Akdha shots-The lover Part 6 updated on page 104 (22/02/2015) - Page 78

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

Unres...

Part 1:

Oh my god...what a start...Payal...

At starting I thought Jodha & Jalal marriage was happening

But suddenly surya appeared...

Our Jodha is crying 😭...

When the I read flashback I wanted to give a slap to hero...

How can he call as like that...

I didn't like Jalal..

But when he came back I was doing

Thank god.. He said sorry...how sweet...

Look Jodha didn't gave punishment... How sweet...

I love u jo..

Wow... They eloped from marriage..

Because of Jalal only Jodha took such decision,,,

What is this Jalal always mess up Jodha life...

>> You won't believe I wrote this part as an OS during my exams. I was getting bored due to studying continuously and I just wrote whatever I got in my mind without thinking much. I was amazed at the response and some of them wanted to see surya's reaction so I continued this story.

Yep she ran away from her wedding else she had to marry that idiot surya.😆

Part 2:

Wow Jalal & Jodha at temple..

Good Jalal u took correct decision...

Or else I may kill u.. 😡

Without telling anything Jodha understood u Jalal... 😛

Wow Abdul is a true friend arranged everything...too good...

Good job Abdul👏

I must say he is naughty also arranged Sr also..

Jalal u are really lucky to have Abdul as ur friend...

Surprise.. I am also waiting for surprise...

Finally our Jodha & Jalal are married...

Hurray.. Party time...🥳

Song is Superb Payal...

Let's go mrs Mohammed... I just loved this line...😳

>>>>> he he yeah he thought after getting married to her..her family might spare his life and forgave him for eloping with their daughter. 😆Yep abdul arranged everything for them.😉

I loved that song.. Glad u liked that too.😊

Thanks dear..😃

Part 3:

Finally reached farm house..

Oh my god they are in a relation for 3 years..

Separated for 6 months...

Jalal how can u do this??? 😡

For six months how u lived without jodha???😲

Poor Jodha crying for u...

I don't like this Jalal...but it's ok.. U are back..

In the car.. Wow how romantic...😳

I was blushing like a idiot..while reading.

Just mere touch of Jodha makes him lose for her...

But came expected...

hahaha...😆

U did a good job Jodha.. 👏

Slappp...

I expected this from u from starting..

U did now...

He was shocked...Jodha rocked...

But plz Jodha don't give that shy smile...

He won't live u... Oops he already understood u...

How sweet when she said 10 days 15 days finally 1 month...

>>>> Yeah finally they reached.😉

Jalal was so desperate u know😆

He he I like when someone says that they're blushing while reading my updates🤣

Ha ha thanks dear.. everyone liked that part. Slap was so unexpected for them. But u were expecting this only.Nice😛

Part 4:

Jalal... U really got the pulse of Jodha...

U put a smooth song to trap Jodha???😉

I must say Payal... U have very good collection of songs...

That to opt for the situation...

Good job Payal...👏

Ok coming update,,

Payal ur Jalal really knows Jodha weakness...

It was superb & so sexy update...

i was really blushed..

It seems along with Jodha for me also redness is permenant on my cheeks

When I read ur update...

U penned it very well payaliya...

So beautiful...

Love u dear...

>>>>> yeah he knows her better. Thanks dear.. I love music so much.😊

My jalal❤️

He he I want to see ur red cheeks😆

Thanks a lot dear.. I love u alot🤗

Part 5:

Wow finally.. Both became one..

Jalal u started again morning romance...😉

I think u want to fill these 6 months separation...

Won't u??😳

I just loved the way he wake up Jodha...

Jungleebilli... Control ur tongue Jalal or else she will show u real Jodha..Hahahha...😆😆

U should have write the bathtub scene also Payal...

But it's ok,, it was cool & beautiful morning update..

Loved it..

Oh my god...

Who is that guy??

Dare to punch Jalal????

I Must say he really have guts to do that..

>>>> yep the boy was smitten. Glad u liked his way.😆😃

Well I think every girl would like this way of waking up.😆 haina??😉😆

Everyone was saying that.. I will write bathing scenes in last part dear as per on demand of my darling friend shruti.😛

He's surya. But his anger was justified na.. woh bechara wait he karta reh gaya jo ka.😆

Payal... Totally completly beautiful story...

I loved each & ever bit...

I am thinking how come I missed this beautiful story...

Lash next time don't miss Paya story... I Have to keep this remind on my mind Payal...

U are really amazing writer...

U are really expert any expressing feelings..

Thanks sooo much for the wonderful story...

Now I understood y Avika wants this update...

Great work Payal..👏👏👏

Love u dear...

A biggg 🤗 to u...

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

>>>>> Thanks a ton dear.. I am so glad u read this story and liked it too.😊

Frankly I didn't expect u to waste ur time on giving comments on every part.. But u did and I am so pleased with this.😃

Thankyou so much dear.. Love you so much 🤗

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

Res ...

So it is surya...

How dare u surya to lunch on our Jalal???

& u gave two???😡

Wow our Jodha don't know anything getting ready..

>>> She's in her dreamland when her husband was getting punches from surya😆

I loved when he parted her maang to put sindoor..( it's in 5 th part but I read all at once na so confused.. I thought it is in 6 th part)

>>> Actually I wrote this part only to tell surya that she's married now😆

Ok..

How dare u surya for using bad words for Jalal...😡

I must say surya was dead by looking at the bed...😆

I liked when jo said we are married...

>>> Yeah😆 Infact jo ja were laughing at his shocked reaction😆

Hahah,,, what a slaps Jodha...u did a great job baby...👏👏

Bharmal uncle u came at the right moment... Lucky surya he adjusted with only two slaps...

Bharmal uncle saved u from Jodha.. Or else u are dead...

>>>> Right.. 🤣

Ha ruks... I hate u... U played a sick game... But it's ok,. At least u realized finally...

Maina aunty... Oh god... This mothers na,, always ready with lectures...

>>> Very true.. if a father didn't scold us for any wrongdoing then they have problem in that also😆

Poor fathers I must say.. They has to face the mothers wrath...

Slappp...

Oh Jodha... U did again...

But I understood y u did that...

6 months is not a joke...

Thank god jalal ..u are not with that ruks..or else imagine what's ur condition now...

Hahahh..😆

I was laughing like a mad Payal..

>>> Glad I could make u laugh dearie😃

When Jalal Said I want first aid..😉

Totally cool & nice update...

Wow.. Next chapter sr again,.. Waiting for it,,,

>>>> Yep SR +their bathing scenes too😉😆

Thnak u sooo much for updating...

Love u dear..❤️

🤗

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Thanks a ton for this lovely comment dear🤗

Love u laksh❤️

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

Well I liked each & every part..

So i gave my opinion...

Don't say that payu...I didn't wasted my time at all...

I really happy to comment on ur stories...

Love u to..🤗

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

So I will be waiting...then...

I am sure I will blush like a idiot again... No doubt...Hahahha...😳

❤️

🤗

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Will try my best to make u blush again😆

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

If I blush again... Someone will give me a r u mad look,,,

😳

Hahah...

But still waiting...