16~NOT just a passionate affair~ 57 (2 parts) 18 oct-To new beginnings - Page 4

Originally posted by: ..Anusha..

Everything you do matters on some level here Magal. I hope my take isn't too brief.

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Originally posted by: ..Anusha..

yes thanks for that. All my parama rahasiyams exposed now.

Originally posted by: ..Anusha..

Magal...when are you doing a take then?? PM me the page when you do.

Originally posted by: divyavm

In the car now planning it in my head... It will be on the first page only ... Without erasing the comment Lashy threatened me not too

and when are you reading my post on October 17th?

Originally posted by: ..Anusha..

Lashy thank you for writing such composed and properly paced chapters!
Thank you chitti... Thank you *blush*

I took this as the starting gun ...

I can sense you breathed a sigh of relief at not witnessing a Yash Chopra ICU scene 😆 (hope I am right)

How was he supposed to speak to a bunch of hospital professionals about the kind of relationship he shared with Jodha Singh - and NOT come across like a blubbering sentimental fool while doing so?

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of the marathon he was at first not quite able to grasp and ended up sprinting and breaking down...until Jo's big brother gave him a cup of tea and got him thinking about a marathon. It was matter of fact and just well told from Jalal's point of view. I could connect with every single thought he had.

THANKS dearie... yes sometimes not only the 'kind' of advice but 'who' it comes from also leaves a mark. I think it left more of a mark because it came from bhaiyya... it wouldn't have had the same effect had it come from Abdul (who possibly would have said the same thing in other words)

Wonderful ..and I read this around 6 in the morning and was in no way agitated ... just very calm. Must be because I'm more confident in you as a writer than I am in the characters that are your creation. I'v got a sense of how you think and your sensibilities, so I can dive trusting in that.

Awww thanks! 😳 Hope I can take this as a compliment

Originally posted by: ..Anusha..

I'll do it now 😡

Originally posted by: ..Anusha..

I'll do it now 😡

Originally posted by: ..Anusha..

Lashy thank you for writing such composed and properly paced chapters!

I took this as the starting gun ...

How was he supposed to speak to a bunch of hospital professionals about the kind of relationship he shared with Jodha Singh - and NOT come across like a blubbering sentimental fool while doing so?

...

of the marathon he was at first not quite able to grasp and ended up sprinting and breaking down...until Jo's big brother gave him a cup of tea and got him thinking about a marathon. It was matter of fact and just well told from Jalal's point of view. I could connect with every single thought he had.

Wonderful ..and I read this around 6 in the morning and was in no way agitated ... just very calm. Must be because I'm more confident in you as a writer than I am in the characters that are your creation. I'v got a sense of how you think and your sensibilities, so I can dive trusting in that.

Originally posted by: lashy

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