TH# 2 JJ FF:'Kingdom of Dreams' : (CH4 to CH5)

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Rani1965

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Posted: 10 years ago

#131

Loved the update. Thank you

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AngelDara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#132

Wow super awesome update
Jj first kiss 😳
Nice surprise dear love it
Waiting for the next update continue soon

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swriter

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Posted: 10 years ago

#133

oh my god what a chapter 👏i liked...i liked... and i liked you kill me😳 hurre romance of jodha and jalal finally start and what first kiss.plz update soon because now i am not waiting for long time ok😉

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Avika444

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Posted: 10 years ago

#134

Awesome chapter dear.Jajo sword fighting is superb and then their first kiss.I'm blushing re.pls update soon pls pls pls waiting for next chap

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Akanksha Sinha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#135

THANKS FOR THE UPDATE...😳

WILL COMMENT SOON...😃

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Sweetshruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#136

Rasika🤗

Mind blowing update Rasika ...you nailed it..

The much awaited sword fight duel was awesome with all the one liners .. U narrated superbly.👏

This was relatively intense n captivating with what may happen next. but.fight ended...

leaving jalal more puzzled about jodha😉😆

Btw Shivani's dialogue '' go and kill him'' i could n't stop but laugh😆😉

And the first kiss😳.. this is what the surprise u mentioned with the teaser...

indeed a pleasant surprise for us😳☺️...and the banter that lead to their first kiss was awesome.

And the kiss was a battle between hearts and minds😆😆

Everywhere opposites everywhere war.❤️❤️... who is the ultimate winner??

Impatiently waiting for the next update😳p. lz update soon.

Edited by shruthikarthik - 10 years ago

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lovejodhaakbar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#137

I definitely gonna read it more than once 😃 iam speechless.. Their pure passion and confusion make their first kiss so passionate ..thanks for the update dear author..

Edited by lovejodhaakbar - 10 years ago