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Posted: 10 years ago
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PROLOGUE

Jalal walked into his cabin, talking off his jacket and tossing it at the back of his chair he took a deep breath as he rolled the sleeves of his shirt. He sat on his chair resting his head onto the headrest. After a bone tiring three hour complicated heart surgery that was perfectly successful, he was well received and appreciated by every person in the hospital. Even he was feeling good as the patient, Rahul was a child and that too from the orphanage he regularly visited to soothe his soul amongst those little bundles of joy. Although everyone in Sanjeevani Hospital knew that Dr. Jallaluddin Mohammed rarely failed any surgeries, but still his colleagues and junior doctors used to marvel at his operating skills. He had such a magical touch in his hands.

But the last ten minutes has ruined his mood badly. It seemed that his heart leapt out of his chest and into his throat. He never knew he was capable of this kind of rage... Or rather jealousy would be the better word to say.

Why? Why is this happening god?'

This was the question, he was tired of. It actually has started haunting him, and then he tried to avoid it too, succeeded to some extent too but then failed miserably at last. But to imagine something he has just witnessed was beyond his worst nightmares. His chain of thoughts was broken by a knock on the door of his cabin.

"Come in." He said.

"Dr. Jalal your coffee." The peon said as he kept the coffee on his table and left.

He removed the lid from his coffee mug to which he is used after every heavy tiring surgery but today the coffee didn't seem to soothe his tired nerves. He took out an Adol tablet from his side drawer and gulped it down with the hot coffee to lessen the ache in his head. The coffee seemed much bitterer today. His mind wandered back to her and every time he thought about her or talked to her. Even like some senior surgeon talking to a junior doctor on some medical issue, he felt as if he is giving her a piece of him...his soul to her, such was the connection he felt with her. Her refreshing sweet smile and complete balance of wit and intelligence with a hint of mischief made his heart pounce. It was such a rare combination to get. Her every smile made my day and her way with the children in the children's ward, which was his favorite place in the hospital, made him feel more bonded to her. Although I knew that it was again a part of my imagination...or say imaginations which were very common these days.

"So Dr. Jodha. This is Viren haan, nice choice I must say." Dr. Neha, Jodha's colleague said.

"Vo toh hain, aakhir meri choice jo hain, Kyu Virenji" Jodha asked him teasingly.

"Toh shaadi ki date kabki fix hui hain" Dr. Ahana asked next.

"Abhi shadi ki date toh fix nhi hui par sagai next week hai aur tum sabko aana hain. Mujhe tum sabko Anamika di se bhi milana hai. Vo do doin pehle hi London se aayi hain khas sagai ke liye." Jodha said.

"Are tu nhi bulati toh bhi hum aate." They all said in union.

"Chale Jodha, shopping bhi complete krni hai." Viren asked her and they left.

Jalal got up from his chair and went towards the window to breathe some fresh air and what he saw again pierced his heart. There Jodha was in the parking with the man with whom he saw her talking to her colleagues about her engagement, laughing and smiling with him. Only on hearing those words he left the place and rushed to his cabin. That was too much for him to bear. After a few minutes they drove away and he slammed the window furiously.

Edited by amreen_ashni - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry folks...😭. I WAS NOT ABLE TO GIVE A CHAPTER SINCE SO MANY DAYS. ALTHOUGH THE CHAP WAS READY BT I WS NOT ABLE TO TYPE IT. WILL TRY TO GIVE NEXT UPDATES REGULARLY. SOOORRRY AGAIN. AND YEAH PROLOGUE GIVEN. ENJOY!
REPLY SOON WITH LONG REVIEWS.
TILL THEN SEE YOU
BYE... 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow!wondrful chappy!!yippee medical wala..bechara jalal ka haal toh dekho..and jodha..ka engagement with a ladka name viren..urgh..dekhte hain..hmh..nice chappy..pm me when u update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
AWESOME PROLOUGE LOVE IT WAITING FOR THE CHAPPY😊
#with_love_bubbles❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats for your new story
awesome prologue ... seems promising ... both were doctors senior n junior aur jodha ki engagement honewali hai veer se ...interesting ... continue soon dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Jalal and jodha are doctors...interesting 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome prologue, first time medical wala wow,update soon and pls pm me.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh wow!!!
jalal is so jealous about jodha's engagement...
eager to see what step he takes next...
awesome prologue...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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update the first chapter soon nd pm me...
I'm sending u a buddy request... plz accept it... nd pm me your next update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Hii buddy 😆
this ff is different and i just love your writings... you are doing great And update soon plz
but first best luck for your exams and do well 😃

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