TH# 2 JJ FF:'Kingdom of Dreams' : (CH4 to CH5)

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meenakaliswaran

@meenakaliswaran

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#141

hai

wow

iam still with Akdha

sorry for late comment

hope i did miss any chapter

Jine ke andaaz hi badale hain

Ishq hai jaise hawao mein

(Kyun hai yeh aarjoo, kyun hai yeh justju

Kyun dil bechain hai, kyun dil betaab hai

so thanks for ur PM

do update soon

waiting for next

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Barnali

@Paradise_1

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#142

oh God!!what a chapter!!
at first the sword fight... its awesome and then their first kiss...
lovely update...
thanks for the pm..
continue soon... want to see their reactions after the kiss!!!

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Rasika29

@Rasika29

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#143

OMG...🤣
The thread just exploded...😆
I knew it... everyone one is gushing about the kiss...😆 and just like jo and jalal everyone forgot what happened before...😉

Read all the comments till now will reply one by one as soon as I get time...😊 Love you all...🤗

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Christy

@....Anabella...

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#144

Awsome update. The kiss made me go 😳 . U write so beautifully

Edited by ....Anabella... - 10 years ago

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#145

Ooo superb update loved it...it is truly ice nd fire nd tq for pm

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_akdha.forever_

@_akdha.forever_

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#146

Ohhh dii who expected amidst of all the sword fight,a kiss was happening what a timing that everyone forgot the sword fight and remembered the kiss😆

It was the most awesome update 👏

The way you wrote it was just so mind blowing...thank you for updating..continue soon dii🤗

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_SJM_

@_SJM_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: Rasika29

@blue

@purple

Will comment later on part 2😳

Edited by _SJM_ - 10 years ago

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Pba123

@Pba123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#148

Interesting update

Sword fighting session details was marvelous

Liplock of jo ja so passionate...so journey of love started with a passionate kiss

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2thless

@2thless

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Posted: 10 years ago

#149

AWWW.. Their first kiss...😳😳😳

loved the way you described their duel ... I was looking forward to how you would describe that --- it was awesome -- I could visualize each and every thing - the way you have written...👏👏

Please continue...

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harshal

@harshu27

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#150

awsum update I likd der sword fighting ws really fantastic actuly I ws imagining and remembering d serial whr parijat hd der 1st sword fights it ws really gd it ws quiet surprisd 2 c der 1st kiss 😉 bt jodha initially rejectd bt 2nd tme gave in 😉 😆 bt all in all ws a fantastic write up as usul u jst write it as a professional writer does 😊

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