~Revenge~ Thread-3 (THREAD CLOSED)

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meera

@meeramiss18

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#161

Vry emotional update neetu dear

it was awesome feeling pity 4 jalal

plz try to give quick updates atleast😛

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harsh

@sirat.kaur

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#162

nice ch
sad fr ja past
plz continue n try to update regularly...

Edited by sirat15 - 10 years ago

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Acchu02

@Acchu02

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#163

Ooo... my poor Jallal... superb Dea... finally JA n Jo are together .. loved it

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swetiii

@swetiii

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#164

hey neetu
plz dont discontinue it...
the chaappi was suprb
poor ja
update sooon

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Sona bhatt

@Bittu94rawat

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#165

Dear update was surpb...full of emotions...feling bad for jalaa...hope jo will handle him strongly...

Dear i think respons r becming less coz u promisd dat u will update regulrly bt from few days u r not doing so...i knw its all due to exmz ... Bt i think dis is da resn..bt i luv ur updts...wating for next dear

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deepa111

@deepa111

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#166

awesum update neetu
feelin pity on jalal.really he really suffered alot.first he loooses his parents nd the his grandparents who become his sole.
now i can why he feared to trust someone becoz fear of loosing his loves grip over him.hope jo's love n care help hom to over come his fear.
nd neetu we all love ur story .each part is nice .
plz keep cont. it .

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#167

Well written dear
So sad that Jalal had to go through so much of pain at that age.
Pls continue writing whenever u find time..

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Arifa Sultana Shefa.

@Magpie_

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#168

neetu aj main kuch nehi bolungi kyunki mujhe pata nehi kya bolna chaiye...

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Aditi

@Phulchukki

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#169

My god..so emotional update..feeling very bad for jalal 😭..update soon
Nd hey this story is awesome u shld continue it nd u have to...sry I could not comment on the last chapter as I didn't came online..nd plz try to update daily..jst try 😊