Akdha FF - A spontaneous desire Chapter 20 TZR updated pg 159 June 24

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mamtasingla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#201

loved the update
jalal is confused of his own feelings for jodha
nice maham part, she helps jalal to understand his mistake

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renuganesh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Awesome update buddy..a long one 😊 ...I m still in disbelief that maham is such a good person. Same as Hamida in the show..first time I m reading about her with good thinkings...she advised jalal n put him some brain. Where he already travelling over...he longing 4 her love..guilty in his acts 😳 jo too want a successful marriage life journey to ride overall.
Waiting for the next chapter dear...cont soon

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swriter

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Posted: 10 years ago

#203

Lovely-Lovely-Lovely Story i liked this side of jalal.👏 i am so happy after 😃reading your story plz update soon and send to me pm😳

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RSlovesJA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: rexniko
Thanks for all the likes and positive comments ... good to know your views as well as I pen down their journey... this is fiction ...and can be bent and twisted to keep it interesting. Ja and Jo are on an emotional roller coaster for now ... and will settle into comfort zone hopefully by chapter 15...
Have fun reading ...I am working on a historical fiction as well ... will start posting it by mid march.

oh great!!!!!!! waiting...

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swetiii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#205

vry butifully written...
2ating for next update...

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atoshi chanda

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Posted: 10 years ago

#206

Wow😊

You have portrayed relationship of a husband n wife so beautifully with their own fault,passion, confusion, emotions.😛

Keep giving regular updates

😉😉 Love u .😳

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2thless

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Posted: 10 years ago

#207

nice update... felt bad for Jodha - it must have been devastating for her to realize what her husband did...😭
Jalal did act cowardly at first😡 -- running away to not have to face Jodha ... loved Maham here -- her threatening did work😉... slowly both would accept their feelings for each other...😃

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Savindi Abhisheka

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Posted: 10 years ago

#208

😊 wow dr...awesome..update soon..don't get more time to update...update soon..can't wait more time..tks for the pm.. 😳

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Akanksha Sinha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#209

Hi buddy...😃

Just read all the 7 chapters...😳

Must say ur a awesome writer...👏👏

Update soon and do pm me if u can...😉

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renuganesh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: AkankshaJA
Hi buddy...😃
Just read all the 7 chapters...😳
Must say ur a awesome writer...👏👏
Update soon and do pm me if u can...😉

What r u doing here 😡
Go n study 😆