AkDha FF : TUM JO AAYE..... CHAPTER 4 updated on Page 21 - Page 16

hey amreen...
lovely updt dear..its awesome
loved it.
ja n jiyu bonding was really beautyful...n u hv described ja emotion love care n pain fr jiyu...n jiyu loliness n craving of friend very beautyfully dear...loved evry single line n loved ja n jiyu masti...its really beautyful..loved ther prt.
lik ther outing prt...oh jo saw ja with evryone n mu thm a family...but lik the prt whr she saw him smiling n ur description of her emotion was nice...jo was nt feeling gud watching jo with his family but she happy fr him...liked it.
wow...jo n jiyu both r going to orphanage...i think thy meet ther n her mu will clear n thy bcum gud friend n will create beautyful bonding...
u r amazing writer dear...loved this chap...its a beautyful ff dear thanks fr sharing this...loved it.
eagrly waiting fr nxt chap updt soon..
n plss do pm me nxt tim...

hii amreen...i hv no prblm with hinglish..i m ok with it dear..but only want to say tht want more ja jo mmnt in story n pless updt chap reguraly dear..n pless do pm i really love this story n waiting fr ur updts. last tim i dnt knw whn u updtd thts y pless do pm me whn u updt..pless.

Hello everyone...
Thank you for your warm words...
Am so happy you all are finding my story so engaging and you all love it so much...
Am a little busy with my test series and hence cannot cone to u all individually now...
But will get back to each one of u individually soon...
Thanks...
Love
Amreen

you nicely knitted many things in this chappy.arman came back for shalini but jalal don't want to disturb her so hide it for now. very good bonding between two friends. arav carving for fathers love its feels painful.jiyyas condition is not different but ja handle her calmly and lovingly.hope she meet jo in orphanage . jo feel for ja as she don't like he has full family.update soon .

Update nest chapter soon of this story make it fast

Update soon...eagerly waiting for the update