Akdha FF - A spontaneous desire Chapter 20 TZR updated pg 159 June 24

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Meenakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

awesome chapter, i just loved it.thank u for updated soon dear.waiting for chap 4

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renuganesh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Wow..buddy I like this chappy vv much
Jo thought that all because of jalal but the real culprit is that monster
Jo blushes thinking about her 1st kiss its so cute
Jalal is always adamant hero..wants to marry her within 5 days
Oh..ur planning to write a historical story with jajo..it ll be interesting start that one too...
Thnxs 4 fast update
Thnxs 4 pm ..
Waiting 4 nxt chappy

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swriter

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

nice story plz continue i like your every chapter👏
plz update soon😛

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Arifa Sultana Shefa.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

very interesting... ...plz pm me when you update

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mamtasingla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

u r just a fabalous writer
loved the plot
akdha's first puplic kiss
eagerly waiting for the response of jodha on rishta
update soon
pm me too

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Nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Awesome chapter... Loved ur ff... Read it in one go... It's awesome and do pm me when u update...

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zakia4

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

wow very nice update.loved it so much waiting for the next chappy.i love your story so much.please update soon.

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crystalwings

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Teaser Chapter 4

At The Royal Taj: 0300 am

Jodha lay in bed staring at ceiling, turns her head and looks at the clock - 0300 am tossing and turning in bed, unable to sleep, the luxuriously soft linen offered no comfort, in 24 hrs since her feet touched homeland, her life has become a total chaos, every time she closes her eyes, she sees him ... scenes of the events at the Mogul Ritz play over and over like a movie...feels his touch, his warm breath ...thinks .. I am loosing my sleep over that arrogant Mr Jalaluddin Mohammed - I will make him pay ...he took away a lot from me by force .. I lost my dream first kiss, my romantic first touch, my sleep, my peace of mind ... I hate him... I hate him

At the Mohammed Mansion: 0300 am

Jalal is unable to sleep, he gets up picks up his phone, reviews the images he had saved of her, he could'nt remember the last time he'd seen such big expressive eyes, full lips, flawless soft skin, he closes his eyes and recalls trying to silence her, her soft lips, her trembling body as he touched her ... feels a glow of warm passion growing in him...this desire is driving me crazy ...she insulted me...I need revenge he thinks .. walks over to bar pours himself a drink ...closes his eyes again ...she is in my brain, I can't let her rule my brain ... he dials the escort service he uses ... arranges a one night stand ...gets ready and heads to the Mogul Ritz, I have to wash her out of my system he thinks ...I hate this feeling, I hate what she has doing to me...I can't let her go...I need revenge... I hate her... I hate her...