15~NOT just a passionate affair~ 56 (2 PT) 7 Oct - A fitting END?

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

So the other patient could not be revived and thank u for this.. HE finally met his befitting END..

Hmmm first time... you made a wrong guess sweetie... 🤗 I did have my thoughts when I penned it down but thought I'll let friends figure it out...

When they refer to someone as 'cannot be revived'... it also talks of a patient who slips into a coma - i.e. that she couldn't be revived into consciousness! 😊

If the professor did die

1) He'd have met a premature and quick end... swift end - too easy for all the troubles he'd given these two in the past year... nah he's been immobilized (and strangely long long ago you'd sent me a pm, remember? Saying you wanted that this guy suffer like this - not to die so easily...like you already knew the story... I was wondering how you'd react when you read it now...)4😉

2) Plus, chances are the prof would be in a different hospital.. he fell on the other side of the building... already out in the street.. so he would have reached quicker... to whichever hosp they could take him

3) Ja's carefully thought out plan was such that the stalker DIDN'T die so Jalal never faced many legal repercussions for this

The patient the docs are referring to is Jo -

And the fact that this chapter touched you so much made me want to read it all over again - school run morning ke time pe..and for the first time in the past year a NJAPA update kept me awake ALL night.. I couldn't sleep because of that Blue part.. strange na...

thanks a lottt Jhanu

Coming back with detailed comments soon 🤗

Edited by lashy - 10 years ago

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Samanika

@SpringBreakers

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Di, that was a very nail-biting finish to the ordeal!

I loved the chapter mainly for Jalal's presence of mind, and that inspite of all the cruel thing the professor had done, he chose not to kill him because it would be detrimental to his future only. But the grease idea was fab! And the professor had cunningly managed to collect a crowd around the place so that if anything ever happens, Jalal would get the blame😡 But he deserved his fate, and he got something worse than death; handicap which would deter him from doing the same things that he did to an innocent student!😡

As for the entire key-swallowing, I have no words. This professor is a sick psycho and he needs to be sent to a mental asylum! His junoon and obsession to make Jodha his made him do the sickest and the most deplorable things!😡 He even physically assaulted her!😡

Jalal was terribly injured but he made sure that Jodha got an ambulance before him or the sicko professor. They have an irreversible bond, and they will be inseparable, no matter what Jodha's family tries to do! Hopefully, by the next part, the police will be informed of Ram Charan's deeds.

The last part was a bit saddening. I hadn't expected that she would go into a coma because of her head injuries. Plus Jalal also woke up after three days. Was Jodha's family informed of condition soon? And Jalal's mother was already tensed as we know.

The next part says 'To New Beginnings' Should we expect Jodha to be out of coma? Or Jodha's family accepting Jalal? I am foreseeing that you may take a leap also😉

Anyways, this chapter was amazing. Lub you di!🤗 And update soon!😉

Edited by justlovetv - 10 years ago

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anshita priyadarshni

@marshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Omg jo in coma plz recover her fast totally loved it lashy di was so sad but uare the best

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
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yeah why not but Jahnu you're banned from making guesses right?😉

As he touches her, Sleeping Beauty will open her eyes and smile up at him then slowly draw her hand up to his and gently pat his palm.. He senses something in hand. He looks down.. There he will find "The lucky Talisman"😆

Veeery poetic sweetheart...😳 but cannot happen...

Jodha would have had surgery ... (brain surgery)

In hospital, patients who go into x-ray itself (forget OT) have to remove everything on them - shoes, jewellery, clothes, rings, metals - everything 😉 the taveez would most certainly not be on her...

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

But this is the LAST question mark in this story - if someone's able to guess (Jhanu strictly not allowed 😡) how Jo comes back to consciousness... then I'd say you're one champ! 👍🏼

Cloos are in the back story! Got to do with Ja-Jo only

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Preet

@rishbala3018

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Congrats on the new thread Lashy!!
Very emotional update...will give lamba comment soon!!

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

lashy🤗 i love you chellam❤️

It's just an OUTSTANDING chappy👏👍🏼

I'm neither sad or happy but I'm sure I'm at peace.. There are lots of "Phew" moments..Finally stalker the darkness is out of their life and our bravo yet intelligence hero managed it very well without being guilt before the law and then our love birds finally out of the hell. See their friends... the precious GEM of their life...only they have to undergo some sort of medical care for their physical injuries the rest would heal by the love❤️

'If she can't be mine, she can't be anyone else's...and definitely NOT YOURS!', ' a fear worse than losing his own life was the fear of his enemies winning' such an over possessiveness and sadistic morals that even lead him to swallow the key.😲 OMG..it's disaster to deal with this kind of psychopath in real life.😡

'But, beggars can't be choosers!' The stalker underestimated his student. The rage, The avenge, The warrior.. Jalal The Hero.. The wise thinking even at an unfortunate juncture. What a man you are.

"On that victorious note, he glanced up at the grey night skies - his face reflecting a brief spell of serenity 'Karma's a bitch, isn't she?' he smirked under his breath. As the evening breeze ruffled a tuft of his auburn hair. As another drop of blood trickled down the sides of his face. As he stood tall, he resembled a warrior at the top of his game." wow i was dumbfounded here..hats off to you..

After the mission done the way he was feeling his pain.. so realistic lashy..

'As long as the blood's mine and not hers... I can't be bothered...' Wow jalal👏 there is no doubt why our banjaras keep on fighting for you..hope hereafter the intensity of their fights will reach it's spike.. the way he's making sure jodha should serve first, his confession, that kiss and Talisman moment.. it was terrifically mesmerizing

Jalal you've another two GEMS as well "Abdul" 'using his body like the flat head of a hammer' and "Renu" the way she managed to hide the blood, the power speech, continuously looking for an alternate option, the tom boy... you stole the show again Renu👍🏼

'Abbu... I'm meant to take care of all of them... but, who is meant to take care of ME?'
That 12year Boy, his abbu and girl.. it's all like a blue magic.. I've no words to tell you.. I just kneel down at your feet.👏

The recovery of jalal is so real and his concern towards ammi and then question about Jodha.. all are well written👍🏼

'She has slipped into a coma yaar...' I don't know why.. but I'm not that sad but I couldn't help myself refrain from thinking of "Sleeping Beauty" story here..I'm bit overconfident here.. Jodha! She has spunk.. she'll comeback for her love, her prince and I'm eagerly waiting for that day

and lashy i already used all the adjectives i know so far and i don't want to repeat again.😉 In Simple words "You rock and keep on rocking"👍🏼

At last "Waiting for next update and update soon"😆 well without this line, my post can't be complete🤣

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Deepa

@Deepasub

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Well written chapter.
Like Ja quote "beggers can't be choose". So well said. Why people like the Prof think that they will get help.
Well I only hope Jodha recovers and we have a happy ending with Jo in Jalal's loving embrace!
Can't wait for the next update.

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: divyavm
res... phew made it in page 2

And I remembered what I forgot last time 😆

How exhausting Lashy ... I need a break before doing my take 5

I am sure you need a break after that update

And what a beautiful, beautiful moment in blue font 🤗

As I'd mentioned to another friend earlier... that part seemed to keep me awake the whole night for whatever reason... not because I was sad... or happy... but maybe because I turned too philosophical 😆

Will wait for you dear... (like Ja is waiting for Jo😆) 🤗

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: ..Anusha..
. I've had about 4 hours sleep so Lashy this is your fault.
But, why? 😲

Renu is of course my hero here
Yeah... your heart does go out to her... actually my heart went out to Ja, Jo, Renu, Abdul and Meera for all their roles... they all played their parts, didn't they? 😳
and Jalal was being Jalal every inch and that's how it should be.

The part in blue touched me in extremely positive places of the heart.
Awww thanchooo I loved that part too...

...and that's all I will say for now.
🤗 thanks chitti

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