Akdha SS: ~You are my Jaan~ Part 11 Page 33 - Page 3

Originally posted by: arpita1226

She is my boss and I always reminds her about her res so I do my work honestly 😆

Originally posted by: rima4ever

please pm me if u can 😊

Originally posted by: marshi

Awesome story

Originally posted by: Anushka8722

Pookhi Pookhi Pookhi!

How I loved this story.. start was dhamakedaar!👏 Lil Jodha and Jalal were so cute.. and Jodha listening to Akbar and Jodha's story, too good yrr!😳 Phir she turned 18.. that scene was penned down very nicely sweetheart..!😃 And Jodha's happiness on getting enrolled in one of the best colleges in Mumbai was written beautifully.. you're such a good write yrr.. and someone was saying that MY updates look professional😡😆

Pranksters! Bakshi and Jalal.. hayee they were so very cute.. tiger face..😆 Jalal IS a good boy.. only thing is that he doesn't want anyone else to call him a good boy, though that's true.. why not, he's a good son, a good brother and I guess a good human being too!😳 Adham and Ruks.. what do I say?You transformed 2 of the biggest villains in the show (The rest being maham, Shariffudin,) into good good people!😲😲👏 waah!👏 And they did seem like good here... with Ruks being such a cute friend of Jodha and Adham being such a nice bro..❤️

All in all, you're a star and keep writing!👏⭐️ Thanks for the pm... love you a lot!🤗

-Anu

Originally posted by: Pookhi

I guess it's ok then..😆

Originally posted by: arpita1226

I know 🥱

Originally posted by: arpita1226

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Originally posted by: arpita1226

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Originally posted by: -RuthShalini-

yes arpi is my most loyal member😃