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Originally posted by: Pookhi


Anu Anu Anu😆🤗.
Yup I know they were cute na.😳
Your updates do look professional Anu!😛 I still think that!!
Yep, both bro-sis should win the prankster award!😃😆
Yeah, I transformed Ruks and Adham. But hey warning: I still haven't decided whether Adham is good or bad.😆
Me a star, you are praising me so much!😛😛(It feels good to know you liked it😆).
And hey Anu, thanks! To have such a great writer read my work is soo cool!😊

Love you too❤️,
Pookhi

shock of the day!😲
Ms.Pookhi says that MY, MY updates look PROFESSIONAL😲 I highly doubt that..😆 I guess it looks childish..😆
Another shock.. you haven't decided on making Adham good or bad?😲
Another Shock... such a GREAT Writer? Who's the great writer here? *Looks over my left and right shoulder* I can't see anyone😆
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Hello guys!!😃 I am back with an update!! :) But I am kind of shocked.😲 I've never really written over 5000 words. So I really hope I don't bore you all.😆





"Noo Jodha.." Menavati wailed as Jodha tried to pull out of their embrace. Menavati was clinging onto her daughter with much force and wouldn't let go. "Menavati please!" Bharmal snapped. "Our Jodha's a big girl now!"

"You shut up" Menavati told Bharmal angrily. "How would you know what I feel?" Menavati let out a sob.

"Mama.." Jodha pleaded her mother. "Please stop crying na..I'll be back before you know it!" Menavati shook her head sadly as Jodha said this. Jodha frowned. "Papa, please explain to mama na.."

"Don't worry I'll handle her" Bharmal assured Jodha. "After all, even before you were born, we used to live alone...and oh, those days.." Bharmal said dreamily.


Menavati went blushed at her husband's words, but Jodha's mouth was hanging open. "What Papa!" "You say that after I came into this world your romantic days with mama were over?!"

Bharmal bit his tongue. "I never meant that!" he told Jodha. "But that's what you said" Jodha said as tears rolled down her face.

"Oh Jodha baby please don't cry.." Menavati said, while Bharmal let out a sigh. Both of these women were over the top when it came to crying.


"Ok Papa, I'll be leaving" Jodha said finally after their crying session was over.


"Good idea" Bharmal replied as he took a quick glance at his watch. "You're running out of time anyways."


"Are you sure that you don't want us to drop you off?" Menavati asked Jodha for the hundredth time.


Jodha shook her head. "No Mama, I'm fine."


"Ok bye-" Before Jodha could finish her sentence however, Menavati had once again wrapped her arms around Jodha. Breaking free of her mother's grasp, Jodha let out an exasperated sigh.


When finally Jodha managed to get settled in her car, she bid her parents bye from the window of her car.


"College here I come!" Jodha exclaimed as she rolled down her window and waved her arm outside.


-*-


The next day, Jodha managed to get up on time, brush her teeth, get dressed up, and fix her hair. "Phew!" Jodha said relieved as she finished. She was a few minutes early still. "Hmm...maybe I can take a small nap?" she asked herself.


Just as Jodha was about to plop down onto her bed, there was a knock on her door.


"Who is it?!" Jodha asked angrily as she went up to the door. As she opened it, she saw Rukaiya's bright face. "Rukaiya tum!" Jodha exclaimed as she hugged her friend.


"Too bad they didn't put us in the same dorm" Rukaiya said with a pout.

"I know na.." Jodha said. "Lekeen chodo, tell me..who's your roommate?" Jodha asked Rukaiya.


Rukaiya pulled Jodha along with her so that they could talk on their way to college. "It's a girl named Moti" Rukaiya told Jodha. "She seems pretty cute." "But not cuter than me" Jodha said automatically. "So toh hai" Rukaiya agreed.

"And yours?" she asked Jodha. "My roommate didn't show up, I guess" Jodha answered. "She'll turn up soon enough" Rukaiya said. "Probably" Jodha replied.


"I have mathematics first" Jodha groaned. "Ask me, I have Geology" Rukaiya said rolling her eyes.



As the girls walked together chitchatting, two guys were observing them from afar.


"oh look!" Jalal said pointing at Jodha. "Isn't she cute??"


"Hmm..not bad" Maan replied. "That girl next to her isn't too bad either" Jalal observed. "Yeah, she's pretty too" Maan said in agreement.


"Do you think we should ask them out?" Maan asked his best friend.


By the time Jalal answered, the girls were out of sight. "They look like freshers to me" he said.


"yeah.. so what?" Maan asked. "It'll be soo fun!!"


"hmm.. not a bad thought" Jalal agreed.



-*-


"Wow.." Jodha exclaimed as they walked through the halls of their school. "It looks so huge" Rukaiya said in awe.

"And everyone is so different from each other" Jodha said a little frightened.


"Hey Jodha, just relax" Rukaiya said waving her hand a little as they talked.


"We're like the best girls in this school!!"


Jodha didn't think so, and Ruks could tell by the nervous look on her face.


"Hey Jodha how about we meet at break?" Rukaiya said changing the topic.


Jodha's face lit up. "Yes!" "We'll take a trip to the library then!"


Rukaiya mentally screamed to herself when she heard the word "library" from Jodha's mouth. She went along with Jodha though, after all she was her best friend. "Okay fine, see ya" Rukaiya said as she and Jodha parted ways.


-*-


As soon as Jodha stepped into Mathematics Class, she knew she was gone.


As she looked around, she saw all the students seated in a robotic manner and facing the chalkboard at the front. Right next to the chalkboard was a long stool and on top of it sat an old woman.


As soon as the woman sensed Jodha's presence she looked up at her disapprovingly. "You're late" the woman told her.


"Voh. I am soo sorry Mam-"


"Call me Ms. Patrick" the teacher interrupted. "You may go take your spot at your assigned seat."


Jodha nodded nervously as she walked around to see the empty desks. She found the desk that had a sticky note with her name attached to it. As soon as she sat down on her chair, the woman began talking.


"Alright Students!" Ms. Patrick said. "Get out your books and turn to page number 74!"


The students groaned. It was only their first day in college & already the teacher was giving them work to do.


"Mam, the introductions-" a young man seated at the front row said nervously.


"And your name..?" the teacher asked him with a raised eyebrow.


"Bablu" he replied, and right away the class erupted with laughter. Bablu wore a pair of glasses which not everyone thought suitable for college. Only Jodha felt any sympathy towards him while the other continued to laugh at the situation.


"Class, shut up!!" the teacher snapped as her gaze shifted back to Bablu. "Young man, mathematics is a place for pure learning, we have no time to waste!"


Jodha gulped and by looking around at the other students in the classroom they probably felt the same way.


"You may all find a partner to work with, and your time to work begins now!" Ms. Patrick said stomping her foot on the ground.



Jodha looked around at the other students. She wasn't sure who she would work with. Then, she noticed Bablu sitting alone at his desk, his head bent deep down into his book, obviously trying to avoid any looks anyone might shoot him.


Jodha took a deep breath and finally mustered up the courage to go ask him. "Hey there Bablu.." she said brightly. "I would like to work with you!"


Bablu looked up at Jodha in surprise. A girl so pretty as Jodha was wanting to work with him. That was a huge shock to him. "What?" he said as he adjusted his pair of glasses.


"yup!" Jodha said pushing a chair towards his table so she could sit next to him. "I think you and I would make a great pair."


"oh..yeah" Bablu said as he nodded silently. He didn't expect Jodha to waste much time hanging out with him. "So what do you think..?" Jodha asked him as she pointed at the first problem in her book.


-*-


"How was class?" Rukaiya inquired during lunch. "Pretty decent if you ask me" Jodha responded as her eyes traveled down a piece of paper. "What is this! You are reading at lunch!" Rukaiya complained as she snatched the piece of paper away from Jodha.


Without wasting any time, Rukaiya ripped piece of paper into two halves.

"hey..!!" Jodha cried out as she grabbed back the two pieces. "You ripped my Course Syllabus!"


"You can always rip mine too" Rukaiya said. "But for now just put down that paper ok?"


"Ok fine" Jodha said, as she put the two halves inside her purse and started eating a sandwich.


"Hey beautifuls."


Jodha and Rukaiya both looked up at the sound of someone speaking.


Rukaiya and Jodha's eyes immediately fell on a guy with dark shaded sunglasses. The other guy standing besides him feeling totally ignored.


"ooh.." Rukaiya said sitting up and adjusting her hair a little bit. "Jodha" she murmured excited as she nudged her in the ribs. "Ow!" Jodha snapped. Turning to the cool guys she said, "Who are you!"


"What are you.." Rukaiya said dreamily.


"Well, I am Maan and this here is Jalal" Maan spoke up not able to take the ignorance any longer.


Rukaiya's eyes immediately fell on Maan and a smile began to form on her face.


"Two handsome guys in front of us!" Rukaiya exclaimed. "Jodha quick, Pinch me!!"


Ignoring her friend, Jodha stood up and crossed her arms. "What do you guys want?" she said staring directly at Jalal. She couldn't see his eyes but felt a little awkward.


"We-"


Jalal held up a hand to silence Maan and he cleared his throat. "Hey ladies" he began. "We were just wanting to know.. you know.. if you gals would like to.. go out with us?"


Jodha gasped as soon as the words came out of his mouth. Jodha gaped at him as if he had said something forbidden.


"Are you asking us out?" Rukaiya exclaimed, now standing up as well.


"Yes." Jalal replied with a wink towards Rukaiya.


"Oye Mr.." Jodha threatened as she raised her finger up at him. "How dare you..!!"


"What?" Jalal asked in surprise.


"We just arrived here and already you boys are up to your rude behavior!" "Do ladki dekhi nahi aur kood pade!"


"Whaat..?" Maan asked obviously confused by this behavior of Jodha's. No girls ever really communicated to them in that manner.


"Rukaiya and I come here to study only, you understand!!" "Don't try to take unnecessary advantage" Jodha said as she raised her hand up in the air to show that she would slap them if they were to ever make that mistake again.


This was a huge blow on Jalal's face. He was shocked beyond words at this girl's words. How could she talk to him like that?! No girl was supposed to talk to him like that!! Girls liked bad boys!


"Listen there you- you-" Jalal struggled to complete his sentence.


"Jodha" Rukaiya said fearing what might come next. "Jodha, tell your friend to stop hollering at me!" Jalal snapped at Rukaiya.


"heyo Mr.!" Jodha said. "I'm Jodha and she is my friend Rukaiya!!"


"How dare you talk to me like that!!" Jalal thundered angrily. "Would one little date have hurt?! And at least you can be polite about it!!"


"Useless" Jodha mumbled under her breath before turning back to Jalal.


"You-you-"


"Jalal" he interrupted. "You would've heard that name."


Jodha remembered back to a story that her mom used to tell her, about a princess named Jodha and a prince named Jalal. She pushed the thought aside and continued.


"Jalal" she said. "I know your types very well, just get lost!"


Jalal shot Maan a look. This was not going the way they had planned.


"Look you, just zip it!" Maan said trying to support Jalal.


"You zip up your sweatshirt fully first, then tell us" Jodha retorted before once again turning to Jalal.


"Mr. Bad Boy, you may leave, we are not interested."


After a few minutes, Jalal finally managed to recompose himself. "Very well" he said before turning on the spot, with Maan trailing right after him.


"Jodha..!" Rukaiya said in shock. "What was all that for?!"


"It was necessary Ruks!" Jodha cried out. "I know these types, and I suggest you stay away from these types as well."


"How much do you know about those two?" Rukaiya replied back angrily.


"Enough to maintain my distance from them" Jodha responded flat out.


"Jodha, you just rejected two of the hottest guys in this school! Do you know what this means?" Rukaiya asked her.


Jodha's eyes teared up. "You are more worried about them than me, then fine go on with them!"


"Awe, Jodha I never meant.."


"Then forget about those idiots!" Jodha snapped back angrily.


"Fine.. fine.." Rukaiya said as she got a flashback of Jalal's presence just a few moments ago.


She hugged Jodha innocently. "I am sorry Jodha, you know I love you more than those good looking-"


Jodha stiffened. "I mean good looking idiots" Rukaiya quickly added.


Jodha smiled, happy to have gotten her way this time. "Good."


-*-


"Haan mama, I am perfectly fine" Jodha assured her mother for the umpteenth time. "yeah.. take care of the house, without me.. yeah I am the gem of the house, you're right" Jodha said not bothering to be modest about it. "My dorm partner.. no idea.."

"yeah of course mom, I am always watching out for any trouble."

Jodha wanted to inform her mother of how she had told two guys at school off. It would sound so brave of her, but she thought that Menavati would call her back home so thought better of it. "Ok bye."


As soon as Jodha hung up, she grabbed a book and started reading it. She only looked up when there was a knock on her door.


At first, she thought it was her room partner who finally thought to show up. She was proved wrong when found a bouquet of flowers resting on the floor before her door.


She picked it up curiously and saw a note tucked inside it.


She read it with wide eyes. Hey darling, how are you?'


Jodha's lips parted in shock at who could have sent her the letter. She crumpled it up and threw it into a dustbin. She took the bouquet of flowers and placed it on the windowsill.


After thinking a bit about it, Jodha could come to one conclusion. It was surely Jalal trying to irritate her because of what she had said to him at the canteen. "That bad boy is getting onto my nerves already!" Jodha muttered in frustration.


-*-


"Man that hurt" Maan muttered. Both he and Jalal were sitting inside their dormitory feeling so dejected.


Jalal whose bed was right next to the window just sat still and quietly stared out of it.


"They were so beautiful" Maan continued after he got no response from Jalal. "Just like fairies.."


"Seriously?!"


Maan paused as he looked at Jalal who had finally spoken up.


"What?" Maan asked, evidently confused.


"Maan, are you nuts?!" "Those two ladies dared to insult us and you're still calling them beautiful!" Jalal shouted angrily. "I have never been insulted like this in my life! How can a girl reject me??"


Maan carefully observed Jalal and finally made up his mind. "Well Jalal, I don't know about you, but a girl surely wouldn't reject me."


Jalal looked at Maan. His eyes spitting out a raging fire. "Are you saying.."


"Yes Jalal!" Maan replied back angrily. "Have you ever considered that the only girls who ever accept our proposals are ones after money?" "Just because of your stupid behavior we can't get a decent girl!"


"What do you mean??" Jalal hissed, as he towered over Maan. Maan backed up a little on his bed.


"I don't know about y-you, but I actually want to- to get a girl who actually loves me, not my money" Maan stuttered as he saw Jalal ball up his fists.


"You're fighting your best friend for those useless girls?!" "And have you forgotten that bad boys don't have a heart?!" Jalal cried out.

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"Never mind that Jalal! And besides, you always ask out the good girls and leave no one for me!!" Maan replied back frustratedly.


"And that girl, Rukaiya was it? She was just the one I wanted!" Maan went on. "I have never seen a dreamier girl than her in my whole entire life!"


This was the last straw for Jalal as he had been considering Rukaiya himself. He took hold of his friend's collar and brought his face closer himself. "You have proved how selfish you are.." Jalal hissed. "And that too my best friend.." Jalal pushed Maan right off the bed with such force that when he hit the ground, he let out a cry of pain.


"You deserve it!" Jalal roared, as he slammed the door of their room as he left.


Maan slowly got up and rubbed his back. "That's the gift you get for being his friend" he said to himself.


-*-


"What an idiot Maan was being!" "Firstly, he should know that those girls were the ones that were being the idiots! Not me!!" "And how can he say that no decent girl accepts us? And that too because of me?!" "It's all because of that one spoilt girl! Jodha." "I will not leave her! All because of her my best friend shouted at me!!"


Jalal kept rambling on and on not thinking about where he was going. That sometimes happened. Whenever he got angry, he would just head anywhere without thinking.


Meanwhile, Jodha who need a little breather headed out of the building. "Ah.." she said, a whole new happy feeling coming over her as her body came in contact with fresh air. She twirled in her spot happily. "Oh my gosh.. I just love this cool air" she exclaimed. "Maybe I should do some exploring?" Jodha paused to look up at the cloudy sky and frowned. "But, I'll come back before it rains" she told herself.


And is it possible that that Jodha is about to do something and Jalal doesn't come in her way? Nah..😛


She turned and bumped right into that Akdoo. Jalal's eyes lit up for a second when he saw that it was a girl. The next second when Jodha had landed right into his arms, that gleam in his eye disappeared. "You!" they both said the second they noticed each other.


Jodha quickly stood up. "How dare you touch me!" she yelled at him.

"Hey Mrs. I just saved you!" Jalal reminded her.


"You shouldn't have saved me, then!" "Oh wait what.." Jodha trailed off as she realized what Jalal just said. "I am no Mrs.!"


"Acha, so let me correct my mistake then!" Jalal said as he stepped closer to Jodha.


Her innocent eyes widened and she started to back off. "What are you doing playboy!" she mumbled out of fear.


"Correcting my mistake.." Jalal told her simply.


Before Jodha could protest he had slipped his arm around her waist and brought her closer to himself.


He shifted his head towards hers and Jodha got the hint. She closed her eyes. Jalal smirked as he saw her frightened face.


He slowly bent over her and was just about to let go when her innocent beauty caught his attention. He had met many beautiful girls but this one..she was different. She was beautiful in a way that suggested she was pure innocent.


Suddenly, realizing what he was thinking he let go of his grip on her. Unfortunately, Jodha ended up hitting the floor. Jalal smirked to himself.


"Ow!" she cried out in pain. "What was that for?" she screamed.


"You didn't want me to save you so I corrected my mistake" Jalal said shrugging his shoulders.


"But.. but you.." Jodha trailed off as she cursed herself at the thought that had passed through her mind.


"What.. did you think I would kiss you?!" Jalal asked her incredulously. "The girl who insulted me?!"


Jodha looked away as her eyes teared up.


"Call me playboy, I don't care" Jalal said. "But I have never done anything with a girl that I shouldn't." "I know my limits."


"Ha!" Jodha said at this. "You shouldn't be saying this Mr.!" "You don't even respect girls! Look what you did to me!"


"I pushed you because you're such an idiot! Otherwise I don't go around pushing every girl ya know!" Jalal said defensively.


"Hmph!" Jodha said as she got up slowly. "If you really were a good boy, then you'd be saying sorry to me right now."


"Ha! Who told you I am a good boy? Don't be expecting me to be goody good." Jalal said, apparently hurt that a girl would think him to be so goofy. It just didn't suit his personality at all.


"hmph, I'm leaving!" Jodha said turning to go back into the building.


"Yeah yeah go girl, it's not like I am wanting you to stay anyway!" Jalal snapped.


"Oh-" Jodha paused. "I know you're stalking me ok, don't act so smart!" "And yes, I did not like those flowers you sent me!!"


Jalal was confused at what Jodha was saying. When had he sent her flowers? Finally, he decided on the fact that this girl was just crazy. "Her and her silly thoughts! She must've hallucinated the flowers, silly girl."


He let out a sigh and walked back to his dormitory. This day had been so crazy. This girl had changed some things. He'd have to get back on track tomorrow.



As soon as he entered his room, he saw Maan sleeping peacefully on his bed. Jalal felt a pang of guilt. Maybe he had overreacted by pushing him to the floor. Friends they were, and yet they still acted like enemies sometimes.


He went towards Maan and ruffled his hair. He was like his younger brother after all. He meant a lot to him. "I am sorry Maan" he muttered. "I guess I went a little overboard."



-*-


That night Jodha kept feeling restless as she kept turning and tossing on her bed repeatedly. Every time she would close her eyes, his face would become visible to her.


"Why?" she mumbled to herself, as she got the vision of him putting his arm around her waist. How he had pulled her close to himself. The way he had looked at her for a moment there.


"What an akdoo he is" she cried out. "I can't even sleep because of him! What did he do to me??"


-*-


Jodha was so tired in the morning that she got up with so much effort. "I'm so tired.." she complained as she went into the washroom to get ready.


Immediately after getting dressed up she pulled out a granola bar from her purse and pulled out a bottle of milk that she had stored in her small fridge.


"Ah" Jodha grumbled once she was finished. She tossed the trash into the garbage bin and immediately lunged for the door handle. She had only fifteen minutes before she had to be in class.


Rukaiya who was waiting outside said, "Were were you Jodha?!"


"No time.. let's go!" Jodha responded.


The girls ended up sprinting so as to get to class on time.


By the time Jodha and Rukaiya got into History Class they were totally out of breath.


Jodha looked at the clock and saw there was one minute left before class started. She grabbed Rukaiya's hand and dragged themselves to the back of the room, where they took a seat at a round table.


"Phew!" Jodha said, letting out a sigh of relief when she was sure that they were on time. She looked around for the sign of a teacher, but there was none to be seen. The other students were curious as well.


Bablu ended up entering the room right when the bell rang so his heart was beating rapidly, Frightened that he'll get in trouble on the first day of History itself.


He noticed Jodha waving him over from the back of the room and so he decided to sit with the girls.


"Hey.." he said to Rukaiya and Jodha. "Hey.." Rukaiya replied as she gave him a strange look that told Bablu that she was not impressed.


Jodha smiled at Bablu. "Glad you're here dost!" she exclaimed. "We were just waiting for the teacher!"


"Thank God, the teacher isn't here" Bablu said.


"That's true, or else maybe he/she would've smashed your glasses as punishment" Rukaiya said chuckling at her own witty remark.


Jodha glared at Rukaiya to let her know that she was not at all impressed.

"Don't mind Ruks haan, she is just soo humorous" Jodha told Bablu. "But trust me, she's not bad at heart."


Bablu nodded. "I guess it's okay."


"Oh look the teacher's here" Rukaiya mumbled as the teacher entered the classroom.


"Well!" Mr. Suri exclaimed as he saw the bright faces of his students, who in his opinion were eager to learn.


"I am sorry for the inconvenience I may have caused by not being present to welcome you all at the beginning of class, but I was busy shooing Jalal and his gang away from my car. You know they were posting sticky notes onto my car!!" Suri said, as if he thought that was the worst thing anyone could do in their lifetime.


A couple of students snickered. Jalal and his gang was after all, very well known around the entire college.


"Kids nowadays" Suri said shaking his heads and chuckling. "Anyways.. let's start with introductions!"


"I am Ria" the first girl who was chosen said.


"Well.. nice to meet you Ria" Mr. Suri said not too pleased with the lack of enthusiasm the students were showing.


And so on went the introductions, finally ending with Bablu stuttering his name. "B-Bablu."


"Nice to meet you too Bablu!!" Suri exclaimed before turning to write something on the board.


Jodha squinted so that she could read what Suri was writing.



" History is simply a mystery until you have got every single detail about it. And be assured that in this class we will solve every mystery that we can lay our hands on "


A bunch of students rolled their eyes at the words the teacher had written, while Jodha merely said, "Interesting!"



"Children!" Suri said. "In this class you all will learn some things beyond history. I will give you all real life lessons." When Suri said that, no one really got what he meant. No matter, by the end of the year they would leave History Class with knowledge far beyond history and books.


-*-


"Well, that was weird" Jodha heard a girl say to her friend when they were heading to their next class.


"See you guys" Jodha told Bablu and Ruks as she made her way to a different class.


-*-


Jodha sighed when she found out that they would already be starting a new project. Some teachers were just no fun. "Mam, may I go to the library to do some research?" she asked her teacher.


"Why not?" the teacher said, giving Jodha permission to visit the library.


Jodha asked the librarian for a book that she needed for her research and Jalal who was just entering heard it. The thing that really ticked him off was that she wanted the very book he had come there for.


"Actually Mam, I need that book" he said loudly. The librarian glared at him, reminding him to not make that much noise in the library.


"I am sorry Mam, but please I need that one copy you have" Jalal told her.


"Oye, who do you think you are?" Jodha said, as she wondered why he always appeared to make her life miserable. "I asked her for the book first!"


"Children, it does not matter" the librarian told them angrily. "The only copy of that book has been misplaced, who knows on which shelve it is?"


"But Mam, I really need that book urgently" Jodha pleaded.


"May I look for the book Madam?" Jalal asked her. The librarian looked at him as if he were crazy to look for a single book in that whole library.


"As you wish son, but I just suggest that you both find a different book."


"Whoever finds it first, gets to check out the book!" Jodha told Jalal as she immediately set her bag on a table and ran towards a shelf. Jalal also went to work as he he began on a shelf near Jodha's.


"What a coincidence!" the librarian muttered as she stared at the two students. "They both want the same book!" She was clearly flabbergasted.


Before long, Jodha and Jalal had already finished looking on a couple shelves of books. There was a girl nearby who was looking for a book and suddenly she accidentally knocked a book off the shelf.


"I am sorry!" the girl mouthed at the librarian who glared at her. This caught Jodha and Jalal's attention and they both looked towards the book laying on the floor. Both Jodha and Jalal looked at each other.


For a moment neither of them moved, completely frozen but then Jodha shouted, "It's MINE!!!" Jodha immediately barged towards the girl but Jalal was no less.


The girl who held onto that precious book was completely confused at what was happening. "What the.."


Both Jodha and Jalal got hold of one end of the book. "Gimme it!" Jodha wailed.

"Let-go-of it!" Jalal yelled. "It's mine!"


The librarian who noticed their fight, immediately rushed over. "Children!" she ordered. "Give me that book! It's very precious and you guys are on the verge of breaking it!"


Jodha and Jalal paid no heed to what the librarian was saying, so the librarian told the girl to go get the principal. The girl nodded and left without saying a word.


The librarian was watching both of them in shock as they continued to push and pull like little kids.



Finally, the poor book could take it no longer and it split into half. They were pulling with so much strength that they both ended up crashing into a shelf behind them. Jalal ended up knocking over two whole bookshelves, while Jodha pushed at least one.


"Oh noo!!" the librarian cried out.


"What have you done!!" Jalal yelled at Jodha.


Jodha was just about to reply when the principal's voice thundered, "STUDENTS!!! Into my office NOW!!"




Hope you all enjoyed reading this part. 😊 Do lemme know how it was.


Thanks,

Pookhi😳




Edited by Pookhi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Awesome
Blossom
Update
Dear
Pookhi am speechless
Awesome lovely woderful update
So so long so cute so sweet
U are an amazing writer
Yaar love u pookhi
I think the stalker is bablu
And story is so good an loving it
Update fast nxt part
Rregards
Anshita
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Wow! So long yet so awesome! Even though I didn't know what's going on...🤣
But yes! I truly loved it!
Awesome
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update
plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
awesome...library part was best continue soon nd do pm

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