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Originally posted by: RaniShanthappa

super-duper update dear... hope so u r not going to create MU b/w JJ.. continue soon & do pm

Originally posted by: gauriS

congrats for the new thread dear🥳 hehe...thnx gauri🤗

update was really hot dekh abhi bhi dhuaan nikal raha hai☺️ lolz...yeah...my first comment which included 'hot'😆...but nhi yrr it was a descent SR😆

the morning was pretty too😉 pretty? in which sense😆

but didnt like this girl natasha. kitna chipakti hai Ja se. jaldi se use dafa karo😆 i want u to do this 😆

update soon... such a tough job😆

Originally posted by: jansijodha

replies to aise de rhi ho jaise UL ke baare me pehli baar sun rhi ho anyways waiting for feelings nd after that UL nd thanxs for pm

Originally posted by: NikkiReed

awesome chapter.. Continue soon..

Originally posted by: yurimehta11

Whole chapter is awesome aisha 👏 👏 aww...thnx purva🤗
aur tere efforts clearly dikh rahe hai sachi ...
very nice chapter oh..shukriya😆
it has everything matlab😆
love passion jealousy uff...it sounds so cute😆
Whole SR part 😳
What a SR intense passionate yrr...bohut descent tha😆
👏
song selection is also good haan...uske liye shukriya😳
At first I feel natasha was okay but later her interview about Jalal
I feel something fishy kyu?
I hope she doesnt create a rift between joja unknowingly...patani😆
Jo jealousy is looking dangerous to me...arre.kyu😆

Originally posted by: ArishaDeepz

Congos for new thread...waiting for next update...update soon!

Originally posted by: cuty1997

finally you give the update aysha.😊 it's awesome update.👏 update soon

Originally posted by: ...jaskaran...

Awesome updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 jazz😲🤗🤗after a long time😃Both the updates are marvellous... and the ...SR😳😳😳... is too cute and romantic...hheeh...thnx yaah🤗 itni sadgi se pesh karne ki kya zarurat thi😆😆😆..sadgi...matlab? it was descent naa😆. and thank god u made the mind to continue the updates after their marriage.. it will be a new twist.. and like a new story to read..i hope so😆 with such a writer😛... i know i have not commented on the last chappy.. but i always read them i thought you discontinued reading...but thank god i was wrong😃.. sorry for that one... and thank god im not much late... in this one.yeah😆.. and congratulations for ur new thread...😊😊 .lalalal thnx😆.. hmm...liked the new jealousy track.. dont know if its a long or short one.. but i always like jealousy.. hain?😲especially if it ends in a romantic way😉😉😉...update soon..very tough job😆and love uuu me more❤️

Originally posted by: swatiluthra

Aabhi mein kya Bolun , u r just too good at writting 😛 sachi bol rahi hai naa😆. Loved the passionate romance between JJ. passionate...really? Truly u r just so amazing, the scene was so romantic n ur words choice was just wow. 😛 aww...you made my day🤗. Ur words made the scene feel so decent actually , n I truly loved it 😛 . and i love u for this wonderful comment🤗
Coming to Natasha, who is this kamine, 😆 , mai ni jaanti😆making the Bholi bhali Jo jealous. 😆 . N now Jo will join jalal office, so of course more jealously is on the cards, I guess 😆 , n maybe more romance will also come due to the jealously track. . i don't know this...abhi socha nhi😆
But why so less of veer ( the dog) n veer ( the human ) 😆 🤣 . These r my favorite ones 😆 agli baar pakka./..just for u😆

Continue soon dear n thanks for the pm 😛 yr welcme😃