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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Wait a second, I came back to think I'd be seeing rejoicing...

ye kyaa sab cry cry kar rahe hain...

aanchal you too

Chalo I'm going to consider this happy tears

*big big hugs dear* to ALL of you!

Damn Samy - did you have to call this the BEST part?

Now the ones ahead are deffo gonna feel feeka... 😆

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AbHer_neha

@AbHer_neha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Kya chapter tha😭😭😭

I'll be back.😃

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hemakeerti

@hemakeerti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Lashy.. uff all kinds of emotional rush in my tiny brain drove me crazy while reading this update.. whom should I start with.. Jalal or Jodha's family or Abdul and Renu.. uff uff.. I need time to comment but before that I want to say one thing.. THIS UPDATE PROFESSES IT'S TRULY AN EPIC LOVE STORY OF TWO WONDERFUL SOULS..

And The most rejoicing lines in NJAPA goes to ..

Abbe where are you?'

'Just out of the phsio appointment...'

'In your own language' Abdul sounded thrilled 'F**k the physio appointment... and get to the hospital... NOW!'

'W...wh...' his jaw dropped 'What are you saying?'

Ya Allah! The words that followed were a daze. The news bloody unbelievable. He removed the Bluetooth off his ear and let the device slip off. So the last words he'd heard would continue to resonate for some time. His forehead subconsciously rested against the steering wheel. As he took a few moments to breathe. To celebrate. To scream. To shout. To laugh - all of it in indescribable relief.

The traffic-light eventually turned green.

@green.. what a symbolism.. muah...

Edited by hemakeerti - 10 years ago

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bokul

@bokul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

congo for the new thread

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..Anusha..

@..Anusha..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Lashy thank you for writing such composed and properly paced chapters!

I took this as the starting gun ...

How was he supposed to speak to a bunch of hospital professionals about the kind of relationship he shared with Jodha Singh - and NOT come across like a blubbering sentimental fool while doing so?

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of the marathon he was at first not quite able to grasp and ended up sprinting and breaking down...until Jo's big brother gave him a cup of tea and got him thinking about a marathon. It was matter of fact and just well told from Jalal's point of view. I could connect with every single thought he had.

Wonderful ..and I read this around 6 in the morning and was in no way agitated ... just very calm. Must be because I'm more confident in you as a writer than I am in the characters that are your creation. I'v got a sense of how you think and your sensibilities, so I can dive trusting in that.

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: divyavm
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Writer-e-khaas, you have outdone yourself ... Amazing! I had tears sitting in the middle of the car

Oy.. don't change these comments... loved it... I've never seen you leave a comment like this elsewhere... it's personal to me... so don't change it... for my sake...😳

Btw, hope you read it after the colour-formatting et al.. or wouldn't have made full-sense na... 😕

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..Anusha..

@..Anusha..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: lashy

Oy.. don't change these comments... loved it... I've never seen you leave a comment like this elsewhere... it's personal to me... so don't change it... for my sake...😳

Btw, hope you read it after the colour-formatting et al.. or wouldn't have made full-sense na... 😕

ohoo Magal hasn't done her take on lashy yet. But this is a good preview. 😊

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: ..Anusha..

ohoo Magal hasn't done her take on lashy yet. But this is a good preview. 😊

Chitti your magal is spoiling me with her takes! 😆 so, I want those too...

but this stays... 😆

Edited by lashy - 10 years ago

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..Anusha..

@..Anusha..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: lashy

Chitti your magal is spoiling me with her takes! 😆 so, I want those too...

but this stays... 😆

She will get to it soon.

and you ignore my take ? Fine . This is what I was talking about... nobody else's comments matter.

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divyavm

@divyavm

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: lashy

Oy.. don't change these comments... loved it... I've never seen you leave a comment like this elsewhere... it's personal to me... so don't change it... for my sake...😳

Btw, hope you read it after the colour-formatting et al.. or wouldn't have made full-sense na... 😕

Is that a merratal? 😉

I will save this on top and then add my take ... Or else you would never find it 😆

Yes, I read it with the right formatting ... But I will re-read before my take 😳