!
Thanks for the pm!!!😊
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Originally posted by: avika444

Congo for new story dii
Aur ye kya aapne jalal ko blind bana diya
Nishu padegi toh kya hoga dii
Uska dil toot jayega 😆
Jokes apart hehehe
Interesting concept dii
Poor jalal lost his eyes during some experiment
Hope he finds a suitable eye donor for him
Aur donor Jo ko mat banana
Warna mera dil toot jayega .:-( :-(
Who is jalal's dream girl ??
I'm sure it's jodha
Kya hoga jalal ka when he will get his eyes and see his dream girl jodha
Waiting for khulaasa
Update soon pls
Thanks for pm:-) :-)


Thanks Avika, thank God , mishu abhi tuk dikhai nahi di, uska Jalal blind ho gya, very sorry girls😆, Jalal ko donor to bahut mil jayemge, uske pass paisa hai, but uske principals, woh accept karega yah nahi, pata nahi, and uska fate, dekho usme kya likha hai... anyways. Avika, Packing shuru ho gayi yah nahin

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