Akdha SS: ~You are my Jaan~ Part 11 Page 33

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Maria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Awesome I loved the concept , good work plz continue soon

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aisha

@aisha.....11110

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

so unressing for chapter 1

firstly i wanna tell you that the tittle is what i loved the most!! - you are my jaan

i loved the starting of your story!! i mean the cute jodha is something which i loved the most, and her cute stubbornness for hearing the same story again and again!! and the answer which she gave was like wow!! i mean it was reallly a beautiful line!!! "I just feel connected to it"❤️

and coming to the small jalal!! uff this boy! he is just soo adorable!! aww i loved the line when he said that "I already have muscles see?" this line was really very cute!!

lolz!! the greedy jalal, chocolate milk!! yumm😆

ohk!! so now comes the leap!!

jodha turned 18!! 😲 i am jealous of her, i still have to go 3 months for that day of my life to come😆

jodha going to Mumbai!! wow!! but one thing which surprised me the most is that her bestest friend is ruks!! i mean noo🤣

Bharmal clicked his tongue in a disapproving manner. "Look Jodha, how much your mom is crying, she didn't cry that much even on her wedding day!"

this was damn funny🤣🤣

and finally the entry of my hero!! jalal

haawww but! bakshi painted his face,lolz it was fun reading it😆

and loved jodha's and ruks talks!!😛

hehhe!! jalal did it yeah jalal did it!!🥳😆

but wait is adham a grey character, i mean negative types??😲

overall i loved it, you are a great writer and as i said before too, you gave me a surprise by posting such a beautiful chappy

will unres for chapter 2 tomorrow😛

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: marshi
Awesome
Blossom
Update
Dear
Pookhi am speechless
Awesome lovely woderful update
So so long so cute so sweet
U are an amazing writer
Yaar love u pookhi
I think the stalker is bablu
And story is so good an loving it
Update fast nxt part
Rregards
Anshita