Akdha shots-The lover Part 6 updated on page 104 (22/02/2015)

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#781

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

You are such a sweetheart laksh🤗

U also dear...

Thank u payu...🤗

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#782

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

ha ha ha
but someone will be very happy after that😆

Hahaha...😳😉

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#783

Payal🤗

Thanks for updating this one for us😃

Why is Jallu getting slapped by Jo in all the stories🤣

Both of you(Lakshmi akka and you) have teamed up on him😆

Stupid Surya and Ruku played with Jodha and now punched Jalal twice😲😡

Loved Jo's sherni avataar😆.Jallu was happily enjoying the scene.I wish he helped her in this😛

Bharmal and Maina are also making fun of their jamai😆Poor fellow😆

Loved and enjoyed everything,dear😊

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Bhagyashree

@Bthakur

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#784

Amazing update.

Surya got slap to jodha very fantastic. He deserve it.

Update soon

Thanks for pm

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Dani

@erning_w

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#785

Superb as usual Payal

Oh God.. poor Jalal.. he had twice punch from surya plus slap from his beloved wife 😆

But now is clear and no more misunderstandings

And their first aid just too sweet

Eagerly waiting for precap

And thanks for the pm 😊

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maheshi

@amitaprasad

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#786

as always great chappy.ur writing is effortless.i think writing is in ur gene.why u always think about negative comments? what about ur fans who desperately wait for an update.think about them.hey dear sometimes my like buton does not work because here internet connection is horrible and believe me takes hours sometime days to comment.thank u for pm.count them who cares for u.

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#787

Originally posted by: amitaprasad
as always great chappy.ur writing is effortless.i think writing is in ur gene.why u always think about negative comments? what about ur fans who desperately wait for an update.think about them.hey dear sometimes my like buton does not work because here internet connection is horrible and believe me takes hours sometime days to comment.thank u for pm.count them who cares for u.

Thanks dear for ur lovely words😊

Glad u liked the chapter and I was upset with those who pmed me after updating teaser of that os and asked me to update asap and when I did they just didn't bother to hit like or comment, atleast with that I may get to know have they read or not.

This thing really irks me sometimes. and yes I care for those who support me always inspite of my horrible stories that's why I updated this chapter for my friends who were asking me to update.

Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#788

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh
Hi Payal
First of all I liked this slaptastic update of yours😆
Second many of us have written much more than "nice"
Why do you ignore our comments and concentrate on number of comments? As a fan of your writing many other readers like me love to read your updates. So I once again request you to ignore all such negative thoughts and update awesome chappies for us like temptation which was fantastic and sizzling ...

Thankyou!!😊

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#789

Originally posted by: jodhavani94
hey it was too good. I read all your stories and loved it. and you are getting response for every stories... and temptation series is wonderful I loved it especially the recent one please don't discontinue it... I have broken my mounvrath because you were talking about discontinuing it... pls continue soon...

Thanks a lot for reading my stories dear😊

Glad u broke ur maunt vrat😆