Akdha FF - A spontaneous desire Chapter 20 TZR updated pg 159 June 24

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lovejodhaakbar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#191

.Jo opens her eyes and looks at him hovering above her ...pouts and says "ofcourse it hurts dummy... it still hurts..." awee iam smiling so wide on this... i could imagine the scene actually and i cant believe i say this but i love maham anga 😃.. the womanizer jalaludin mohamed scare facing the angry jodha knowing she will get mad for being tricked nite before , now thats new, no wonder jalal confuse of jodha's affectbut iam glad, at the end they decide to give in into their feeling and perhaps this is first stage of akhda being in love... thanks u for update dear author ( and i was thinking u might forget to update)

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Avika444

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Posted: 10 years ago

#192

Hey prema lovely chapter dear.good to see that jalal is feeling guilty for his behaviour with Jo.after all what he did to Jo ,he should be guilty right.he don't won't to hurt Jo , cares for her but can't control his desire 🤣 poor soul.jokes apart , maham seems to be good as for now and hope u will not change her character into vamp.finally jalal faced Jo and Jo accepted his apology.jalal fought with his whole family to marry her wow.pls update soon , really love ur long long chapies 🤗 .continue soon

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Arifa Sultana Shefa.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#193

unres...amazing update...
it's beautiful
thanks for this big update
continue soon
again thanks

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meera

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Posted: 10 years ago

#194

Hi dis was an awesome update jalal was feeling 4 his actions yet he desires her more and i loved d consolation part. This is an extraordinary update cant wait 2 read more so plz update soon and thnks 4 d pm😊😊

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Pba123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#195

Super update

Both are confused about their feelings now...hope they sort out

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Neetu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#196

superb update dear...both have feeling for each other but don't want to accept them...till now maham shows as a vamp in other ff/ss as well in the show too...but you show her a positive character here...jalal is guilty for his acts and he should be...waiting for more...thanks for the pm dear...

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#197

As usual your update was amazing... U 've written jo's hurt angst emotions compellingly...

Love this lady Maham ... guiding them and forced jalal to face jo..Really liked the last para...

jj exploring their feelings .. Got the hints of next chapter already😉 .. Thank u so much for updating regularly

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Rathi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#198

Nice update Bt I Cant Believe That Mahamanga is Sweet He Wanted everything to be fine Between Them.. nd Jala Really Cares Fr His Jo.. I loved it

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RSlovesJA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#199

lovely update.. but felt short dear.. interesting to know how jo will change this womanizer to a passonate lover😛continue soon & do pm

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crystalwings

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Posted: 10 years ago

#200

Thanks for all the likes and positive comments ... good to know your views as well as I pen down their journey... this is fiction ...and can be bent and twisted to keep it interesting. Ja and Jo are on an emotional roller coaster for now ... and will settle into comfort zone hopefully by chapter 15...

Have fun reading ...I am working on a historical fiction as well ... will start posting it by mid march.