Akdha SS: ~You are my Jaan~ Part 11 Page 33

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: arpita1226
She is my boss and I always reminds her about her res so I do my work honestly 😆

I guess it's ok then..😆

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Originally posted by: rima4ever
please pm me if u can 😊

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Originally posted by: marshi
Awesome story

Thanks!😊

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#24

Originally posted by: Anushka8722
Pookhi Pookhi Pookhi!
How I loved this story.. start was dhamakedaar!👏 Lil Jodha and Jalal were so cute.. and Jodha listening to Akbar and Jodha's story, too good yrr!😳 Phir she turned 18.. that scene was penned down very nicely sweetheart..!😃 And Jodha's happiness on getting enrolled in one of the best colleges in Mumbai was written beautifully.. you're such a good write yrr.. and someone was saying that MY updates look professional😡😆
Pranksters! Bakshi and Jalal.. hayee they were so very cute.. tiger face..😆 Jalal IS a good boy.. only thing is that he doesn't want anyone else to call him a good boy, though that's true.. why not, he's a good son, a good brother and I guess a good human being too!😳 Adham and Ruks.. what do I say?You transformed 2 of the biggest villains in the show (The rest being maham, Shariffudin,) into good good people!😲😲👏 waah!👏 And they did seem like good here... with Ruks being such a cute friend of Jodha and Adham being such a nice bro..❤️
All in all, you're a star and keep writing!👏⭐️ Thanks for the pm... love you a lot!🤗
-Anu

Anu Anu Anu😆🤗.
Yup I know they were cute na.😳
Your updates do look professional Anu!😛 I still think that!!
Yep, both bro-sis should win the prankster award!😃😆
Yeah, I transformed Ruks and Adham. But hey warning: I still haven't decided whether Adham is good or bad.😆
Me a star, you are praising me so much!😛😛(It feels good to know you liked it😆).
And hey Anu, thanks! To have such a great writer read my work is soo cool!😊

Love you too❤️,
Pookhi