Akdha FF - A spontaneous desire Chapter 20 TZR updated pg 159 June 24 - Page 65

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Posted: 10 years ago
thank god u finally updated...mujhe toh lga tha ki tum update nhi dogi but u didnt disappoint ur readers
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Posted: 10 years ago
coming to update, its just fab and the way story is progressing is very commendable
fianlly jalal also say those three magical words to jodha
and that cheap bhagwan das how can he cheat his own father
update soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg...finally an update..dear rex..next time dont leave too long.. Been longing for update here..anyway..poor jo..what happen with her?? Pregnancy on the way?? Hope jo all rite.. Whats up with adam?? Still hoping for jo?? Glad jalal taking care of jo...hope the next update soon ..thanks rex..
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wow dear finally aap ne update kiya.awesome chappy dear loved it.please jaldi update dijyega.eagerly waiting.love you dear for the lovely story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
U updated😃 .. thanks Prema😳
Awesome chapter,,, I think Jo pregnant.. So FB is going to end soon..Superb story
Looking forward to read more..thanks for the PM
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hey thanks for updating dear.. loved the chappy.. but can't wait to read next.. plz update soon..😊
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lovely update
but PM only was not there😆
update next chappy soon
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NIce update!!!
a leap -- loved the way your described the leap -- giving a glimpse of their life in this while instead of "After 2 years" 😉 ... Jalal finally confessed -- m happy I was wondering how Jodha is going to make him do that... I hate Adham --- he purposefully had Jalal accept the challenge and then send the clip to Jodha to create misunderstanding😡😡😡 what does he want now? I mean -- he got his standalone company... why is she doing this now? 😕 Jodha fell for it -- and started turned to drinks for it... oh... and that doesn't sound good... given the fact - I mean based on ur clues - that she is probably pregnant... Jalal is going to be miffed -- for drinking, not trusting him and putting his babies in danger...😲
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Chapter 15 Teaser



She looked deep into his eyes, tears running down his cheeks, his body shuddered as he sobbed, her weak hands reached over and flicked tears off Jalal's cheeks as she whispered " Jalal, you have been a very good husband and lover to me, I fell in love with you and you are the best thing that has happened in my life" she reached across and lifted his chin and continued "look at me, I am happy and content, I have no regrets what so ever, I have lived a happy life with you, I enjoyed our families...I enjoyed your love and will cherish it always, I have given you the children you desired...but now it is your turn to show your love for me" she briefly looked away, her voice breaking every now and then as she said "it is now your turn to prove your love for me...I want you to promise me that you will start a new life without me, promise me that you will act on what your heart wants and follow your dreams, I want you seize every opportunity to enjoy the day to the fullest...I don't want you to live in the memory of me dying but of living" Jalal leaned over and kissed her forehead and let his forehead rest against hers, their noses touching ... "Jo, I am not letting you go...and you cannot leave me, you can't give up, who will help me take care of the twins, they were born premature, they are so little, they can't even drink out of a bottle ...they need you, they need your boobs for food, they are hungry all the time...you have to fight and come out of this atleast for their sakes to help me, see" he reaches into his pocket pulls out his phone and plays a video clip, watches Jo's face light up with a bright smile... "oooh, Jalal, my babies, kitni cute hai na" she gushed happily, he sees new conviction in her eyes as her heart swelled ...joy and hope fills his heart, hugging her gently, softly whispers into her ears "yes, they are beautiful creation of our love, come on babes get well soon and help me take care of them, remember you decided you will not have a nanny for them" he encouraged. "Hon, they really can't drink out of a bottle..." she questioned sounding almost broken...

Edited by rexniko - 10 years ago

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