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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik
Update kaha monu😡

updating di chill😛😉

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: Monucute

updating shefu

when?waiting yrr

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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: ...Shefa...

when?waiting yrr

in an hour baby ...

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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#154

...Chapter - 32...

"jo..." jalal started his story... Jodha looks at him curiosly... He looks at her with teary eyes "jo do you know how it feels when you are just 8 years old, waiting for your parents to reach at home on your birthday carving for their love and affection,carving for their just a forehead kiss chah ... Just one wish but... But what i got.. they didn't come up, and at midnight your dad came up drunk and when... When you ask about mom, he beats you like a stray animal..." his grip on her waist tightens... "when i woke up in the morning,waves of pain hits my body... I tried to stand up but can't because of my legs were numb... I tried to look around for someone for help, basically that lady whom i called mother ... But i got none, i scrawled towards my room and anyhow latched the door... Pain has became unbearable for me, i just cried my lungs out ... I thought maybe... Maybe someone will come hearing my cries but again disappointment knocked my door... That day was just starting of my miserable chilhood... I was in that room for 2 bloody days without any food just in fearing about my dad..." jodha pressed her lips together to suppress the cry that was threatening her to come out loud... "next day i heard my mom calling me... My heart got its beat back... I immediately opened the door and saw her... I ran upto her though my wounds were green but don't know where i got the power... But i cared none my body was aching, but at that moment the thing which mattered me is my saviour my mom... I ran upto her and hugged her... My mom embraced me tightly neglecting my wounds... I cried in pain and due to voices my dad appeared from a room and snatched me harshly from her... I was scared, my body began trembling riminscing the night's beating... They started arguing and they forgot again that they have a son as they always do while fighting... They abused each other, they counted each other sins and my so called father accused my mother for having affair... And claimed me as a sin of my mother and the other man... My mother ego was so big that she throw me on my father's feet calling me my dad's dirty blood and left me with him... And again my dad vent his anger and frustration on me... Being a child of 8 years i don't know what the hell is happening?? And what my fault is so i was recieving this punishment... I got fainted and when opened my eyes at a hospital, i roamed my eyes and found that my grand paa was scolding my dad... In anger he left from there... My grand parents took me to their home and took a great care of mine.. My colourless life was getting coloured again... I was happy but you know he" jalal pointed towards ceiling... "he being stubborn don't let my happiness be mine... He again snatched my happiness... It has been two years i was living with them.. They are the best.. One day i returned from school and found my home locked.. So went a neighbour's house.. Aunty respects my grandparents and we are like a family... So i went to her house... I rang the doorbell and she opened it, i walked in she informed me that a friend of grandpa got a heart attack both my grandpa and grandma went to him... So i have to wait... Aunty brought me some food and handed me the remote of television... I smiled she is like a mother figure for me... A lone tear escaped my eyes remembering that lady whom i called mother... But i decided not to shed a single tear on them... So just turned the tv on and a news channel was coming i tried to change it but the remote is not working and i was just busy in fidgeting and patting it so that it will work but my mind got numb hearing the news that a truck had hitted a car and the old couple in the car died at the spot... And i think you had guessed whom they are they are my soul parents... My grand maa and grand paa... And i got numb, my life became colourless again... Something inside me got badly broken and shattered that day... I doesn't know what but then i got realized it is my SOUL "

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Edited by Monucute - 10 years ago

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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#155

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Hey guys i think update is long enough...
Ok guys i want to inform you all that i m really happy with the response... But from some updates i m getting a bit low response... If you people don't want me to continue... Please let me know be frank... Ok so now an imp thing i won't update regularly from tmrw as my classes are starting so can't update daily.. But will try to update asap...

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Neetu aka Monu

Edited by Monucute - 10 years ago